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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

Awesome...well written update dear...I really enjoyed each & every bit of it...
looking forward to know the next...

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

awesome part di

really emotional

hope geet will understand maan's POV n maan also tries to give this relation his best

n 1 thing i personally love about the geet in this ff is that she didnt care about her exceptations when she saw that maan was tired n also she didnt cry even though she was very much hurt by maan's words

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divareena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

please include me in your updates.

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Awwwhhh i cried for Geet !
my heart goes out to her !

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

again a heart wrenching update di but at d same tym really beautifully penned with superb dialogues...
my heart went out to see so much care concern n understanding in geet...
i lyked maan's reaction d guilt he felt seeing d beautiful person in front of him whos dreams he has shattered n d way he spoke out his truth due to his guilt...but di geet's reaction to his words was highlight of d update i truly luved her reaction n neva expected it...
i truly felt bad seeing geet in d same position d whole night i knew shes gonna be truly shattered ones maan confesses to her...
[:'(] [:'(]
hmmm so maan is asking for some more tym n gives her d right to take decision for them...m sure geet is not weak she'll try to gain maan's love n be wid him forever...
i luved d parent's house bit di it was really superb n awsome...
i truly luved d update di...
luvya tc...

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Rupa

@shinonome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Geet sure is strong be hard maan Lo maula hi Mahon SETI hai

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Mina420

@Mina420

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

First it was 😭 😭 then it was 🥺 🥺 and at the end... 😕 😕

... I had actually thought Geet would not react so strong towards Maan but then I couldn't know how some in this situation reacts. I just hope that when Geet talks to her mom, she calms down. I understand that Maan did not right and more over, he maybe shouldn't have said it out at that moment... But while I understand Geet, I feel worse for Maan. He is not only thinking about his mistake but also bearing the guilt for doing this to Geet...

Waiting for next part... what will happen???

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evasumi

@evasumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Ritzy thank you fo the updates.

Chapter 7:

Loved the way you described that nostalgic feelings of Maan.. He needed to go through that if he did not then it would not wash away from him. It was painful but it was necessary and you did woderful job with the details..

Chapter 8:

Felt bad for Geet.. listening to her husband telling her that he is in still love with his dead fiance.. The shattering of her dreams and her 1st night.

But well that is the story's main theme so I will wait for the declaration from Maan to Geet that he loves with all his heart body and soul :)

But one way I think it is ok as Geet does not want Maan under the shadow of another woman. When Maan comes to her it has to be with his full sense that this is the lady he loves and that is why he is giving her the moon and the stars..

Maan is dealing with much more deep sorrow and though he knows that he is hurting Geet and he has no right to used her that way but still he was honest as in fact he does not know his own situation right now.. His guilt shows that he is decent man and that he cares for his wife weather he believs it or not right now. but it will develop in him..

Going through all the ceremonies brought back deep hurt and sorrow and he was in that circumstances again and that took over him as he never was out of that..

But I think what he blurted out to Geet was the present situation of his heart. On the surface it is like churning up but deep down in his heart he has the conncection with Geet which Geet will have to pull out with her TLC and with deep understanding and also she will have to give him lot of space and by just staying in BG and let him realize it himself . When he said yes to her he actually was moving on... but the same circumstances pulled him down again and it was so heavy on him that he was unable to stand above the surface..

I felt like Maan has started to swim above the water and got caught in the whirlpool of past once again and he was pulled in the center of all that anguish.. and for him it was so heavy that he just even forgot his desire to swim and now only Geet can pull him but for that she needs to strong that she can fight the force of that pull and make him swim again in the safe water...

Would love to hear what mom says to her daughter.. a very wise discussion that Geet will ask Maan to come back and fight for her man herself ...

Tough battle ahead.. love this strong geet..

Edited by evasumi - 13 years ago

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

mindblowing update

loved geet 😊😊😊😊😊

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#870

Amazing update Ritzy. U have made Geet so strong that she did not even shed a tear. My heart aches for her. Kya gift diya Maan ne usse SR raat pe. But I cannot even hate him.😭Poor soul, even he is going through so much pain. And now guilt added.

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