Modern Cinderella Maaneet SS Last Part - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
amazing
sweet
loved it
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Excellent part dear...loved it...
please update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Modern Cinderella Part 3


Geet looks at the clock.It is going to be 10 o' clock.
R:I have to leave now.
Geet runs away.
Maan:Hey...
He thinks:I could not even ask her who she is.Before that itself she left.Why?
Chutki:hy did this girl run away so fast?
Bindi:Very strange.

Geet reaches home.
Raghupati:Luckily you came before Ketki.
Geet:I was so nervous.Now i'm relived.
R:How was the party? And the Prince..?
Geet:Your prayers and blessings favoured me.He chose me.
She is excited:Really?
Geet:Yes grandmom.
Raghupati hugs her.
Geet:But grandmom...i did'nt tell him anything about myself.If he comes to know that i'm his maid...
R:Don't worry about that now.Everything will come well.You change your clothes fast.Otherwise others will doubt.

Geet changes her clothes.

Maan is still thinking of Geet.
MAAN:I miss her.I want her...I will find her.
He feels that Geet is near her.He is excited.His fingers crave to touch her.Suddenly se vanishes.He is out of mood.

Chukti sees her clothes lying simply.
C:Geet did'nt iron my clothes today.Geet...come and iron my clothes.Stupid girl!Where is this girl?
Chutki goes to Geet's room.She is shocked to see the cream saree on the table.
C:This is what that girl wore for the party.That means my doubt is true.That is Geet.
Bindi comes:What are you doing here?
C:Look at this saree.
B:This is that girl's saree.Right?I remember this saree because of it's simpliity.
C:I told you..it was Geet.
Bindi is shocked:Geet!How did she become so beautiful?

Ketki slaps Geet many times.Raghupati is crying:enough Ketki.
K:Without our knowledge you went for the party?The Prince chose you.Because of you my daughters got rejected.
Raghupati:Not because of Cinderella...your daughters don't deserve the Prince.
K:Huh!Now onwards don't go to the palace to do work.You should not meet the Prince again.
Geet is crying.Raghupati consoles her:The Prince is made for you by God.It can't be changed at all.Wait and see.

Maan tastes the food:This food is horrible.
Meenakshi:Geet..our cook stopped coming.
MAAN:Why?
M:I don't know.
MAAN:Tell her to come mom.If she needs more salary..please give that also.Her food is that good.
Meenakshi rings up Ketki:Ketki...why is Geet not coming here?
Ketki is hunting for words.
M:Maan is not liking the food now.He wants Geet's food.
Ketki gets irritated.
K:She is not well.
M:Oh!I hope she will get better and will start coming here soon.We will give more salary.
Ketki is happMaan:Really?
M:Yes.
Ketki thinks:No one can recognise Geet.If she gets good salary,why should i stop her from going there?But what if she tells the Prince that she is the Cinderella who danced with him?No...even if she tells the truth,he won't believe her.Because she looks very different now.Very ugly..

Geet is happy to go to the palace.
Maan comes out of the room.Geet longs to see him.Her eyes are on him.He looks at her.She hides behind the wall.
He thinks:Why did this girl hide?Why was she staring at me?
He goes near the wall:Please come.on't hide yourself.
Slowly Geet comes before him.She is embarassed.
G:Namaste Rajkumarji.
MAAN:Why were you staring at me?Why did you hide?
Suddenly her eyes strike him.He is reminded of Cinderella's eyes.
He thinks:These eyes remind me of Cinderella's eyes.I have seen this girl before.
Suddenly he remembers that she is his favourite cook Geet whose pet name is Cinderella.
He thinks:Is she the same girl?
He looks at her deeply.Geet becomes conscious.She sweats.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

oh great Maan remember her eyes

lets see hoe he finds the truth
Edited by t_areeb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
ossum part dear
superb
really loved it
waiting for last part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
wow her eyes are always a reminder for her
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

oh great Maan remember her eyes

lets see hoe he finds the truth

😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
awesum part...
so maan recognizes her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
oh wow...just lovely...Maan will definately recognise her
Ketki's greed became a boon for Geet finally...
such a sweet update. Can't wait for Maan to recognise and marry her...waiitng eagerly for next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
awsome update







update last part today plzzz

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