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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87



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dunno wat to say di it was a exceptionally written update...d way u written flashbacks n connected it to present was amazing...

but di it was really sad n emotional part...m still choked wid maan's pain n geet's excitement n expectation is really making me scared for her...kya hoga uska di i know shes strong n she'll face every situation bravely dat will come in her way but still shes a girl whos newly married n her heart is full of expectations...i hope maan use zyada takleef na pahonchaye...

i luv d way savitri devi tried to make everything go right...n meera's n dev's support was really important for maan...

lets c suhag raat mein kya hoga...

luvya di...


I know honey...it was very emotional

Thanks for your nice words and don't worry..>Maan realises his fault and will not be too harsh on her...let's see how she manages her expectations...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Awesome dear. Me crying, but loved. Deep down somewhere I knew this would happen. Waise to u said that Geet is a strong character, and I truly hope she does not shatter when Maan tells her the truth of not being able to accept the marriage. Hope she helps him to come out of his past.



Can't really say more than let's see how this journey progresses...but he won't be too rude and she is under no pressure to accept him...so it will not be a zabardasti ka rishta
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchshah

OMG... Maan's illusion that he can move on has been broken n wat a timing?? Brilliantly written piece, i m worried for Geet but the way u have potrayed Maan's turmoil...i cant blame him too!

looking forward to how this story unfolds from now...but i m getting highly attached to this maan-geet😊
Thanks for the update n PM...


Thanks Dear...going forward also, you will not be able to hate him because he is also in pain...you won't be abale to love him also because Geet will be in pain too...I know...Monster me...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

loved it...
beautiful n amazing update...
im viewing dat moment whn poonam was in hospital n wht happened aftr dat...whie watching dis prt i always cried regarding hw many times i watched it...i knw its really hard to move on whn u loved sooo much in ur life...but he need to try...not fr him only but mainly fr geet...i hope k maan will understand dis...
thank u so much fr such n lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...


Thanks dear...

the whole concept of this FF was in mind for a long time and was triggered when I was watching the rerun of the movie...I always wondered what would have happened to prem if Poonam had not recovered
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

wow...m speechless, unable to think further...i knw he has a past and he relived it...horrific past bt wht is geet's fault?????? m so much tensed...i dont want him to do anything vdout emotions and dont want him to lie either m sure he wont...


i want both of dem happy though it might take time...bt pls maan come out of d past...poonam isnt der, geet is...she is alive and will b hurt...

m nt sure how to put my feelings in words...pls updt soon...



You have put it really well...she is so nice that he can't lie to her... neither does he want to give her pain...it is an impossible situation really
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

emotional and painful update..

Its not easy for maan to go thru the same circumstances where his life had make a U turn..
acoording to him poonam s his wife and his mind s not accepting any other girl as his wife..
geet only noes poonam as his past...
she doesn't noe hw much maan s attached to her..
so i think maan shud make her understand his helplessness..
geet s a very strong girl and she vl help in overcoming ds situation...



It's not that easy honey...why should she just accept and try to move on? In the end she will have to be understanding but should she just take any crap he dishes out at her? I don't think so. Geet is a strong girl with her own mind and she will not just yes to everything he says meekly
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



wonderful updates...

U have described Maan's dilemma perfectly...

I understand it is very hard and painful for him to move forward but Geet also have some expectations from her marriage...

let's see how their married life will proceed...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...


Thanks Dear...yes they both will have some thinking to do and both have to try otherwise this relationship can not progress...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Sometimes, it hit me why does he always "drag" Poonam in? 😕😆

Can't help it... I practically see Maan's feeling - imagining it 😛
beautifully written as usual 👏👏👏
Yay! He's feeling guilty...I hope he doesn't make her to sleep on the sofa 😆...lol...
But very short part though short and amazing as usual 😃😳
continue soon! 😊
awesome update ⭐️


Dear, if Maan dares to ask her to sleep on sofa...she will throw him out of his room...she is no meek girl with pati parmeshwar feeling...she may care for him but injustice...my Geet...No way...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

awsome update


the way u portray the feeling of maan during the ceremony

nd dadi feeling


nd plus the way poonam family take part part in the ceremonry


awsome



bt feeling sad for geet..whts her fault..bt true its difficult to forget ur 1st love



Thanks Dear...

It is just destiny for her dear...things happen...when a girl marries, she can never predict what ill be her future...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tintinu

brilliant dear,beautifuly written the emotions of maan

ya its really difficult to move in life if someone very close leave us for ever
untill... we get that spl one to fill the void space still the scar will be there but god heal it with the very spl one as medicine
just loved the part da,u r one fab n blessed writter ,i just love ur work
god bless u dear


Thank you dear...You are so bang on...hope to write to match your expectations

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