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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN



<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Even me think about me same.But this is not the fact.I think toconsoleu is not a good thing when same is with me.</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">If it comes to themes I really wonder what kind of themes people want...Even Mona n Jyothi has hug no of people on list but comment hand ful.It means u r bad ..me bad..mona jyothi every buddy is bad in thinking</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">If it comes toEnglishI m not able to understand what kind of language these people want.Some times I think I knowEnglishor not if this is reason behind less response.Then I think if I m bad at languageskills how I did my masters inEnglishliterature where in our university there is no reappear nosupplementaryexams if any body fails in onesubjectit jst meansonething u hav lost ur year.</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">As my mom always says to me excess of every thing is bad.I think same is with me she forced me to read Russianliteratureinstead of comics from my childhood result is I m addict to literature.May b my mind has been stopped some where not able to accept puppyromance</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">When it comes to form in which I rite I don know which form people like ...satire..mockery...irony..tragedy..comedy..Ist person or narrative(as u use) n moreforms..I usually write in contemporary where there is no need to put our words in limits of tense rules.Means if some one is writingin past form...that one can't use present or other form in same flow...SoI alwaysmention a small note after each update...to tell people I knowgrammaticalrules.I try to use simple as simpleEnglishI can.I intentionally break tense rules </font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Donne always taken as a any other common poet in his times but now to read him is a status symbol to show how much educated we r ..even scholar likeMarlowenever got that success whichShakespearegot Irony if we talk aboutShakespearepeople always bash on his topics .That he always took ideas from other's works</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">So know what to say more.Even I want answer for every thing</font>


agree with each n every word u say..i thnk lang is one of my prblm as i use very very simple eng and break tense rules..infact i use it hwever i want..i dnt knw to write in a poetic or attractive way..i just write watever cmes in my mind and that too as if two persn r talkng there..generally verbal cnfrntatn style differs 4m writng them on paper..when it cmes to pen down on paper we need to follow many rules just like usage of tenses whch i never follow..
Hmm reasn toh bagwan jaane..u knw na jass mein sabse req kar karke tak chuki hu..isliye fatafat i'l cmplete all my wrks n wil never dare to start new1 atleast i'l try..
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont know about others but i love ur writing and i always press like and do comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ishanidhi08

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buddiess..i am not getting why i am not getting the replies and comment..
u all are not liking my work..or something in my work..then tell me..
i will change it...please tell...
i understand that most of u are having exam and some are onthier vacation..but why in why work only...please tell me any suggestion any crictism which ypu have...but give me aleast good response...
hope i am not hurting anyone...i just want to know the reason..is there a problem in my story??


IS NOT LIKE I WILL STOP WRITING THE STORY...ITS JUST I WANT TO KNOW WHAT U WANT AND WHAT U DONT LIKE IN MY WORK...I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE IT..and i know i am not agood writer..but there i will try my best to improve..


love isha


hey sorry for late reply
ur doing very good yaar
like ur writing
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

i am really angry on you and jass





why???😭

have we u hurted u??
than sry...i just wanted to know the way to improve nothing else...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN


Even me think about me same.But this is not the fact.I think to console u is not a good thing when same is with me.

If it comes to themes I really wonder what kind of themes people want...Even Mona n Jyothi has hug no of people on list but comment hand ful.It means u r bad ..me bad..mona jyothi every buddy is bad in thinking

If it comes to English I m not able to understand what kind of language these people want.Some times I think I know English or not if this is reason behind less response.Then I think if I m bad at language skills how I did my masters in English literature where in our university there is no reappear no supplementary exams if any body fails in one subject it jst means one thing u hav lost ur year.

As my mom always says to me excess of every thing is bad.I think same is with me she forced me to read Russian literature instead of comics from my childhood result is I m addict to literature. May b my mind has been stopped some where not able to accept puppy romance

When it comes to form in which I rite I don know which form people like ...satire..mockery...irony..tragedy..comedy..Ist person or narrative(as u use) n more forms..I usually write in contemporary where there is no need to put our words in limits of tense rules.Means if some one is writing in past form...that one can't use present or other form in same flow...So I always mention a small note after each update...to tell people I know grammatical rules.I try to use simple as simple English I can.I intentionally break tense rules

Donne always taken as a any other common poet in his times but now to read him is a status symbol to show how much educated we r ..even scholar like Marlowe never got that success which Shakespeare got Irony if we talk about Shakespeare people always bash on his topics .That he always took ideas from other's works

So know what to say more.Even I want answer for every thing


me to want answer for everything...
but the main answer what i want is ...how to improve myself??..and how to attract people to my story line??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rupzloveu

hiii i really loved ur work,

n m busy with my exams so i usually come less online but now on i l too comment wen ever i ll b online..



thanks for efforts dear...its a treat to read ur comments...but the main question i want to ask is how should i improve my stry...???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

dont change ur any story lines...
they r pretty gud




thanks you...just wanted suggestion to improve??..as my likes and comment are decreasing...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

don't be upset dear.. its really interesting FF.. i always do read this.. plz cont.don't bother abt likes & comments..u'll get it soon.. Best wishes & keep updating



thanks...i hope so...i hope that more and more people understand my work...but i will wait..but need to knw the improvement that can be made??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



yah I understand...Jass is also feeling same...

and most important thing is that Jass and u both are regular writers...

we don't have to wait for too many days for ur updates...

and I really appreciate and love u for this...


thanks buddy...😃
ur comments are treat to me...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety095

ur ffas are intresting.i dunno about others but i do frequently comment on ur wrks


thanks...ya i knw..thanks for ur efforts..i wanted wanted to knw how can i improve??

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