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Posted: 13 years ago
part 7
OMG poor Geet...
and Maan is an idiot...
cont soon...
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Hey guys how are you all? 😃 Gosh, I am sooo tired today 🤢 Buff...had a long day...feeling very sleepy in the whole session classes 😆 plus very awkward without updating, coming on PC and TV 😆 well, seeing the new teachers and all...I am so tired for an update; updates for both SS coming in two weeks times maybe! I'll have to write bits to bits 😕 See you all soon! 😊 Love Frankie 😳

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Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Hey guys how are you all? 😃 Gosh, I am sooo tired today 🤢 Buff...had a long day...feeling very sleepy in the whole session classes 😆 plus very awkward without updating, coming on PC and TV 😆 well, seeing the new teachers and all...I am so tired for an update; updates for both SS coming in two weeks times maybe! I'll have to write bits to bits 😕 See you all soon! 😊 Love Frankie 😳

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Geet kept pacing the floor. She heard the door swung opened and Yash entered with a bitter expression on his face. Yash tried to huff but before he could Geet stopped him.

"Yash, where did you go?" Geet asked.

Yash didn't response and was walking inside again.

"Yash, I asked you a question" Geet questioned again in her super hyper bold voice.

Yash looked and nodded towards the door; Geet followed his gaze and stared shock.

"M-M-Maan?"

"So my suspicion was right, Yash knows" Geet thought. "Hey babaji, wonder what this guy messed up with" Geet prayed.

"I think you people need a talk really badly" Yash said and huffed inside while Geet stared opened mouthed at his moving silhouette.

"One of these days, he'll drive me crazy" Geet sighed and felt Maan's presence behind her. And the next second later, Maan broke down, his eyes filled with tears. He held her hands gently and said "Geet, will you forgive your Maan for his idiotic behaviour?"

Geet stared mum. "I am sorry for everything'I am sorry'baby'do tell your mamma to forgive your papa" he said patting her tummy'.

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Epilogue

Some years later

Khurana Mansion ' Kitchen

"Taking care of these two is almost impossible, hey babaji'one was less that you send another one" Geet prayed shaking her head while playing with the spatula.

"G-G-Geet!" Maan shouted.

"Yes!"

"Where's my green file?"

"Green file? How's am I suppose to know?" Geet shouted back.

"Geet!"

"I am coming'I am coming'give me a few minutes"

Maan and Geet's bedroom

Maan looked down kicking his shoe with his bare feet and said "this green file will drive me crazy"

"Where's my coat now ' which matches this suit" he said frustrated. He looked around moving some objects here and there when he felt someone tugging his pants.

"Papa'are you searching for this" a little boy pointed to the coat, half falling from his shoulders.

"Yup, why are you wearing it?" Maan asked stroking the little boy's cheek. "Papa, I am the future MSK of the Khurana Constructions" the boy said proudly "'and I'll be just like you" the boy finished. "Sure" Maan grinned "but now can you just take this out" Maan pointed to his coat around his shoulders. The boy nodded. Maan went to take a quick glance in the mirror. The little boy ran and stood next to his father. "I am the future Maan Singh Khurana" the boy said proudly again.

"By the way Papa'" the boy started when Geet came in the room and interrupted "Maanish, drink this milk" Geet pointed to the glass. The little boy shook his head vigorously for a 'no' and shouted "I am not drinking this, I am old enough now". Geet looked irritated at Maan and thought "same everyday episode". "You know, son, you should drink this because it made me very strong and muscular" Maan pointed to his biceps. Maanish poked them with his fingers and said "really?" Maan nodded. "Oh really?" Geet said sarcastically "then Dadimaa was saying something else, huh?" Geet asked teasing Maan. Maan went red and clenched between his teeth "respect me; I have a reputation before my son". Geet chucked when a little girl came crashing inside.

"Papa! Mama! I wanna an ice-cream" the girl screamed loud.

"Ice-cream? It's not good for health! You shan't eat that" Maanish reprimanded the girl. She was the twin of Maanish. "Honestly Geeti, this is bad for health" Maan told his daughter stroking his daughter's hair. "Hey babaji" the girl sighed "what will happen to these two?" Geeti said. Geet laughed "that's look just like my daughter". Maanish frowned while Geeti added "I wanna some pani puris too" and jumped around. "Pani puris?" Maan and Maanish said together. Geeti shook her head. "Was mama like this too?" Maanish asked his father. Maan nodded.

"Very difficult to handle" Maan told his son.

"Very eerie" the boy said.

"Huh?"

"By the way Junior Maan ' you're just five, so you better watch your mouth" Geeti said.

"What?"

"Here we go again" Geet whispered to Maan who was smiling.

🥱feeling very sleepy n you all - STILL AWAKE for a comment?

Edited by music_girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww nice update...
wow maneet hve twins...
luved it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..dat was so sweet epilogue..
luvd deir twins...
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Posted: 13 years ago

love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful epilogue...loved it...😛
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lovely ending to a beautiful tale...

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