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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum nd amazing updates
CONGRATS ON D 21TH THREAD
srry haven't got time to comment lately
but wonderful updates
nd waiting 4 more
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 139

Maans hand slowly slipped from geets as she walked into the lift. She turned around and gave him a weak smiled before heading inside. He stood their watching not liking this pain in her eyes. The fake smile.. this lifeless curve in her face.

next day was her bday. He had to make it special for her. He didn't know how but he had to... he couldn't see her like this... it was heart wrenching, killing him.
He sneaked inside her place with a cake, flowers.. & champagne bottle, he tiptoed & peeped in & saw.. she was cutely cuddling up in her duet & mumbling something.. switching off her phone.. she didn't want to talk to any one.
He went back & looked for match stick .. Geet heard something & came to the kitchen with her thief danda!!!
she hit him red & blue... screaming,...chor chor.. chor.. in the darkness
he managed to scream.. misti plz mat maroo..
Geet covered her mouth & switched on the light only to find him.. all red.. marks.. & the flowers on his head.
Aap yaha kya kar rahen ho?
He cutely picked the bacha kucha flowers & gave it to her.. happy birthday
she twisted her lips & turned away
I thought u were supposed to say thank u
she looked at him from corner of her eyes.
He lit the candle & placed the cake infront of her.. happy birthday
her eyes sparkled reading the letters on the cake.. happy birthday to mistimia...
love puchki
she read it couple of times... loving the whole cuteness in it.
Still didn't give in...
Maan ' arren yeh kya kar rahi ho.. jaldi blow karo mujhe cake khana hain
she just blew it... he pulled the cake away aisen nahi..
she gave him a questioning look
close ur eyes & make a wish
she crossed her arms... mujhe kuch nahi karna
aacha aacha.. main hi wish kartha hoon humarenliyen...
he came around... holding the cake in one hand & cover her eyes... while closing his own
he murmurer something.. chalo.. blow karo
she blew it...
the candle went off... he smiled...
she looked at him.. hogaya..
he grinned & pointed down at the candle that lit back up... dehko.. kanha huwa
she looked down.. the candle was.. on again ..
this is not done.. aap wo.. magic wala candle layen ho
it will not go off...

he grinned naughtily.. holding the cake infront of her face...
she blew it again & again.. & again
until the whole candle was exhausted.
He held her hand & made her cut the cake. She rolled her eyes least interested in anything. He fed the cake to her. She ate it reluctantly.. still unsure of his next move.. he smashed the whole cake on her face unexpectedly.. she looked at him in utter shock.. she stood like a statue with all the cake & frosting on her face.. & Maan fell off laughing holding his stomach...
Geet furiously looked at him.. looking every where to get something to throw at him... she managed to pick the bits & pieces of the cake wiped it on his face
bahut haasi aa rahi hain.. na.. yeh lo
.. he laughed more..
she irritatedly brushed her cake filled cheeks to his.. yeh bhi
he laughed.. trying to push her away.. she brushed her other cheeks..
he laughed.. circling his arm around her.. aisen mat karo..he rested his head on hers
he smiled delighted seeing her playful ..silently relishing in the intimacy.
He brushed her hair aside, placing a peck behind her ear whispering.. happy birthday
he rested his head on her soft shoulder, breathing in her sweet fragrance mixed with that of cakes.
He kissed the back of her slender neck again..is there anything I can do to make u happier.. he said caressing his lips tenderly on her shoulders.
His words with his touch send jitters down her... she closed her eyes.. moaning umm
he softly cupped her messy face.. she opened her eyes to gaze into his, unsure of his intentions. Maan placed his fingers upon her trembling lips to ease her worry.
He uttered sensuously... I will not do anything .. definitely not anything that will make u angry
I simply wish to hold ..to feel the depth of us.

All the while enticing her lips.. with soft tender butterfly kisses.

Precap
oops taali Geet
-PREV PART 138 NEXT LINK THREAD 22-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
yipiiieee me 1st this tym!!!
wow update was beautiful di
the way he closed her eyes n made her blow the candle
me sooo dead!!😍
it was just straight down from a fairytale!!!!!😳
n yeah that spark is der..but its not getting enough wind!!!!!
hope the next update doesnt go sad again!!!
maan is just pampering her to no ends...
just to ake up for all those time he had hurt her!!!
how sweet of him!!!!!!
😳
waiting for next abhi se!
😃
Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i can only imagine Maan as "all red marks & the flowers on his head."

cute b'day celebration
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
on 1st page 😆

read 3 parts together...felt bad for armaan...

prachi kamini muh band rakh apna...😡 muski pls kill her...for all of us...i guess every one wants d same...

raj pls help...maan get armaan back if u want her happy...

wanted maan to confess atleast in front of raj...i hated his fear "for geet being preg"...if u did it den take d responsibility...

armaan pls come bck...


Edited by maanmeet1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rocking updates. I loved the cake smashing to make her laugh. Maan is trying to make up big time. What was his wish for both of them?Please continue soon.
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woow muskaan very very thanks for another update yaar, just loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...again geet taali ab kya hoga...eagerly waiting 4r nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
janeman lovely update... chotu correction... its champagne and not champion... change that waise i hv been asking for long... 1 month hua nahi kya???? unka marriage certificate abhi tak aaya nahi?? NT aur dev ka kya hua... unki engagement hogi ke nahi...
precap says talli Geet...so kya aur ek face off hoga?? oh hubby -wifey...mr stranger and mrs stranger???
Edited by vivacious_gurl - 13 years ago

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