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I was stood at the side of the set, waiting for my cue from the director, Nissar Parvez, to come on. From afar, I could see him, stood with his arms folded over his chest, in a woolly jacket even though we were shooting in warm spring weather.
'I wonder what I should say to him, outside of being our characters. Should I say anything to him? This is our first scene together. Maybe I should say something to him. Maybe I shouldn't. he looks angry. Wait, he might be angry because Maan is angry. Maan, right? I was confused. Damn, I can't even remember his character's name! That will make me look so professional. Drashti Dhami, forgetting the lead male character's name.'
I itched to look at my script, but it was laid on the floor, a good few feet away from where we were shooting.
"Drashti, when I signal, you run towards Gurmeet & plead him to help you, okay?"
"Yep, I got it. Geet runs to'" I trailed off, hoping he would fill in the void & I could remember the goddamn name.
But he hadn't heard my last sentence, & shouted action as I waited for my signal. I got a nod from the director, then proceeded to run as the four goons behind me chased Geet.
None of them were even cute. Total let down.
I ran, flailing my arms around, trying to look as distressed as Geet must have felt & bumped into Gurmeet. He was good, no - great at being angry ' he was giving me the most evil looks ever.
Were they directed at me?!
I was famed for my bubbly nature & friendly aura. Everyone back at DMG loved me. My cast members I had been shooting with for the past few weeks loved me.
He couldn't be that arrogant & pompous. His character is shooting daggers at Geet. Yep, that must be it.
I remembered my lines, thankfully, & as the director had said, he shot me some more angry looks before pushing me away, as his character was intended to do. I ran off in the opposite direction, the goons still chasing me.
"CUT!"
Relieved, I stopped running & walked back to where NP was sat, under an umbrella. The heat was scorching. I was jealous of Gurmeet who stood there in a sleeveless vest, even if it was woolly. At least his arms were cool. I was boiling under the shalwar kameez.
"Ok Drashti, you can start setting up for the next shot, which is where you fall into the water & Maan saves you."
Maan! That was the name! I was glad he finally mentioned it, to avoid embarrassment.
I walked away as I heard Gurmeet receiving tips on how to shot for his single shot.
Half an hour later, I was prepared.
I had gazed out onto the water from the serene location they had brought us to.
It didn't look that deep. I could swim.
Besides, Geet wouldn't need to swim. All I had been told to do was to cry out for help repeatedly & Maan would dive in to save me.
"Ready Drashti?" NP. I nodded.
"Now remember, your dupatta gets caught onto a branch, you attempt to take it off & stumble, that's when you fall into the river behind you."
"Got it," I confirmed.
"Okay, ready, set & action!"
I ran away from the goons, & made sure my dupatta caught onto the branch. Thankfully , it did. This had to be completed in one take, so I wouldn't have to get wet more than once.
Think Geet, I told myself as I looked scared & helpless. I let myself rock back as I pulled the dupatta, then with a splash, my body hit the water.
It was delightfully cold.
Enjoying the cool, I hadn't realised that Gurmeet had been given orders to dive in. I only noticed when I heard the splashing of his arms moving & could see him swimming towards me.
'Nooo! It's lovely & cold in here!'
"GURMEET GO UNDERWATER!" NP called from the top of the cliff through his speakerphone.
'Dhubne de!' was the first random thought that came into my head. 'I don't want him to rescue Geet, it's horribly hot & humid & sticky, dhubne de! Geet ko dhubne de Maan!'
He couldn't hear me. Obviously.
Gurmeet appeared underwater, looking confused. He had been told to lift me out whilst we were still underwater.
"CARRY GEET OUT!"
'No, don't carry Geet out, she's happily drowning in the beautiful cool water!' I thought.
He carried me in his arms, the water making me heavier to lift.
Great. I knew I shouldn't have indulged in the chocolate ice cream before shooting. It would have made me a few pounds lighter.
He managed to lift me securely & lifted me out of the water. I was more worried about facing the suffocating heat again in the air.
"DRASHTI, IMPROVISE!"
"Improvise?" I wondered loudly. Geet had been saved by Maan, what could I improvise on?
"Kick your legs," Gurmeet suggested, the first thing he said to me since we had met on set earlier in the day.
I pouted, confused as I began to kick my legs. Getting back into Geet mode & not 'Drashti is enjoying the cold water & doesn't want to be carried out' mode, I began screaming bachao bachao, Geet style.
"CUT!" NP called. "LET'S SHOOT AGAIN, DRASHTI THIS TIME YOU'RE DOING WHAT YOU DID BEFORE & ASK FOR HELP, GURMEET YOU TELL HER TO SHUT UP."
"That sounds easy enough," he muttered. I sighed, wondering why he always got to be so favourably topless in the weather. Not that I wanted to be topless. Tauba tauba. But wearing less heavier material clothes would have been nice.
We shot the scene once more, with Geet pleading & Maan being rude, then I got carried out to my dismay. Maan dropped Geet onto the floor & walked off with his can of coke, whilst Geet begged for him to listen so she could ask for help.
As we walked over to the next location of our shoot, where Maan had set up camp, I was told by NP that Geet was to drive Maan's jeep in a bid to get home after he refused for help. I nodded, taking the information in & we shot the initial scenes when it came to the jeep scene.
"Okay Drashti, Geet is a 18 year old HP girl. She has no idea how to drive a jeep. So look clueless." Everyone stood back, waiting for my driving debut. I started the jeep & looked clueless, Geet's favourite expression as I drove hesistantly.
I knew Gurmeet was about to pop out of a tent to stop the jeep & he did. Using his muscly arms, Maan was trying to get Geet to stop the jeep. He told me to apply the brakes, I asked where & the dramatic scene continued.
I frowned as I caught sight of his arms; they looked greased up' oily almost. Had they oiled up his arms?! It couldn't have been sweat, though pushing a jeep must be hard enough in itself. I glanced at his hair, the strange quiff Maan was sporting popping up. I bit my lip, stifling a laugh at his hairdo. He reminded me of Elvis.
'Drashti, you are so weird,' I told myself in my head.
"CUT!"
The shot stopped, then restarted after a few pointers as Geet got out, asked Maan if he was okay & Maan threw her into the jeep, taking her home so she could stop pestering him.
I went back into Geet mode, shy & worried & afraid as I annoyed Maan, asking him for a cell phone. The scene continued with Maan throwing me out of the jeep, before giving me a few last words of wisdom & driving away.
"AND CUT!" NP called.
It was almost sunset in the beautiful location. Gurmeet came back, abandoning his Maan jeep & leaving it to the crew boys to take care of. Nissar called us back, congratulated us on a day's worth of work & added that tomorrow involved more demanding work. I exchanged a small smile with Gurmeet before we were escorted back to the studio, where my driver waited to take me home.
I could not wait to get home, have a cold bath & unwind with my favourite chocolate ice cream. With whipped cream. And sprinkles, too. The gym could wait for another day.
(FF is written by walkintomylifex)




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Preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi Ho gayi main matwaaliBal bal jaaun apane piya koHe main jaaun vaari vaariMohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann kiYeh toh jaane duniya saari Bebas aur laachar phiru main Haari main dil haari - 2

Tere naam se jee loon - 2 Tere naam se marr jaaun - 2 Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi mainHo ri ha ri ho gayi mainTeri deewani deewani- 2 Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main Teri deewani deewani - 2
Why I am feeling so lifeless..??
I have heard you feel pain in heart.. Like there is a hole in your chest.. But I am not feeling anything...I am feeling hollow inside...like something has been snatched from inside me...something without which I may not be able to survive. Something missing...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... My heart missing...!she tried again to cry but couldn't... she was in pain ..Every part of her body ached...her mind burning cursing her..
Her own words echoed in her mind..
I wish I don't have to see your face again.. I wish I don't have to see your face again..
Oh why did I utter these words when I can't stand them myself.. Why did I told him I don't want to see him again..
NO...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What I won't be able to see him... but how can I stand that..??.No..!!! This punishment is way too harsh for me..I have to find him.. She murmured absentmindedly as she ran in a daze to find him...
Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2
Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye
Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2
Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole
Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain
Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain
Tere bin jeena kaisa
Haan Khudgarzi hi
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani - 4

She never realized her true feelings until now... when she realized that she won't be able to see him again... she realized how much she loved him...
She has been denying her own feelings until now.. but she didn't realized that he might be able close his to eyes to the things he didn't want to see. But she won't succeed to close his heart to the things he didn't want to feel...
And today she knew depth of her own feelings and emotions.. She entered the darga praying to find him when her eyes fell on him..

He was standing there and the moment their eyes met everything was blurred.. Only they existed at that very moment and only their love was prominent.. her eyes only reflected one thing and that was her immense love for him..
Oh ho oh hoohhh...

He main rang rangeeli deewani - 2 Ke main albeli main mastani Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaunHe main dila zaram se begaani Ke main deewani main deewani Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main Teri deewani deewaniTeri deewani deewani Teri deewani deewani Teri deewani deewani...
She wanted to hug him once.. she just wanted to be in his arms once or may be just kiss him once.. but she stood there totally numb, just staring him..
Her hand involuntarily gaped towards him.. she wished to feel his face under her fingers to make sure he was fine..
She was deeewani.. his deewani..
(FF is written by Anshra)


Oh gosh...!!...I am damn late today...I cursed under my breath reaching the studio. Seriously, I need to get a new alram clock as soon as possible or else someday, nissar would have to shoot for a special sleeping sequence for me...!!


Anyways, here he comes and I got ready for the next shot. To tell you the truth, I was really excited today after hearing the scene as first, we would be doing a song sequence on one of my favourite kehna hi kya, which reminds me how I loved that movie when I was in school and often enacted manisha koyrala and secondly, I would finally be shooting in the jim area, which till now, only gurmeet had the priviledge too. Oh, that again reminds me I will also get a chance to be among the cute pegions around there.


I was in a jubiliant mood today, after reading the script.Not much to do, just roam here and there, well kind off. I went towards nissar who was standing beside gurmeet, who looked equally excited, I wonder why...??


I greeted him with a smile which he returned with same warmth. After working together for so long, we have developed a strong bond between us, which has actually helped us in our performances on screen. I saw that enthusiasm on gurmeet'sface again and could not stop myself from asking...


Is that your favourite number too...??


He looked at me a bit baffled to which I instantly added...woh, you look so excited about the whole scene thats why I asked. His frown was again replaced by a smile as he replied...


Oh, I just love tai chi. Its a great stress buster for me and the scene requires it...!!


Okay,so mr. fitness freak was happy about the tai chi. BOYS, I tell you...!!


Great...I muttered and moved towards the center of the set for my shot.





Okay, here comes my turn. I saw nissar giving directions and his voice echoed...


Lights...camera...ACTION...


So here I, I mean geet, which is my character's name goes in search of maan, who is supposedly doing some tai chi in the jim area. I wonder sometimes, why this geet fellow has to be always clad in the same trademark salwar suit, even the style never changes. I am getting bored of this same outfit again and again. But, as if I can do anything about that it, so I better concentrates on the scene.


Okay, so I said before, not much to do as I walked in the deserted gallery in search or my hero and finally spotted him in the main area.


CUT...!!


Good job, drashti...!!...nissar complimented me.


What was good in that...??...I thought...I guess walking is an art too...!!...sighing I made my way back and sat on a chair beside gurmeet.


I guess its your turn...I told gurmeet, who nodded and added...yeah, but you are joining me just a minute later.


Oh yes, how could I forget...the song sequence...!!


Suddenly getting excited I got up and moved towards the shooting area. Nissar came to gurmeet and me...


Gurmeet, go to the jim area...your favourite part is here...!!...gurmeet nodded with a smile and complied. Then nissar shifted his gaze towards me...


Drashti, you have to watch him secretly and end up getting your earing stuck in the curtains...!!


Oh, yeah. Watching him secretly has now a days become my routine as in most of the scenes, geet ends up staring or rather ogling at maan. Nodding, I went to my position.


Soon the fan was turned towards me making my hair and duppatta fly. Now thats something good...!!


Anyways I did my part by sneak peak at him, while he stretched his body to various angles, showing his body like always. And there comes my first interest, the cute white pigeons. And one of the assistant release one of the pigoen to make it sit on maan's shoulder. How I wish, I could hold them once, they look so cute. My thought process was broken by nissar's voice...


Geet, move to get the curtains near your earing. So, the earing part. I turned in such a way to get my earing entangle in the curtain. But alsa...!!...how can I get my shot done easily. And here this damn earing ditched me...I groaned inwardly.


CUT...!!


Drashti, you have to get the earing stuck in the curtain...!!


We did few retakes and I just wish to tear the curtain with my earing and also throw this stupid earing. Whats the use of wearing such long earing, when it can't get stuck to a silly curtain. I pouted and gave another take and finally it was done. I sighed in relief...!!


This earing fiasco left us all tired and we were given 10 minutes break before the next scene. Gurmeet being the jerk he is ( well,being his friend I got the right to call him that )...yeah, so where was I. Yes, so being the jerk he is, he started laughing like a maniac at my earing fiasco and got a smack from me in return.


Okay, drashti, gurmeet...we have to shoot the song sequence...!!...nissar yelled grabbing our attention.


We both took our respective position and waited for the call.


ACTION...nissar said.


So, I started from the earing part. This was irritating me to the core. If I had to disentangle it then why the hell I had to stick it at the first place. Anyways, I released my earing from the curtain, which were flying dramatically with the effect of fan. Maan approached me hearing the sound I made from my anklets. Well, that was also not in one go as nissar kept shouting...


Drashti thrust your feet forcefully. The sound of anklet should reach gurmeet...!!


So, this time I stomped my feet causing the payal to make loud sound. And yes, I did succeed...!!


I saw gurmeet moving towards me and I pretended to feel all hasty and nervous for the scene. And my most favourite part finally came when I heard the music playing.


CUT...!!


Gurmeet, drashti...its time for the song...nissar announced and the choreographer came to explain the scen. Well, there was actuallyno dance in the song sequence...can you believe that...NO DANCE in such a beautiful song...??...all my happiness went down the drain...hai rabba...!!...kabhi aisa hota hai kya...??...It always happens to me. I never get a chance to display my talent while gurmeet would get hundreds of scene for tai chi...!!


Gumsum gumsum gup chup, gumsum gup chup - 2
Halchal halchal ho gayi teri, honth hai tere chup
Khalbal khalbal ho gayi teri, baithi hai tu gupchup
Pyaare pyaare chehre lekar dediya ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon mein hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori naa tu sharma, kehde humse zara - 2


I pouted and listened quietly as that was theonly option left. Now, I just wanted to finish this whole scene fast and get back home.



Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon



Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon


Throughout the song gurmeet and I played hide and seek, okay, I have to admit I always enjyed hide and seek, but this was no such game. In fact it was quite silly. I mean if geet had to hide from maan then why did she came to meet him at the first place. Thank god I am not in the creative team or I would have gone nuts with their logics...!!


Pehli hi nazar mein kuch hum,
Kuch tum ho jaate hai yun gum
Nainon se barse rim jhim,
Rim jhim humpe pyaar ka saavan

Sharm thodi thodi humko aaye to nazarein jhuk jaayen
Sitam thoda thoda humpe shok hawa bhi kar jaaye

Aisi chali, aanchal ude, dil mein ek toofaan uthe
Hum to lut gaye khade hi khade

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon



Kehna hi kya...


Finally the song was done without anymore hassel as I had to maintain almost the same nevous anxious look of geet while gurmeet put up his bare vhest passionate man look...okay, that sounds a bit weird, but it appeared like that only. So, at the end of the song, maan caught geet and brought her out of hiding as told by our director and we performed accordingly.


Gurmeet, you have to make drashti wear the earing and remember it is a very passionate intense scene...nissar instructed gurmeet and I felt like laughing my head off. How on earth can wearing an earing look passionate, but gurmeet was good enough at it. I guess experience made him perfect ;)


There ended gurmeet's part and he left the scene while I had to finish it with a monologue. So, wearing that bechari look of geet I gave my shot and ot it approved in one take itself. Alls well that ends well...I thought when nissar congratulated gurmeet and me for the perfect scene. I bid goodbye to the crew members, nissar and gurmeet and headed off straight to my car to get some rest at home...!!
(FF is written by shining_Moon)



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Today there was lots of hustle bustle on the sets of geet hui sabse parayi, everyone was running here and there checking the last minute preparations. The set is looking marvellous and magnificent; it's giving a feel of 'wao' in simple words. All spots boy lighting the candles and fixing the lights. The director and camera man are discussing about how the scene would get shot. Today was the day when they will shoot maan and geet will romance while falling in love side by side. Though the set was giving a romantic feeling but the tension could easily be seen on the directors and cameramen's face. The creative director and the script writer entered the sets and walked up to the director and the camera man. The four of them were discussing the scene making sure whatever they want comes out well; all the feelings are potrayed perfectly. They were discussing the position of the camera and where would maan and geet stand which camera needs to catch which shot. The light men's were adjusting the light in the meantime. After discussing for a long on the scene, improvising it a bit, then finally things were decided though it wasn't an easy task they had argued over it a lot. Each point of view by each one of them were just making the scene look better, so after a lot of argue it was time to shoot the scene since finally all of them were satisfied with their conclusions.
Dhrashti's makeup room
She was sitting in front of the mirror and getting dressed up for the scene. She was given the dress for the scene and she really liked her dress. She was getting her hair straight since it takes time she was simply sitting and remembering how the creative director and the script writer explained her scenes. She didn't know why she was feeling nervous in past also she has done romantic scenes then why is she feeling bit weird. Along with feeling nervous and weird she was also having some tingling feeling in her, she could also feel goose bumps in her stomach. Her thoughts were broken when the hair dresser said her hair was straightened now and plaits were made and now she can get the makeup done. She nodded her head in agreement and the hair dresser left the room. Dhrashti looked at her make up box and sighed. Finally her makeup was done by the makeup artist and was told that she was looking very beautiful and pretty and people on set would surely get shocked. She smiled hearing the compliment and simply nodded her head by gesturing a thank you to the makeup artist. After looking at herself for the last time in the mirror she left her room to the place where the scene was about to be shot.
Gurmeet's makeup room
He was sitting on the chair and eating his food and reading some random magazine which was kept there. When he was finished eating someone knocked at his door. He stood up and walked towards the door and opened it. There was a spot boy who was holding a dress in his hand he nodded his head and took the dress and closed the door. He quickly changed into the dress and was standing in front of mirror checking his hairs. He picked up a gel bottle and applied it on his hair. He had little makeup to do so he preferred doing it himself. While doing the makeup he remembered about the scene, it was supposed to be a romantic scene but something inside him was saying it's just not a scene it has more to it. Before he could think further there was again a knock on his door. When he opened the door he was told that the shot is ready and he was required he nodded his head and started walking towards the required destination.
On the sets people were still doing their last minute preparations, all of them were in their required place i.e. the director and cameraman sitting next to each other and looking at the monitor whereas the lightmens and sound departments were being given last minute instructions regarding their work. Amidst all this every one fails to realise that the actors had entered the place. Co incidentally both drashti and gurmeent had entered the sets and while entering they had bumped into each other. Dhrashti quickly mumbled sorry to him but he was busy starring at her. He looked at her and he was lost in her beauty she was looking beautiful and out of this world. Since everyone was busy doing their work none noticed them looking into each other's eyes. Dhrashti was wearing a pink suit her hair tied with two strands of hair loose on either sides.
Both of them were staring at each other they were oblivion to the world. Both have seen each other previously many a times but why all of a sudden they are feeling something is different? Suddenly they heard the director's voice "dhrashti and gurmeet the shot is ready come fast". They looked at each other and forced a smile and walked towards the area where the scene needs to be shot. "Ok so both of you are aware of whats going to be shot? And how it would be shot?" the director and said and both dhrashti and gurmeet nodded their head in agreement. "Ok then come on lets shoot this and while doing try to feel the scene " said the director and walked towards his seat which is next to the cameraman. Dhrashti and gurmeet took their position and waiting for the clue so that they can start their scene. The director took a deep breath and said "action". The moment director said action the lights were closed and silence prevailed on sets, there was a pin drop silence on the sets.
Dhrashti was standing within the frame and lighted the match stick. The moment she lighted it along with that the song also started playing.
Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein haye
Nainon mein haye
Gurmeet came in the frame and stood in front of her. Both of them were staring at each other and then he bent down and dhrashti kept her foot on his knees.
Dhrashti didn't know why but felt she isn't acting any more, she felt as if its real whenever he comes infront of her she just keeps on staring at him in no way is able to remove her eyes from him.
Whereas Gurmeet was feeling different some unknown feelings were over powering him but he couldn't pin point it.

Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein basiya jaise nain yeh tere
Nainon mein basiya jaise nain yeh tere
He was taking the measure of her ankles and after that looked at dhrashti. After few seconds he clowly stood up facing her.
When he looked at her she felt something in his eyes, something which she hasn't seen till date she could no longer control herself, heck she wasn't even acting at the moment. She thought 'oh babajee yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai lagta hai director would just now say cut because of my weird expressions'.
Gurmeet thought 'wheni touched her why a current ran through my body what does it means?'

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain
(Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain)
He held her hands and kept at his shoulder and started measuring her hand with the help of the measuring tape.
When gurmeet held her hand she thought 'kyun mujhe uske choone se ek warmth mehsoos (feel) hui? Kyun mere dill ki dhadkan tez ho gayi yeh pehli baar mere saath aisa kyun ho raha ab tak mien kitne scenes shoot kar chuki romantic wale per ab mujhe kyun different feel ho raha hai?
Gurmeet thought ' I have held her hands many a times but why this time I am feeling as if uughhh kyun mujhe kuch samaj nahiin aa raha why can't I explain it in words?'

Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Jal jal utha hoon main shola jo pyaar ka, bhadka haye bhadka bhadka haye
Neendhon mein gul gaye hain sapne jo tere
Badle se lag rahe hain andaaz mere
Badle se lag rahe hain andaaz mere
Dhrashti removed her hands from his shoulders and then he took her hands and kissed her on her knuckles and the slowly slowly every so lightly and passionately he brushed his lips along her arms till her elbow and then looked into her eyes. He was now very close to her their lips were just inches away and then he was behind her. Dhrashti's back was touching his front and his nose was on dhrashti's cheeks and she closed her eyes. He measured her shoulders from behind and then came in front of her once again.
Dhrashti thought 'yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyun uske choone se mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai mien pehle bhi toh romantic scenes kar chuki hoon toh ab kya different hai? mujhe kya ho raha hai? or abhi tak director ne cut kyun nahiin bola mien acting kaha kar rahi hoon? Yeh acting nahiin hai per agar ye acting nahiin hai toh phir yeh hai kya! Oh babajee ab mujhe iska jawab kaise milega yeh serial toh hai nahiin jaha mujhe koi batayga per mien khud hi confused hoon toh khud toh jawab milne se raha lekin phir aakhir kaar mujhe batayga kaun agar mien khud nahiin toh?'
Gurmeet thought 'mujhe toh sirf kiss karna tha haathon pe apne lips brush karte huye nahiin jana tha yeh improvisation achi hai per kyun ki miene or abhi tak director ne cut kyun nahiin bola? Kyun nahiin toka yeh keh kar ki yeh galat hai! or miene improvisation ki toh kyun ki? Uughh mien kyun khud se pooch raha hoon jab mien hi khud confused hoon per kissi or se bhi toh nahiin pooch sakta ab karu toh kya karu?

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain
(Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain)
He came in front of her and measured her waist and also pulled her more close to him. He started coming more close to her slowly slowly and now their lips were just inches apart both could feel each other's breath
Dhrasti thought 'I can feel his hot breath on my lips per kyun mujhe mann kar raha hai kuch wild karne ka? Kyun mere mann kar raha hai kiss karne ka?? Aisa toh mere saath kabhi nahiin hua pehli baar hua hai per aisa kyun ho raha hai!
Gurmeet thought 'why am I hell bent on pulling her more close to me kyun mere brain ke census ulta soch rahe hain? her trembling lips are urging me to taste them kiss her passionately per I have to complete the scene. My heart says kiss her juicy lips but brain says complete the scene as its your work kiss ki suno'
Before both of them could think further the director shouted "cut" and every one started whispering about how good the shot was. Hearing the voices both dhrashti and gurmeet came out of their thought and looked at the surrounding to which they were oblivion till now. The director walked up to them and said "you guys were brilliant it was an awesome shot I am sure your fans would love it, and the way you did it with feelings they too would feel the scene". After speaking to them he walked back to the place and started re checking the scene and after that gave the tape to the editor for editing it. Both of them were quiet since they were still thinking about the scene they did just now. "dhrashti and gurmeet you can go and relax for a while next scene isn't yours, we would call you when required" said one of the creative head and this brought them back to reality. At this moment both thought this is the best way to sort out their confusion so they both walked back towards their makeup room and kept thinking about the scene and their thoughts regarding it. Though at this moment the confusion won't get solved soon there were yet many things coming up and by the end they would again end up being confused. Only when the place, time and moment is right they would get their answers.
(FF is written by youth_showsfan)




Gurmeet,Drashti shot ready...come fast...director called both.

coming... DD said from make up room with a chirpy tone.

Gurmeet's heartbeat raise hearing her sweet voice.It's always happening with him now a days.this strange feeling towards her made him restless.he knew exactly why he feeling like this.he is falling in love with this bubbly girl or actually fall in love.he just can't thought anything without her at all.his all day gone thinking about her only whether he is busy or not.her big almond eyes which speaks volume to him made him want to read them,her curly hair made him to touch them,her white milky skin made him ache his hand and lips to caressed that and her cute rosy lips.made him crave to kiss her once..just once...

Gurmeet jaldi aao..DD aa gayi hai...some one called him.

yup..i m coming...he came out from his thought.

Drashti was sitting on the bench.it's the scene when maan said I Love u to geet and it's gonna shoot tarace..actually a set which look like that.she saw gurmeet coming towards her.she missed a bit.he is looking handsome and sexy more then ever in his white shirt.
uff ye to meri jaan leke rahega...now how i m concentrate in my act...she thought to herself.
she is falling for him since the day they became friend.he is a amazing friend and actor also.yes he is little moody sometimes but that's also she like about him.she try to hide her feelings best
bcoz she didn't knew about his feelings.

Drashti went towards the spot where they gonna shoot and they both shared a little cute chat.both can feel their were something between them but don't want to except.

ok...ready u two...director asked them

yup..they said same time and then smiled looking to each other.

ok...action...

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

Gurmeet made him maan in a minute and looking lovingly at her and said i love u.but when he said that he completely forgot that he is acting.Drashti also felt the same.she lost in him.

Nazron se nazrein mili to
Jannat si mehki Fizayein

their eyes locked and both felt that they wrer not acting as if its real.

Lab ne jo lab chu liya to
Aasmaan se barshi Duyaien

he went her back and held her tightly from her back and rapped his arm in her waist.he totally forget his surroundings so as geet.he kissed her ear lovingly.she shivered with his touch.

Aise apni mohabbat
Aise rooh-e-ibaadat
Hum pe Meherbaan Do Jahan

he nuzzeled her neck with his nose feeling in heaven.Drashti turned back and hugged him not able to hold her passion.he also tighten his hold and hugged him passionately.

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

they both stayed like that sometimes feeling each other.

Teri bahaon mein yeh jism khil gaaya
Teri Saanson mein chain mil gaya
Kaise rahein abb hum juda

she slowly leave him and cupped his face in her hnd and look at him with so much love.he understood immediately this is not geet it's Drashti his Drashti.he smiled at her.she leaned towards him and kissed his cheek lovingly.

Aise uski inayat
Mit gayi har shiyaat
Hum pe Meherbaan Do Jahan

he surprised first then kissed her cheek with so much passion as if saying thanks to be with him.

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
they stayed like that and then director yelled cut...

they came from their own world.they looked at each other and smiled bcoz they both know something change between them today and it's a beautiful change.
(FF is written by Mishty..Sakii)

Edited by GurTiLiciousW - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7


She lied on her bed with her closed eyes and a sweet smile on her face. Finally tomorrow will be the day she is been waiting from years. But this night doesn't seem to be over, sleep is not near her eyes but the only thing she can see is him and only him. Weather with open eyes or close. He never leaves her to a second.
Her world of dream got disturb by the slow knock on window. She frowned and went to open the window to see the person of her dream, he ump inside panting heavily. What are you doing here? She look here and there confirming door were close. He smile and went lying on bed. She come and stood in front of him with her hand on her hips. I'm asking you? He open his eyes looking at her, she was cutely complaining him, holding her wrist and pulled her on top of him with a Thud snaking his arm around her slim waist.Of course I came for you doll. I am desperately missing you. She blushes, keeping her forbear on his chest hiding her face.I can't wait for tomorrow. She smiles. You should go now. She looks au at him, he smiled turning and jerk her beneath him slowly leaning down, she smile knowing his intention turning her face so his lips slam on her cheek. He moves back making a face. She laughs pushing him and stood up.
Now go. She pushes him toward the window. But. She stopped him keeping her palm on his lips. No. Not now. Go. He smile sweetly and went out by window.
********************
Gurmeet and Drashti, both were in love from five years, when they were in collage, things started by a simple friendship and soon both stated to love each other's deeply. After two years, when they finished their study they revealed the news to their family but they didn't approved the love marriage in their family. But him being Gurmeet didn't stopped loving her and continuous to meet her. After three years of convinced they finally agreed, but somewhere geet family never approves maan nature. He is way too possessive about geet and always at his angry mood which they didn't like but have to agree for geet.
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She sat in front of mirror with her bridal dress all set to go but somewhere she was very nervous. He has made a grand party down there and almost everybody in the city was invited. He made sure this wedding would be the nearest and most charming wedding.
She come downstares with the help of her sister and friend who made her sit on Mandap beside him. He smile seeing her and hold her hand making all laugh and tease them. But their family didn't approve these kinds of things which he never cared.
The marriage was done, both were finally married. He smiles delight. Finally they are one after so many years, now no one can stop them meeting from each others. He hated it when their family told them to not to meet before marriage but he ignored all, if only geet wouldn't have forced him he would never had agreed with anyone.
The Bissau ceremony came and she hug her mother crying. Please take care of my daughter. He nodded his head looking at geet hating tears in her eyes and squeezed her hand. She quickly wipes her tears and hugs her dad.
***********************
o saathi re din dube na
o saathi re din dube na
aa chal din ko roke
dhup ke peeche daude
chaanv chhue na
o saathi re
She sat in the bed with her knee up to her chest clutching her lehenga hard. The aroma around the room made her shiver; she inhaled, and moves her knee more close. Soon she hears some sound from outside, him fighting with his sister and Bhabhi to let him come. Finally after 10 minutes he open the door and turn to lock it. She tightened her fist nervously.
o saathi re din dube na
aa chal din ko roke
dhup ke peeche daude
chaanv chhue na
o saathi re
When he turns to her, his beautiful wife made him smile and sat in front of her. He hand move to her chin making her face him. You look beautiful. She smile lightly looking down. He lean forward and kiss her cheek making her sigh and move to her neck muzzling. She closed her eyes by his soft kisses all around her neck and shoulder.
o saathi re din dube na
thaka thaka suraj jab nadi se hokar niklega
hari hari kaayi pe paanv bada toh fislega
tum rok ke rakhna main jaal giraaun
tum pith pe lena main haath lagaaun
din dube na ha
teri meri atti patti
daat se khaati katti
re jaiiyo na
o pihoo re
o pihoo re na jaiyyo na

He was way too happy, finally after so many years, after so much happening in their life they finally are becoming one. He finally will feel her today and make her his and only his. Taking all his time he take her cloths and jewelry kissing every part and inches of her skin making her lie down and explored her.
kabhi kabhi yun kare main daantu aur tum darna
ubal pade aankhon se feenke paani ka jharna
hmm tere dohhre badan mein sil jaaungi re
jab karwat lega tu chhil jaaungi re
hooo sang le jaaunga
teri meri angni mangni
ang sang laagi sangni
sang le jaaun
o pihooo re
Coming to her he kiss her with all his love, first really softly untilled he felt her kissing him back, he showed his tongue inside her moving his hand to her Brest massaging gently teasing her, her hand move to his back, to torso feeling his full arouses body under her soft fingers. He move back from her mouth and hide his face on her neck biting and sucking her skin making her groan and scratch his back with the proximity.
o saathi re din dube na
aachal din ko roke
dhup ke peeche daude
chaanv chhue na
o saathi re
Not wanting to stop most he move slightly and move his body to capture her, making her soul his, she moaned a loud holding him close loving his aroma and scenery inside her. They move in a rhythm they moaned feeling their organisms together and stayed in each other's embrace promising to love each others like this always.
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After two years
She waited outside of her car from an hour, outside of airport waiting for maan to come out. He had gone from six months for some business deal and she wanted to come to receive him herself. Although his family didn't approved it but she told him to convince them as she wanted to see him first and be close to him which can never be possible with all the family and she can't wait until they are alone at their room.
After 15 minutes she saw him coming out with one bag in his shoulder he smile looking at her and she ran hugging him really tight. He smiles holding her waist tight. I missed you. She moves back kissing his cheek. Missed you too. He kisses her.
They sat in car; he proceeded to drive while she sat close to him listening all his stories. He told her everything about his meeting, the place and the people. He always tells her every single about his day and she only listen to him quietly.
When they reach home he was welcomed by all his and her family together. They all hugged him and sat whole night talking to him. His eyes were on her who was really restless and know by know that this look of her means she want to be alone with him, so excusing himself her said he is tired and stood to went his room. A smile came to his lips seeing a spark on her eyes and almost coming behind him. But when he reaches the door he heard his mom calling her and asks her to come and help. He sighed and entre his room changing his cloths.
It was almost early morning when she entre their room and find him sleeping on his stomach with his usual pants only. She went to change in her night suit and came back sitting on her side of bed admiring him. She so much missed him, missed sleeping in his arms, missed to see him so close. Sighing he keep her head on his back with one arm under her head and another went to his hair stroking softly. He smiles with his close eyes. You came? He whispered softly. She sat straight; I want to tell you so something. He smile and sat in front of her bringing her in his embrace. Bolo. She smile keeping her head on his shoulder and trace her finger on his broad chest. WO... actually... I... he frowned keeping his palm on her cheek.
Say doll. She giggles and kisses his cheek moving to his ears and whispered softly. I'm pregnant...he look at her with his wide open her eyes. Really? She nodded and head hugging him. He hugs her tight. Life can't be any better. They wanted kid's years before but were not getting. They even consulted doctors many time but every time they were told everything is ok.
He moves back he asked. But when? She looks down biting her lower lip. I found it three months before and wanted to tell you first. I was so desperate to tell you but not in phone. He smile widely and capture her. Mouth. Thanking her to come in his life and bring so much happiness, thanking her to Mae his life beautiful, make it worth leaving, to give him so much happiness and love him so much. He can't define his happiness in words.
Other day they announced the news to all the family who were extremely happy and instantly her mom wanted her to come to their house in last month but him being himself didn't approved and rejected.
(FF is written by zoha25)



Edited by GurTiLiciousW - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8

As soon as gurmeet was about to turn DD held his hand and trailed her fingers up his arms sensuously singing .. Woh hai zara khafa khafa ..
She then turned him in a jerk stairing at him seductively and sang .. To nain yu milaaee hai ki hoo hoo ..
He jerked her hand half heartedly and sang .. Naa bol dou to kya karun
Then rubbed her lower lips .. Vo hans kay yun bulaae hai ki hoo hoo .
Hans rahi hai chandhni She looked at the moon and then behind he was nowhere to be seen ..
machal ke ro naa du kahiaise koi ruthataa nahi
a drop of tear escaped her eye but before it could flow down her cheeks she felt a delicate finger wipe it off .. She hit his chest and then hugged him tight .. she even bit his shoulder complaining and punishing him for being so angry at her ..
ye teraa khayaal haikarib aa mere hasimujhako tujhase kuchh gilaa nahibaat yun banaae hai ki o ho ...
He hissed at her bite and pulled her head backward .. He then bit her neck and sucked the soft flesh too soothe the pain .. Very slowly he cupped her face looking at her lovingly and pecked her lips .. coveying his love that he was and can never be angry at her ' She smiled but then pinched his cheeks cutely in fake anger for torturing her but then cuddled him tight ..
He then kissed her eye lids one by one .. her nose .. her cute red cheeks which were red due to shyness .. he purposely avoided her lips and kissed her chin .. she sang .. Aisee mat sataa iyee .. zara taras tou khaa iyee ..
He smirked but still didn't give in .. he went down sucking and kissing her long beautiful milky neck .. he even bit her then licked it too ease the pain ' He kept kissing her and stopped just above her cleavage .. he sucked her there .. and she started to breathe faster ' Her chest moving up and down in rhythym oozing raw desires in him ..
Zara taras tou kahyee iyee .. dil ki darkhan mat jaga iyee ..
kuchh nahi kahUgaa mainaa ankhiyaa jhukaa_iyesar ko kandhe se uthaa_iyeaise nid aae hai ki ham ...vo hai ...
He gave in to her demands and kissed her passionately .. sucking her lower lip then bit it for entrance .. Their tongues danced with each other .. he trying to tell her that no words were to be allowed to come between them tonight .. It was only them .. She closed her eyes in surrender but he would not allow .. He bit her lip a little harshly and she snapped open her eyes .. He smirked and nodded for a No .. telling her she would not close her eyes .. She kept her head on his shoulder but he picked it up and pecked her forehead .. He scooped her in his arms and took her to their bedroom to tell her how much he loved her and was not angry anymore or rather was more than happy and in a romantic mood .. he placed her on the bed and that followed by another rough passionate night as the room filled with loud screams and moans of pleasure and pain ..
(FF is writren by NaimaMSK1)



She caressed his face tenderly as he closed his eyes, but not before looking at her affectionately. She felt her heart pang as her fingers touched the white fabric of the bandages. It may have been a secret to the world, but everyone on sets knew that the blood was his'it was Gurmeet's. The hired actors had accidentally hit Gurmeet too hard than they were instructed to do so. His cries and agony were as real as the blue skies and bright sun. The care in her eyes was not staged for she felt the bruises and wounds with her fingertips and cried as he yelped in stinging pain. His eyes closed and his face was at peace'she felt at peace. One final caress from her hand brought him to rest and widened her smile.
As the scene progressed, she went over to the other side of the divider and washed her feet with the water. She left her dupatta in his hands'after all, he needed something to hold onto. Her absence was felt by the depths of his soul and he called out to her, "Geet?!", but in reality he wanted nothing more than to say, "Drashti?!". He looked over to his angel and the glistening sparkle the water left on her face. The droplets that fell from her loose strands and the tiny river that flowed down her arms. He stared hard at the droplets the kissed the skin on her face and slowly rolled down her cheeks. He envied those precious drops that touched her before he could and fumed at the same very drops that tumbled down to the ground. It was a strange mixture of feelings all conquered by one strong emotion: passion.
He stared so deeply, she felt she had to look down or else his gaze for blind her. For some reason, it all felt so real. The cameras, the directors, the crew were all left in oblivion to the thin line between fiction and actuality. And it was a very thin line when it concerned Gurmeet and Drashti. His feet approached her in tiny steps and her chest heaved deeply as the proximity between them decreased. Her eyes may have been down, but she could feel his stare burning into her soul'past her clothes and skin. For a moment, a pinkish hue emerged onto her cheeks with the thought that he could see her naked body because that's how she felt'completely and utterly naked. His arms extended out and reached up, though he wanted to grab her waist and pull her closer, the script demanded he reach for her ear. The rush of air that passed along her skin made her tingly. She smiled slowly and titled her head up as if she was going to kiss him, but she looked down instead'after all, it was always the man's duty to make the first move. She began to dart past him, but he caught onto her hand'how could one ever let their life run past them?
With her back turned to him, she stood holding the towel, almost teasing him. Before she could wipe away what seemed to him as the splashes of paradise from her face, he grabbed the towel. She gave him a mere glance before turning away and inhaling the passion summoning amidst them. He grabbed the towel and patted down the water, first beginning with her ear and gently making his way down her neck. It really wasn't the towel that should wipe away the water; it should be him. So he tossed the towel aside and glided his fingers along her neck and collarbone. The touch so magic and so electrifying that it made her squirm. He wished his fingers could grace other parts of her too, but that wasn't part of the script.
She turned around slowly and lifted her eyes up even slowly mustering courage to look at him. She was afraid that he might see her true feelings and thoughts in her eyes'not those belonging to Geet, but those that resided in Drashti. As their eyes met, their hands found each other. Her small hand on his shirt crawling up to his collar while his one hand on her waist, which was hidden from the cameras and screen, while the other cuddled between her cheeks and hair. His thumb gently stroked her cheekbone and pulled her closer for a kiss. The distance between their noses waned and their breaths had kissed. She had felt exactly what he was feeling'if only the cameras and crew were gone, if only they were in solitude. Her knees grew weak and she rushed away before she did something they she would regret'even though deep within her she knew it was regret she was always willing to make. He was her poison but he also was her love.
The next part wasn't in the script, but the director was so lost in the moment of all the "Mahiiis" and chemistry that he zoned out the rants from the infuriated assistant writer. The new director let them continue as they saw fit because he was more than content with the results they were producing. She grabbed her dupatta, but he stopped her before she could create another hampering barrier between them. He confidently clung onto it and pulled it with ease, something he had done to the pallu of her sari so many times before as Gurmeet and not as Maan. She smiled shyly knowing what he wanted and the extent he was willing to go for it. Maybe it was the tight pull of the dupatta, or the weaknesses consuming their nerves that caused the dupatta to fall to the ground. His fingers lingering in the air for a while as he saw the consequence of their actions. He was pleased with the results of their little tug and war. She grew conscience of her body and bare neck. It wasn't like he hadn't seen her naked before, but something about the anticipation of what might come next made her nervous and sexually withdrawn.
She covered her neck with one hand at first, but then with both as he understood her dilemma and reached for the dupatta. His eyes clutched onto her like a lion hunting a ram and focused on her with a stare that belonged only to a beast. She felt as ease as he laid the soft cloth on her'covering her chest area, especially her breasts. Her eyes were kept close the moment she felt the touch of his hand on her shoulder and as he began to lean in towards her, nature had intervened and given them a blessing by powering a gentle breeze of warm air in their direction. The winds flew her loose strands backwards enticing him to bring her closer to him. Her arms came up to wind around his neck, desperate for something to anchor her and keep her from floating away in bliss. She nuzzled her face to his and felt his hard beating heart throbbing against her own pounding heartbeats. He buried his face deeper into her side and consumed her scent'the sweet smell of hers that he had woken up to so many times before. She opened her mouth to sigh as each inch of her filled with undying passion. With their eyes kept close, they held onto to each other tightly and dreamed of another day where all of this would take them to a better place. Her arms wrapped around him tightly and he tightened his hold on her waist until he felt that shudder from her that he was so accustomed to. Finally, they were at peace until the director yelled, "Cut!" and then they knew it was all over.
"Excellent Job! Gurmeet, Drashti'that was fabulous. I didn't know what you were doing when you went off script, but it's better than how the writers wrote it. Truly brilliant!"
"Thank you, sir." They both said at the same thing awkwardly trying to avoid the other's glance and perplexed by their actions. Drashti placed her fingertips on the edges of her lips'still feeling the heated urge to kiss him. And Gurmeet tucked his hands into his pockets and dug out his phone to escape his thoughts of wanting her.
"This was breath-taking, but how about we do one more take after lunch and this time follow the script?"
"I thought you liked this?" Gurmeet asked wanting to avoid another take.
"I did, but we'll do it both ways and see which one turns out better. How about it?"
"Okay." They both said unanimously in a monotonous manner.
"Great! We're all going to head out for lunch, but you guys can use the sets to practice. We're gonna be back in 45 minutes so practice everything well, got it?" Without waiting for an affirmative from either one, he called for a break and had everyone removed from the sets.
They both were left in solitude and communicated through alternating glances. Drashti finally broke the silence, "You want to lay down and I'll start?"
"Umm'actually I want to know if you're feeling what'I".
"Stop. Please don't do this!"
"So you are, aren't you? That wasn't you acting, that was really you, wasn't it?"
"What difference does it make? It's not like you were thinking about me."
"Drashti?! How can you say that?"
"Then prove it!"
"Fine!" He said as he crashed his lips on hers and kissed her hungrily. She tried to push him away, but he held her and kept kissing her even though she didn't kiss him back. He tried to get past her insecurity, but it seemed to him that he had failed. He stopped kissing and stared into her face to search for something. All she could do was look down, but when he started to walk away from her, but she held his hand. She held it tight and gave it a slight squeeze that determined the truth of her intentions. She wanted him just as badly, but she needed him to know that it was a delicate matter of the heart. He turned around, lifted her up into his arms, and took her around the white sheet that casted their silhouette. He placed her down and began to remove her jewelry'first the earrings were parted from her lobes and then came the eradication of her payals from her feet. He tugged on her dupatta and pulled it off her. His fingers arched as their pulled on the string of her salwar. It hadn't been long before his hands had disrobed her and now made their way to his own clothes. It wasn't long before the only thing between their hot, naked bodies was a narrow space of air.
In moments to come after he played with her hair and looked into her eyes for permission, they had succumbed to their weakness. He kissed her'the kiss was hard and hungry and Drashti moaned against his mouth as his hands travelled up and down her body, caressing, stroking and squeezing until she could not be sure he was touching her. She had thrown her arms around his neck, thrusting her own tongue back into his mouth, holding the back of his head as she rubbed her breasts against his chest. She was aware of the hand that went down between her legs only a heartbeat before it began to run a finger along the wetness of her lower lips. She shuddered, sagging into his chest.
He held her with the one arm around her waist as he began to stroke the lips of her sex with his fingers and run his thumb over her labial lips. She buried her face into his neck, whimpering, her hips bucking as he deliberately masturbated her while keeping her arched backwards. She was laying down with her feet slanted up and on their tippy toes as her legs parted allowing for his fingers' ministrations to her lady part. When her orgasm hit her, she spasmed and went rigid with a gasp while her knees went weak as she cried out, a shriek that left her sagging in his arms as he wrung every last shred of her coming out of her with his stroking fingers.
He gave up the anticipation and the wait as he dove on top of her. She removed her hand and lifted her pelvis off the floor to meet his entering stroke, hooking an arm around his neck and dragging his lips down forcefully on top of hers. She cried out, half whimper, half moan as her body smoothly accepted and closed around its extremely welcomed visitor. He started to made love to her with strokes that went long and deep. Drashti had another idea as their actions continued and with a burst of strength fueled by need, she heaved and rolled them over until she was lying on top of her lover. She licked at his lips and neck as she drew her knees up so she could rest on them before she sat up, straddled over his hips and deliciously impaled on his manhood. As his hands reached up to hold her waist, she grabbed hold of one wrist and pulled the hand up so it would cup a breast with its pebble hard nipple.

"Yesss. Yesss." she sighed. She lifted up and slammed back down on his shaft, shuddering and making a sharp squeal. She began to rock her hips, smiling down at the man under her, her lingering thoughts and apprehensions gone the instant his hard manhood had taken its rightful place inside her. "You're gonna make me come, Gurmeet."

He could only gasp wordlessly, his loss of control delighting her almost as much as the hand kneading her breast. Drashti began to hump him in earnest; each rise and fall as she slid up and down his shaft drawing a cry of pleasure out of her mouth. She started slow at first, her hips making a slow rolling motion at each down stroke, a sharp intake of breath her only noise as she buried him deep inside her. But as her speed increased, so did her volume and she was soon squealing loudly each time she made her lady-hood swallow and spit out his shaft. Pleasure intense beyond imagining engulfed her as she bounced up and down on his staff, her heavy breasts bouncing on her chest, both now cupped in his hands. He pulled and pinched at her nipples, each time making her throw her head back, whimpering her delight.

"Oh yes! ... Oh God! ... I'm commming!" She wailed, as her body grew weak with the burst of heat fueling throughout her body.

The first wave of her orgasm came after only a short time of riding Gurmeet's manhood, and Drashti had to pause, body going stiff, eyes squeezed shut and biting her lip to prevent herself from losing total control and shrieking at the top of her lungs. It gave her a tiny moment of clarity and she again marveled at herself that the only thing she had wanted at this precise moment was only him. As selfish as it seemed, she wanted him for herself'forever and ever.

She was still just starting to shake on top of him, her labial lips still tight and fully wrapped around him, when one of Gurmeet's hands left her breasts and smoothly made its way to where his shaft disappeared into her wet center. Firmly, he stroked at her lady-hood with his thumb, making her gasp before he pressed down on the swollen nub of flesh. She cried out helplessly, writhing, breasts heaving as he maintained the pressure on the nub, milking wave after wave of her orgasm out of her.

Her mouth was still open as she tried to catch her breath when he pulled her down into a tight embrace, arms around her lower back, making her lie on top of him as he braced his heels on the ground. He nuzzled at her breasts before he took one in his mouth. Then he began to thrust up into her, and cum began to flow out of her in a steady stream as he held her hips and went into her long and deep. Thank god the sets were abandoned, for anyone could make out from the shadows hitting the white curtains, what they were doing. His mouth travelled from one breast and hard nipple to the other, his tongue lapping at the sensitive valley between her boobs on each trip. Helpless, she could only brace her hands on the floor on either side of his head, eyes closed and crying out again and again as she came repeatedly on his thrusting shaft, the warm mouth travelling between her nipples only intensifying her pleasure.

Drashti found herself collapsed on top of him when he stopped his thrusts into her. He was hard inside her, and her lady part was tight around his manhood. Eyes still closed, she felt him heave and roll himself on top of her. Her legs fell open around him as his lips came down on hers and she opened her mouth for his tongue, thrusting hers back up his mouth to taste him like he was tasting her. He did not continue to make love to her; he only kept himself inside her as he feasted on her full lips, her tongue and her mouth. Having just come enough times that she had lost count, she was content to just savor the feeling of his manhood inside her and enjoy his kiss, rubbing her breasts against his chest as she stroked his back. Their thunderous kisses grew soft and quick, but she still moaned against his mouth as he stroked her bare hips, turning her on again. Then they parted; he lifted his head to look into her eyes while locking his hand into hers possessively. She stared back and stroked his ruffled hair and the wiped the tiny beads of sweat near the wound on his forehead.
He stood up, his manhood still hard and gleaming wetly. Drashti sat up, surprise and trepidation on her face as she looked up at him, feeling weirdly empty, especially between her legs. The sight of his manhood made the emptiness between her legs all the more acute. She was shocked at how much she still wanted him inside her'she had come more times in the past thirty minutes than she ever had in her whole life and she was still ready to spread her legs for him again. Smiling reassuringly he reached down for her and she put her hand in his as he pulled her up. Her knees were already weak and his kiss did not help matters as she melted into his arms, his hard manhood pressing against her belly. For a hopeful moment, Drashti thought he was going to lift her up and settle her on his manhood so she moaned as she lifted one leg up and leaned into his chest to give him more access. But instead, his hand reached for their clothes. He handed her the salwar and dupatta on the ground and then went ahead and began dressing himself.
"That's it, you're done?"
"I'm never done, but I don't like putting on a show. The crew will return soon so we better get settled'must look decent and proper."
"So what now?"
"We rehearse and do the scene, and the'".
"And then what?"
"And then, I take you out for dinner, if you'll have me, that is."
"I always want you." And that's all that needed to be said because everything else that was going to be said would be during dinner'till then their eyes spoke of the matters of the hearts. Some say it's a sin to cross the thin line between reality and fiction, but oh did it feel so right when it concerned Gurmeet and Drashti'guess boundaries are meant to be broken, especially the sinfully blissful ones.
(FF is written by Sweet Coco)



Today is Drashti's birthday.Drashti wore a red saree and matching jewellery for the birthday party.She looked at the mirror.
Her face was gloomy.
"I miss Gurmeet.If he was here it would have been so nice.But he won't be able to come today as he has some important work.So sad".
Surprisingly she saw Gurmeet's reflection on the mirror.
She turned back.
"Gurmeet!Am i dreaming?"
He smiled.
"No.I'm here to make your birthday special.I wanted to make my visit a surprise.That's why i lied to you that i won't be able to be a part of your birthday celebration".
She smiled.
"You don't know how much happiness you gave me by coming here today".
His eyes rolled at her.
They both felt a romantic breeze.
His lips moved only to admire her beauty,"Drashti...you look very beautiful.Gorgeous".
She blushed.
"Drashti...don't you want my birthday present?"
She was eager to see his birthday gift.
He held her hands and took her down.He held her hand as if she was his wife.

She saw some people play beautiful instrumental music.
She was surprised.
"Gurmeet..you are lovely.You made this evening musical".
He said,"This is the rhythm of love".
She blushed.
He plays a song from the movie 'Kaalia'.
Drashti sees many pairs dancing to the song.
It was a beautiful sight.
"This is another surprise for you Drashti.You love dance.Right?"
Gurmeet said.
"You are the best",she said.
Gurmeet did not wait to lead her to the dance floor to dance with him.
"Hey Hey.. Ho.. Ho..{Gurmeet did not wait to lead her to the dance floor to dance with him cheerfully}
Ho Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge
Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge.."
While the song was going on and he was dancing with her his mind spoke to her silently,
"When you are with me i feel that you are my world.If you are with me,I can even face death with a smile".


He played guitar in between to make her feel his heart beats.
She spoke to him silently,
"Gurmeet...i know what this guitar signifies.It is giving birth to music to caress me.It is pouring your love on me.I can understand how much your heart is longing to be with me".
"Maana Ki Andheron Ke Gehre Hain Bahut Saaye
Are Maana Ki Andheron Ke Gehre Hain Bahut Saaye
Par Gum Hai Yahan Kisko Aati Hai To Raat Aaye
Hum Raat Ke Seene Mein Ek Shama Jalah Denge.."
His heart spoke to her,
"You don't have to get scared of darkness.Infact you should fall in love with darkness.Because during darkness you can see a shadow.I'm your shadow and i will always follow you to shower love upon you".
"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La..Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La..Andaaz Sikha Denge..


Drashti got lost in her own dreams about Gurmeet.

"Hum To Hai Dilwale Khanjar Se Nahi Marte
Are Hum To Hai Dilwale{He cupped her face in his arms}
La La.. Khanjar Se Nahin Marte La La..{Her heart jumped with romantic joy}
Hum Zulfon Ke Qaidi Hai Sooli Se Nahi Darte
Sooli Ko Bhi Zulfon Ki Zanjeer Banaa Denge{He touched her arms romantically}

She responded internally,
"Gurmeet..Your soft touch is sensuous enough to soothe me".
She rests herself on his body and enjoys him completely without taking her eyes off him.


"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La.. Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La..) Andaaz Sikha Denge.."{He danced with her putting his heart and soul into it}.

"Aye Ahl-E-Jahaan Tumko Nafrat Ki Hai Bimaari
Aye Ahl-E-Jahaan Tumko La La..Nafrat Ki Hai Bimaari La La..
{Again he played his guitar making her feel that her Prince Charming is right in front of her}.
She thought,
"Gurmeet..i feel that you are playing your guitar to propose to me.Its rhythm says 'I love you' to me".
Gurmeet's heart spoke to her,
"Drashti..please understand what i mean by this music.I'm expressing my love through music.My dance movements are confessing my love to you.Even if you hate me i will wipe your hatred with my musical love".

"Bhadkaaya Karo Shole Phenka Karo Chingari
Hum Pyar Ki Shabnam Se Har Aag Bujha Denge.."
{He made her put her arms on his shoulders and put his arms in her curvy waist and continued dancing}.
"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La.. Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La.. Andaaz Sikha Denge.."
His heart tells her,
"When you are with me i forget the world where i live.For me you are my only world.I feel that I am free from death when you are with me".

He turns her around completely.This dance movement was mesmerizing.
"Haan Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge".
{Her fingers went through his face and held his neck softly with the power of romance to show how much she loved him}.
Her heart spoke to him,
"I love you so much that I can even die in your arms".
Her emotions burst out.She could not control her feelings anymore.
She expressed her love,"I love you".
He replied,"This is what i was waiting to hear from you.I love you too".
She blushed,"I was also waiting to hear these magical words from you".
They shared a romantic eye lock.
(FF is written by jasminerahul)
Edited by GurTiLiciousW - 13 years ago
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Gurmeet monologue:
I sighed and hung up the call! Okay, so I have to attend this marriage anyhow! Sigh'..Adi and Pinky are my real close friends'.both onscreen and off-screen'I can't say no! I had a severe headache'and the function was in the evening. I sat on the couch thinking whether to go or not in this condition. Hey wait!!!! Adi and pinky right??? That means "she" is also coming!!! My headache was gone in a second and my thoughts drifted towards "her"!
Drashti'.yes that's her name! she has been the lead actress opposite to me in our show'I'd better prefer her as my PARTNER thought (winks), over a year now! She is everything you actually want to find in a girl..sweet'salty'spicy'and she is beautiful with a charming persona'not a tinge of negativity! No wonder I fell for her!
Though we are done with our show but what I feel for her is far from being done! I so want to tell her my feelings'how much I love her'but am kinda scared of her reaction..I mean she always uses the damn term "PROFESSIONAL" for whatever we share'be it onscreen or off-screen! Sometimes she is just so cutely stupid'I feel like giving her a big hug there and then'but that darn stupid "PROFESSIONALISM" thing comes right in between and I have to hold myself back! I've been dropping hints too..but god knows she understood or not!!! Anyways I have to prepare my clothes for tonight'I will tell her about what I feel'."I GUESS" that is!

DD's Flat
Drashti's Monologue:
Isn't it cute? The ever loving cuties are getting married!!! Adi and Pinky'.wow I couldn't ignore their tiny-mini romance onscreen and off-screen'and look..3 months after the show they are finally getting married! They are so much in love'..
Did I just say "love"??? and that mere 4 lettered word brought 'him' back to my mind'.and I suddenly started missing all those days we used to shoot together! I have to admit'whenever there was a close scene to be shot'I'd have zillions of butterflies dancing in my tummy'even the number of re-takes couldn't help either! Aaarrrggghhh'.. why are you affecting me so much Mr. Gurmeet choudhary?

But I can't deny the fact that I do feel something when you are around'I miss those numerous phonecalls we made'.why don't you call me now stupid? Yeah right'.I remember'why would he call you stupid Drashti?? Tune hi to har baat pe "PROFESSIONALISM" term use kiya tha'ab khud hi jhel!
I couldn't help make a baby face'I did all that due to this stupid media'they are expert at exaggerating things and I didn't want it to affect "whatever we share"..i don't want him to feel awkward!
Do you even think of me the way I do? I'll be seeing you tonight after so many days'don't know why but my heart says you'll be there!
Adi & Pinky's marriage
Gurmeet monologue:
I reached late'apparently all the guests had arrived..i had slept in the afternoon and I did like a log! When I had woken up it was already 6'and here I am..LATE!
Adi came running and hugged me tight'I congratulated him and gave him the gift I brought for the couple! I caught up with many known faces there but one thing did amuse me'there was not a sign of a single female specie in that large hall'..well the bride was absconding too! My eyes searched for 'her''Are YOU even here?

Drashti's monologue:
"aaaccchhhiii''"
Pinky looked at me with her big khol decorated eyes!
Pinky- Drash'are you sick?
Drashti- no..am okay pinky! Its just a nasal irritation with all these perfumes and flowers!
I myself didn't want to believe that! Are you here, my heart screamed, are you thinking about me?
I was helping pinky in getting ready before we go downstairs for the 'phere' and here we had another problem'.i mean a tiny-mini problem! Pinky's sisters and cousins challenged the ladkewale for a dance! And yeah time limit was there too! Within 15 minutes they had to prepare a dance seq and if the girls are impressed, pinky will be handed over to Adi without and hassel' and they'd allow Adi to meet pinky before the phere!
Stupid it was'but it was fun! And being close to pinky,'I was pulled into the ladkiwala side! But my thoughts came to a halt with a loud clapping and hooting downstairs! So the boys did accept the challenge! Sigh..but its going to be fun, I guessed'my heart still expecting to see him the moment I gfot down!

Gurmeet's monologue:
I cursed Adi under my breath! What was I doing standing at the centre of the hall? Oh yeah I remember'Mr. scardy cat Adi actually pleaded me to dance'for that stupid challenge! No wonder girls thinks all the stupid things of this world!
"yaar Gurmeet'tu to mera sabse acha dost hain'please..mere bhai..help kar de na..tu kitna acha dance bhi karta hain'.pleeeaaajjj!"'I mentally mimicked that chashmish! Yaar apne shaadi ke din bhi'uff and yes I had to do it..dance'I had no idea what to do!!! It was ladke walon ki izzat ka sawal!
Well my mind was not in it'it was with someone whom I was longing to see so badly'.
I heard girls giggling and laughing'I looked up'so the great female specie decided to show up finally with me being the scapegoat now! But my eyes were glued to the stairs'..where are you dhrashti? Why are you testing my patience??
And there'a familiar laughter echoed in my ears'was I imagining things or it was for real? She descended the stairs slowly with the bride'talking and laughing to other girls'.well I didn't even look at pinky'my eyes were glued to her! an angel she was'pristine and divine! Her orange colored shimmering ghaghra-choli'her curly hair adorned with some kind of accessories I don't even know! She smiled looking down at us'.or I'd probably say "at me"'was that for me Drashti?
And suddenly like lightning struck me..i felt so energized..like I knew what to do now'with her around..my heart knew no boundaries or inhibitions!

Drashti's monologue:
I came down'and the 1st thing my eyes caught was his face'wow..he looked so sooo beautiful'.just the way I have always wanted him to be'..! he was looking at me so intently'my heart skipped several beats'a smile escaped my lips without my knowledge! Gosh'you are making me do the silliest of things Mr. choudhary'I laughed at my own thought! Before even I could join the other girls'he was up on his feet to the tune'oh wait wait'that was one of my favorites!!! Oh my god'he was dancing on that!!!
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, Bajne de taashe dhol..
OMG'he tunred around and winked at me in the 1st line itself??? And that too in front of all the people'my mouth tunred a big O though my cheeks showed red!!!!
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, ras kaano vich ghol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol
Mann de naina tu khol
Chahat ke moti rol
Dil hunda ae anmol, ke daulat se na tol
Aa sohni tenu chaand ki main choodi pehrawa
Mainu kar de ishaara te main doli lai aanwa
Wow'he really dances well'his black gold studded sherwani'ohh it was making my eyes go wide everytime it revealed his broad chest'.and the lyrics'.why does it feel its for me????

Gurmeet st:
I just can't believe she is here'.my heart is racing like a horse'thumne ka naam hi nahi le raha'and there is no media today'.. no one to stop me!!!! And am going to talk to you todat dhrashti'no more running away!!!!!
Other guys had joined me'wow it was so much fun!!!!!!!
Drashti st:
So is that a real challenge??? There is no one to stop us today'I feel so happy'my feet just want to dance to the tune'arrghh..i couldn't hold back myself and ran to join him''
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, ras kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol

Jaanleva teri ada, kaise na koi ho fida
Tera ang sharara jaise maare lashkara soniye
Dekhan ta dil dhadke, tann mein agan bhadke
Surat aisi mannmoni kitta dassa tu hai sohni heeriye
OMG he actually pulled me to him'twirling me in his arms'it had never felt this nice'because I know we were never this free''I just want him to hold me like that'in his arms''.
Gurmeet's st:
Wow the lyrics sits well with us'I so want you in my life yaar'.
Chahne wala hoon tera, dekh le idhar zara
Tu jo vekhe ik nazar kara lakhan da shukar sohniye
Dekh to tu keh ke mujhe, jaan bhi de dunga tujhe
Tera aisa hoon deewana, tune ab tak yeh na jaana heeriye
I brought her close to me'.and held her by her waist'her skin never felt this smooth'. Ohh you are making me go all insane sweetheart!!!!! If I get a chance'I'll definitely steal you from all these people here and take you to a place where it would just be us..you and I'and no one else!!!!!
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, ras kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol
Mann de naina tu khol
Chahat ke moti rol
Dil honda ae anmol, je daulat se na tol
Aa sohni tenu chaand ki main choodi pehrawa
Mainu kar de ishaara te main doli lai aanwa
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, gal mitthi mitthi bol..
Drashti's st:
Am sad'why did the song had to come to an end this soon???? I was having so much fun'all the girls and boys are having so much fun'but I really want to talk to him for once'alone'.everyone had joined us'dancing to their hearts fill..rejoicing at the union of two souls'.but my heart wants something else..
Just then I felt a warm hand slide across my waist'.i shivered with a touch'.he was there'pulling me closer to him'..i looked into his eyes'they had so much in them'and I couldn't miss that naughty glint too'I almost stopped breathing'what was he doing???? So many people were around us'..
And the next moment..he actually pulled me out of the crowd without anyone's notice'.and we were heading out of the venue in no time'I looked at him and he winked again'.so Mr. choudhary wants to play han??? I smiled'.so we were going on a secret date???
(FF is written by kawaii_geet)




Edited by GurTiLiciousW - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by GurTiLiciousW - 13 years ago

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