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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#791

Awesome , brilliant part
loved it
finally maaneet married
but maan's inner dilemma is well portrayed
continue soon

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Maanforever

@Maanforever

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#792

OMG...👏.. awesome part😛.😃..cannot just wait for the next . please try to post it soon...Thanks for the pm

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#793

emotional update. past was painful but present even though geet is strong can she take this from maan. v can understand maans pain but feel sorry for geet. brilliantly written.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#794

THIS WAS SO SAD AND UPSETTING

GEET MARRIED HIM IN GOOD FAITH AS SHE WAS ATTRACTED TO HIM

BUT HE REGRETS THE MARRIAGE

HE CANT FORGET POONAM AND ALL HIS FFELINGS FOR POONAM HAVE COME UP AGAIN

HOW WILL HE DEAL WITH THIS MARRIAGE NOW

HOW MUCH HE IS HURTING

AND HOW WILL GEET COPE WITH HIS GUILT ABOUT THIS WEDDING

LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED HIS FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#795

great part

sweet wedding ceremony

looking forward to their first night and to see if maan will accept her

con't soon

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Ankeeta Gupta

@dreamy

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#796

good ... but feel bad for maneet ...

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myramabin

@myramabin

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#797

awesome dear hope to get next update soon

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shristi1

@shristi1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Awesome update.

Maan got 2 know that he is not able 2 move on.

Feeling bad 4 geet n maan.

continue soon.

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: ritzy09
He walked with heavy feet towards the door and stopped momentarily before taking a resolve and pushing the door open. But even steel walls would have broken down seeing Geet as she sat waiting for him. "What has he done?" His already burdened soul suffocated further and he felt as if breath knocked out of him.

I think this is my favorite quote from your whole story so far! It really encompasses everything Maan is feeling at this time. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm not too clear on exactly why Geet agreed to this marriage, so I don't know how badly she will feel his regret. Looking forward to your next update!

Pooja