MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 1 - Page 64

Meethi awaz me gaaliyan.. Oye hoye!

Maan came 4 d exhibition.Geet is happy.Good part

awesome update di...
loved it...
awesome family bonding...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm

Amazing update Di just too good

part 6
nice part...
Geet is bringing some smile on Maan's face nowadays...
cont soon...

wow im waiting for more to come in maaneet life di

fab update di
i love maaneet together hope u will update soon

Ritzy:

Just caught up on your last two updates. I am speechless at how sensitively you are moving this story forward; it has all the elements that we experience in our lives and what makes it so interesting – love, pain, success, anguish, understanding, despair, laughter, and most importantly, HOPE! Geet comes across as an amazingly wise and mature person and at the same time, full of joy with a remarkable zest for life. I am sure, her mental strength and emotional stability is what is going to stitch back and thaw Maan's shattered and frozen heart and restore all his "Ehsaas" back. I am waiting for that day and update when we will get to "hear" his full throated and joyous laugh again.

The problem is - -you write so incredibly well that we are anxious to race through your story and get to that highly anticipated, "happy ending". At the same time, I also want to slowly savor, through your magical story telling powers, the joys of traveling along with Maan and Geet on their journey through unspoken longings and desires, hurting and making up, misunderstanding, self-recriminations, Geet's love and support, family time and bonding with the rest of the family (just like the way your described it in your earlier FF), Maan's opening up… and finally towards happiness and his salvation. So no, instant Maggi noodle for me; I am happy with the slowly and lovingly cooked Mah di daal that you are stirring up in your Kahaani Krockpot! J

Your women characters have great inner strength and self-determination to shape their future and at the same time, they handle their choices and decisions with such grace and maturity. In my opinion, this is the real hallmark of feminist.

This strong, chulbuli, talented, suljhi hui, loving woman is exactly what the silent, neeras Maan needs. Right now, his mind has accepted the practical aspects of marrying Geet. She now has to work on his heart; she will and I will be waiting for the next and the next and next.. updates. Please don't rush to the end and epilogue!

Your following comment brought tears to my eyes "Geet studied Maan as he uttered those words. She was once again drawn to the depth of his chocolate eyes. But this time there was a yearning for hope along with the dark pain." Couldn't have described his inner anguish and desire any better.

"She smiled and finally faced him – "And also that I appreciate your honesty. I truly believe that there is nothing more important than truth in any relationship be it friendship or anything else"". So true. Noting is more binding and valuable in a relationship than trust and truth.

starting scene was brilliant jab geet ne rahul se pucha k kya kuch seconds ki mulakat mein koi shaks dil mein ghar kar sakhta hai i loved this question of hers Piya: Yes, completely agree with your above observations -- there will be times, when Geet's expectation will trip and hurt her but that itself will make her even more determined to help her man out of his darkness and into the glow and light that she will bring into the relationship and his life.