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Sorry yar... Wot be long >< I am trying not to lose the plot... I am trying to type allot of parts in one go :)
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

Sorry yar... Wot be long >< I am trying not to lose the plot... I am trying to type allot of parts in one go :)

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MORE PIYA
PART 11




Figuring out your self was probably the most easiest thing for anyone, but for maan, it was something beyond imagination. Sitting on a cold hard rock outside of the shopping mall, staring at the big black bin that's all he could find useful. From other people prospective it looked utterly boring, however for maan, thinking the core of its exgistance and process it went through to have the dignity stand in middle of a shopping mall that's interesting.

It looked utterly nonsense to compare a person with a bin, but that's what geet made him feel. A worthless lost annoyed human. For her he may not be even a human...

she stood infront of him, Her shadow kept moving from one side to another, irritating!... Maans light brown eyes with green touch looked right deep in her. She froze on the spot. Geet never refuges he did posses a beautiful pair of eyes. Hunger, anger, filled with anguish.

"will you stop!" the irritation clearly visible. Which was a great achievement for geet. She stared at him blankly for a while. Maan couldn't guess was it like any other girl when they look at his deep and instantly wake up in to there dream land or was it a look of filth. In addition he also wouldn't refuge that she also posses a beautiful pair of eyes. Far better then all his x- GF! And she is only 14.

"does it bother you?"
"yes"
Geet smiled and started to move even faster. Rano have left to bring some heavy shopping bag. Giving maan geets responsibility. That's something odd. She have never shown keen interest on maan being responsible. But today, he wondered what made Rano change her mind.

"I want Ice-cream!" geet demanded.

Maan twitches his eyebrow, wondering where does she gets this fascinating ideas from. Moreover what gives her the hint he will buy her some ice-cream. This is nonsense. Asking maan?

"you must be out of your mind."
"surly, I am. Now if you can pay for your GF ice-cream why not me?"

That was a direct accusation, first he have never spend a single penny on anyone. Secondly he is not a ice-cream man who would would waste his valuable time to buy any girl ice-cream, let alone this geet who he can not stand.

Maan ignored her words, spines around, then slowly stood up from the rocky cold seat, walking in one of the shop. Geet flowed. She has no interest to leave him alone. That would be a foolish thing to do. She can feel how each pair of eyes were looking at them, no- no. Maan. She looked at few girls at the far corner, hiding behind piles of cloths. Giggling there way. Now who would giggle at something like maan?

Maan lazily flicked one cloths after another. Irritated. His nose could smell geets strong aroma. That irritated him further. "can you keep your distance."
"I surly would. But, I like the attention."
Maan stops his big buff body on the spot, while geet bumped on his back. Resting her palm on his shoulder. Holding it tight.
There was sudden noise of shock then few fraction of silent. Few girls was craving and wanted to kill geet. That touch felt like millions of bullet from girls to geet.

Maan furiously spines around. Resting his strong arm on her waist. He looked down with shock. His slim structure made him hungry. It looked out of ordinary in his hand. The long finger curled around her curvy back, under the white t-shirt. While the long thumb dug in geets belly button. His eyes looked down between the t-shirt and the black trouser where her slim stomach laid. Her cloths was short.

With agony he looked up. Pushed her against the long mirror that stood behind her. He parts his lips, with wrinkle on his forehead. "don't you dare come near me. Attention is something made for me not for you." maan did not realize how his finger was suppressing in geets stomach, leaving a red mark. Geet made a pleading face. Resting her small palm on his muscular bicep. Pushing with little force she possessed.
"what's wrong?" geet questioned nervously. Knowing him since young, attention is something he loves, and that seems to get wild day by day.

Maan looked at his reflection on the mirror then behind, Rano was on its way. He instantly freed her. Geet inhaled high amount of air to refuel her lungs then looked down at her stomach, five finger left prominent marks.

Rano came close. "I have been looking everywhere for you. Now shall we go!"

Maan gave one glare to geet and left.

Maan couldn't concentrate on anything except geet and her word case study. Surly this is not a big deal however it was threatening maans silence inside. Pushing him to the edge. It couldn't be any less painful when she constantly irritates him..

Maan sat silently on the sofa, watching telly, not that he ever showed any keen interest in telly but the news about Romania seems very interesting to him. Geet took her position, just few steps way.
"do you know I was wondering where to start!" geet suggested it. Wondering how to start a conversation with this idiot.
Maans face was straight, looking straight at the telly, like her presence barely mattered.
"I was thinking to start from you..."
Maan didn't react.
"however I was also thinking to find more information on Internet, who knows someone can be better then you..."
Maan instantly looked at geet with agony. Burning his skin.

Geet came forward, knew exactly how to irritate him. Knew exactly where to increase the pressure to ignite the fire.

"get out of my sight!"
"surly I can't do that!"
"maybe you can! Just need little thinking."
"oh really... Maybe you ought to think little extra. This is not your living room"

Maans light brown eyes showed tint of redness. From the pressure of his anger it was possible that few of his blood vassal in his eyes will burst. The jaw nonstop clenched against one another, will geet had big smirk on her face.

Maan straight way brought his hand and held her jaw tight. Her pink lips shivered yet there was no sign of frustration or anger on geets face from maans reaction which surprised him further. Then maan realize he was only holding her cheek lightly. Almost something have stopped him to heart her.

Maan looked down, thinking. This does not happen in football ground. when did he Started to care who he punch, who he beats up. No one even dare to question him, not even the roughest player on the field.

Geet rests her long hand against maans heart, "why don't you admit you can't heart me." a smile formed on geets cheek while that smile crashed maan from the highest mountain to the ground. Breaking every bone in his body.

"if I want to I can." he simply replied.

"no you can't that's because you care for me. I am your family" it was a straight answer, and demand of something. Her voice didn't sound like those normal girls when they demand I am your girlfriend, it was more of "get that right. I am your!" he confusingly looked at geet for while. Staining at her eyes. Wondering what to read. It surly wasn't his favourite pass time. Stare at geets eyes.



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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dil-se-di-dua-saubhagyavati-bhava/2653266/more-piya-v-and-j-ff-part-5-page-5-10-jan
well here is part 11...
:) just few more days then i will update like a rain
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago

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