My random OS Scribblings!!! CREATIVE THRD Pt 8 p27 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishha

hey am sorry i wrote the next part i mean part 4 if you are willing to write am ready to delete mine

let me know you want me delete that😃



hey no Problem Sweety... u dnt delete ur Part... i'll write part 5😃... infact its half done nd i'll make some modifications in it... BTW i Loved ur part very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@jazz
part 1
wow interesting...
Shruti thanks for the link...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear my part 5 is almost done... i m going for dinner nd will post it after dinner... is it okay wid u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shruti
part 3
awesome dear...

PS - do post this link on the FF thread when anyone updates this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Dear my part 5 is almost done... i m going for dinner nd will post it after dinner... is it okay wid u all

eagerly waiting dear post soon ofcourse after your dinner
i will wait till then
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@nisha
part 4
nice...
what is Daadi hiding?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krndr

@nishha nice part dear

thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok nisha m back after dinner nd my part is also completed... gonna post it in 10 mins. really nervous for it...
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

ok nisha m back after dinner nd my part is also completed... gonna post it in 10 mins. really nervous for it...

its ok yaar don't be nervous just post it
i know its going to be rocking...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5:

Dadimaa stopped wid dat seeing a tearful Maan. She realizes dat its not d right thing to tell everything to Maan so she decided to hide d real fact from him

Here comes d another shock of his lyf. Wasn't all dat enough dat he was seeing since morning dat now fate is giving him yet another shock? He came to know about Geet Handa in morning, den he had been informed dat she was his wife nd dey both were madly in Love. Before he could know anything further he was told dat his wife is no more in d world nd nw add to his miseries he has been informed dat once he had lost his memories nd gained it in d same accident in which his wife died.

"But Dadimaa said dat she was not ready for d Marriage before den hw come she ends up marrying me? Was she after my money? But Adi said dat we were madly in Love wid each other? Wat happened den? Are we really a blissful couple after marriage? If yes den y did she wrote in her Diary dat dis is the end of her Life nd dreams? Dere's definitely a missing puzzle in dis story but what?"

All dis questions were running in his mind making his head feel heavy. D bombard of questions in his mind was making him restless. He wanted to know each nd everything about Geet Handa oops Geet Maan Singh Khurana.

He closed his eyes in frustration only to get some foggy images in front of his eyes. he saw a couple sitting at d beach side in each other's embrace, den he saw dat d guy was running behind some girl to catch her. Dey were laughing nd enjoying. Den he saw dem dancing while he was holding her in his embrace

"I Love you Maan" he heard a melodious voice but couldn't able to see d source of voice. He was feeling restless by each nd every passing second. Hw hard he tried to atleast see dat image which is blurred in his mind but he failed each nd Everytym.

He holds his head between his hands as d pain was getting unbearable to him due to putting so much pressure on his mind because of sudden trail of incidents. Nd before he could understand anything he passed out.

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On d other corner of city two persons were sitting in d room of a big house holding d glass of vine in dere hands discussing on some serious matter.

Girl: Bro. hw much more tym will it take?

"Relax my sweet Sis. You get really impatient at tymes" he said while taking a sip from his vine.

"How Long Bro. I have been waiting for whole three years. But still Maan is not mine. I thought dat after accident I'll get him but I still haven't get him" she said irritatingly

"Patience darling Patience. He'll be yours very soon. Nd Ab to Geet bhi zinda nahi hai so u can get him wenever u want." He said while relaxing on couch

Girl: But Bro. R u sure dat Geet is no more. I mean police haven't got her body yet.

Boy: m very much sure sweetheart because d way dat accident took place it's difficult for anyone to survive. Maan was lucky dat he survived from dis accident.

"But kya faayda Bro. we r still over dere where we started. Neither I got Maan nor u r able to take over his empire." She said wid a tinge of disappointment

"Sab ho jayega sis. Just wait for d right tym. Maan is very much dependent on me nw a days. He thinks dat I m his best friend nd is taking gud care of his business but least he knows dat m eating his business internally just like a termite." He said wid an evil smirk.

"But wat if his memory comes back nd he remembers her, den he'll understand everything. He'll cum to know dat we were behind his accident nd destruction of his lyf." she said wid a fear

"Aisa Kuch nahi hoga kyunki Maine Savitri Devi ke dimaag mein itna darr baitha diya hai dat she'll never try to remind Maan of anything as she thinks dat it can lead him to his death or brain hemorrhage. So we r all safe" he said while taking a last sip of his vine.

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"Wat r u saying Adi? Is it true? Yash asked worriedly

"Yes Yash. Dadimaa told him about his memory loss nd Geet's accident after which Maan sir has been passed out nd still haven't gained consciousness. But yash Dadimaa has not told Maan the whole truth yet. He's still unknown from d real fact. Nd I m waiting for Maan sir to gain consciousness so dat I can tell him further" Adi gave him d piece of information which he came to know.

"Ok Adi keep giving me d news further. Nd inform me as soon as Maan regain consciousness" Yash sighed nd cuts d call.

He looked at Meera who was busy in playing wid Ranjiv

"I can't tell anything to her rite nw. already she was too much stressed due to Geet. nd after dat she had to cook up lots of stories to Ranjiv about his parents. I should wait first till Maan gain his consciousness. Who knows any miracle will happen after dat." Yash said to himself nd goes to other room

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"Geet, Geet come out from wherever you are or else if I found u den u'll not be spared." Maan said while searching her through fogs.

"Koshish karke dekh lo Maan. but u'll not find me." She said while giggling

"Challenging Maan Singh Khurana? Now just wait nd watch" he said nd goes towards other side. Geet peeps from behind tree nd giggles seeing his plight. Just den she felt a jerk nd before she could know anything she found herself trapped in his iron steel arms.

"Maan" she moaned as he pulled her closer to him tightening his grip around her

"I told u it's impossible to escape from MSK. Nw get ready for punishment." He said in a husky voice nd started to lean closer to her. Geet closes her eyes in anticipation of his next move

Just wen he was about to kiss her he felt dat someone pulled her away from him in a jerk. He opens his eyes only to find someone dragging her away from him while he was calling him for help.

"Maan!!!! Maan!!!! Pls save me. He'll take me away from u" she called him feeling helpless.

"Geet, Geet nothing will happen to u. no one can take u away from me" he said while moving towards her but every step he took towards her she goes more far from him

"MAAN!!!!!!!!!!!" she called out loud for d last tym before disappearing into d fog.

"GEETTT!!!!!" he called out her name as he gained from his consciousness nd gets up panting heavily.



ok so dis is it nw over to next writer... azz nd nishaa hope i did justice to it... if not den pls tell me i'll not hesitate to delete it...


Luv Aakriti


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