NEW FF MAANEET TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD3 UPD pt26 pg120 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update even though very painful n emotional one. geet really deserves this pain . now she understood maans love for her n also her love for him. song was apt for the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the way you related the song with geet helpless and Maan pain
waiting for update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg why maan ka accident
i know u told me but still...u know what i could literally feel his pain

aise kaise ho gaya...geet too is feeling guilty i mean running to find that letter of her's sent by maan

truly a great update
well i know what is coming up in the third twist...
but my mouth is sealed up
brilliant update...emotions u portrayed were just fab
continue soon
luvya


Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear...😭
😭 loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends. There is a NOTE at the end of this update it is a humble request kindly read the note it is really important

Love-Piya

PART 25

Maan's condition was deteriorating with time

The doctors decided to operate him immediately

Meanwhile,

Geet continued walking all alone she was feeling thirsty. It was late night all the shops were closed

The wind was flowing in a different manner there was a strange warning in the movement of the wind

Geet could understand the language of the wind she knew that the present situation was not good but she was unaware that much worst circumstances are waiting for the right time to take her in its embrace

The clouds covered the moon entirely since they didn't have the courage to witness the situation that was awaiting her

The leaves were trembling and were expressing their fear

The trees were in a horrified state and they started dancing along the lines of the wind giving her signals that something is wrong and she needs to be careful

But today Geet could not analyze this situation properly she felt that maybe Maan is in some kind of danger and that's why she is getting these signals

This was definitely the truth but an incomplete truth

She was aware that Maan was not there with her but she was unaware that someone else was following her

She knew that Maan's loved filled eyes could not see her but she was unaware that a predator was subsequently eyeing her with his lustful eyes

She was aware that today she was weak but she was unaware that someone was attentive to her weakness

Her legs were moving with great difficulty but a pair of legs was following her effortlessly

Her eyes were getting heavy due to the guilt of rejecting the love of a golden hearted man like Maan but somebody was capturing every movement of hers through his cunning eyes

Finally Geet could not take it any longer she fell on the road unconsciously

The leaves started shaking vigorously due to which some rain drops falls on her eyes

They were trying their level best to wake her up but all the attempts were a complete failure

Geet did not move

A devilish smirk could be seen on his face

He started approaching her.

The area was an isolated one he knew that today no one could stop him as the girl who was lying in front of him was no longer a tigress she was a weak cat and he was a monster who was ready to attack her with his evil spell

Slowly the distance between them reduced

He removed a cloth which had chloroform in it and he placed that cloth on her nose now Geet was totally under his control

He lifted her in his arms and started walking

Meanwhile,

The doctors had almost lost hope but all of a sudden Maan's heartbeat started becoming normal

There was a sudden demand of his heart that no you have to survive how can u die when your angel is in danger?

How can u sleep here peacefully when there is uproar in the life of your Geet?

You promised her that you will never leave her alone then how can u betray her again when she requires you the most?

Today you have to choose between death and your love

Is your pain more superior than the safety of your princess if yes then u can die and if u chose to die then no one will ever believe in the divine bond of love

Be ashamed of yourself today you are humiliating the sacred emotion of love

This is your last chance if u really love her then come out from the clutches of death and go and submit yourself in the arms of life

She needs u Maan she needs u

Maan started responding to the treatment the operation was a success

Maan was shifted to the ICU as the doctors wanted to monitor his condition for sometime

Meanwhile,

The predator was successful in his evil plan. His prey was lying helplessly under him and he was relishing his food to the fullest

He continued exposing Geet to chloroform as he did not want to take any chance as he was aware that Geet is a fighter and he could take advantage of her only when she was not in her senses

Maan suddenly opened his eyes and shouted Geet's name

Maan: Geet ''..

The doctors rushed to his aid and tried to calm him down

But even in that condition Maan was much stronger than the doctors

Maan: Leave me my Geet needs me

He was right Geet was lying like a lifeless soul on the roadside

The devil was successful in his plan and he had left her like garbage on the roadside

PRECAP: This day was a dark day in her life as an unfortunate incident had occurred in her life but this pain was nothing in front of the happiness that she was experiencing by Maan's mere presence around her. Yes this was not a loss for her she had found her love back and hence for her this day could never be a dark day she would always remember this day as the day where she found her life back her Maan back

NOTE: Okay friends I know many of u might be upset with this update but believe me as a writer it was more difficult for me to pen this part.

This incident was bound to occur sooner or later Geet has so many enemies who were waiting for an opportunity to harm her and today one of them got this opportunity.

Geet has been raped but that does not mean that now her character will become weak. She is a fighter and will remain a fighter till the end of this FF she will punish the culprit at the right time in her own style. Maan would be her support but the decisions would be taken by Geet

From next update onwards a new journey of Maaneet would begin. Trust me guys this story is different and not the usual Damsel in Distress and Knight in shining armor type no this is not the theme of this story.

Right now I can only tell u the next update would be the starting of a beautiful love story of Maaneet. Please trust me

THE NEXT UPDATE IS READY THE RESPONSE TO THIS PART WOULD DECIDE WHETHER I WOULD B UPDATING THE NEXT PART ON MONDAY OR NOT.

Once again I request each one of you to trust me I promise I would give a love story that would be very close to your hearts.

Love- Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great but sad part😭

someone raped geet if i am not wrong then the person is dev or arjun too can do it for revenge 😡
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i wont tell it as awesome update coz it was not an awesome update as for my POV

i never liked this rape thing in any of the FF but seems like writers r takng rape as a common thing and how easily it could be done

i dont know what should i comment on this update

i know wh has done this its dev i and i know at the end he wold get beaten badly or maximum he would be send to jail and his punishment is over in the FF seriously why cant the writer come up with a punishment for these guys so that it would br worth of update but no what u all would do jus let maan beat him black and blue and its over then

why cant u think differently for the punishment just like cutting his ***** so that he would know what pain is or think something differently cant u use ur creativity in deciding what should be done with these guys😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Like nt wrkng di..
well written prt,waitng 4 their story to begin
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was unexpected. But looking forwards to what you have in store for us. Trust that you will not let us down.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear superb
who.is the man who kidnsp geet dear
u thinl dev
omg did he touch her dear
snd she can feel msan dear
i feel.ut is a short update from.u dar
pls update rhe next update soon desr

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