U r our Half world # 3/Chap-22,23,24epilog p 22-23 - Page 2

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hey Jass di... please please please update this also... eagerly waiting for may be about 2 months...
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Updating shortly


Actually I had made update days back ..But not planned to update...When I found my buddies r interested so I gonna update shortly...I havn't planned 😲
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Excellent story dear...
but sorry 😭😭... I couldn't press like button of your last few post of this SS...because of the IF rules,
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Part 18

Without saying any single word..Geet left Dr Karan Gupta's cabin.When She reached ICU even She didn't know…She was thinking about her view about their relation n Maan's views….Both were rite…

But destiny had played its part..n why this destiny brought them close once more ? If separation was still there.Adda few hours back She was fighting with lif…Geet thought the half world which She had destiny had planned to snatch it.. Adda won her fight but that fight was fighting Maan from behind…

Now when Maan was fighting who gonna fight for him...? Geet ?…Maan's half world ..But Maan had made different image of Geet ..for Maan She was not his half world more…Geet could fight ..to any extent But it was not possible till Maan was in coma…n Maan had lost his courage to recollect his will power.Whether Geet's touch,her presence was enough for Maan to come out from that condition.

Geet opned door of Adda's room.She was sleeping silently n Rekha was reading newspaper sitting nearby chair.Lookin at Geet's sad face,she realized something was really serious..She held Geet's hand n to know reason ..they moved out.Where Get told her whole situation.

Geet: Rekha tell me what to do now…When Adda is okey now…Maan is fighting..kya hamari kismat main Adhi Duniya ki khushiya he likhi hai…(her condition was really miserable ...what had happened in short time. )

Rekha: Geet Kush cheesay hamare baas main nahi hoti..per ek baat to sach hai…agar Maan yahan aaye hai to uske pishay bhi koi kaaran hai….Per is sab se pehle He needs u…Even he is unconscious …go to him…Adda theek hai..I m wth herr…(she consoled her n advised her)

Geet: Rekha kya Maan theek ho jaayegay…Dr. ne kaha..unho ne jinne ki umeed chod di hai….is liye unki aise haalat hai….per kya main unko is halat se nikaal sakti hu..(she was in tears)

Rekha ; Geet u r a fighter ..jaise aaj tak laddi ho aab bhi laddo…kyonki this fight gonna decide u gonna hav ur whole world or not.Go to Maan,Adda is fine n I m here don't worry.


Geet felt lil bit okey.She moved toward Maan's room.Where he was on bed unconscious ..coz he had created his own reality about his half world..his Geet...Geet went near to his bed .Sit next to him where he was on life supporting system.


She was lookin at his face continuously .How many days..how many years had been passed..She supposed this Maan cheated her…Was her lov really unfaithful...? Defiantly not she always had a hop that he would come back...But for Adda she hided it deep inside...Not to answer her questions,….n Adda slowly had accepted her mother's condition.So she never asked her about Maan...Whether she had seen Maan's picture She had seen her mother crying alone in chilled winter nights.Answer of every thing was here…Maan…Geet ka Maan.She had got Maan's half his body in front of her ..she wanted his soul to complete the small world of three.

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil

Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik duje se huey juda jab ik duje ke liye baney

Teri meri, meri teri Prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye


Geet took Maan's face in her hands.

Geet; Maan uthiye….aab bhi sotay rahegay…sotay sotay mujhe chod gaye thay.Per aab nahi apko uthna hoga…nahi g sakti main apke bina…( she busted ..tears rolled down to her cheeks..n when it fell on Maan's eyes she not realized.These melted drops had started to melt Maan's thinking..Her tears worked on Maan.He had felt her presence

Maan : Geet ( he said first word ..yes he was regaining conciousness ) .

Maan: Geet

Geet first rang bell to call doctor n then sat next to Maan again


Geet: Maan ankhain khol ker dekhiye main apke pass hu…(she was much excited n crying )

Maan opened his eyes n Geet was jst lik a fainted picture .as slowly he was coming out regaining consciousness fainted picture had turned to b a real lif picture

Till then Dr Karan Gupta came in .Maan had been came out of that fit almost.But he was not reacting toward Geet.

Dr Karan: How r u Maan ? Feeling well!!

Maan: Karan…Geet…

Dr Karan: Geet kya Maan?

Maan: Mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise Geet mere saamne khaddi hai…I think my mind is under attack…so she is visible to me here..(he tried to giv a fake smile)

Dr Karan asked Geet to mov out Before both of them talk to each other..he examined Maan

Dr Karan: Ha tum dimaag ki baat kar rahhe ho tumharay dimaag ko kush nahi hua…mujhe darr tha k ho na jaaye but u r all rite….n came out of ur dreams..Tumhari Geet sach main tumhare saamne hai (he smiled putting hand on Maan's forehead)

Dr Gupta called Geet …when Maan found Geet in front of him that was lik a big surprise for him.Now for Dr Karan it was not possible to hide any more.So Geet was present in front of Maan.

Karan left after examination.Maan tried to get up from bed.But Geet held him in her arms..when he failed to get uo.

Geet: Maan don try to get up.(she came near to him n held his shoulder)

Maan: Geet ? (😲)

Geet: Ha main…Dr Gupta ne mujhe sab batta diya kaise apne Adda k liye…(she was not able to complete as Maan stopped )

Maan: maine kya kia Adda k liye sirf Khoon de kar koi badda kaam nahi kiya.

Geet: sirf khoon dekar….ja apni jindgi khatre main daal kar...

Maan: Meri jindgi wo to salon pehle khatam ho gayi thi Geet..(he was in tears..wetness was there )

Geet: Nahi kush pal k liye thahar gayi thi….sirf aapki nahi apki Geet ki bhi….meri duniya to aap baan gaye that Maan…when u left me from that moment I was living in half world.(she corrected)

Maan: Geet…I never cheated u…..? (He told her what was in his mind from long time)

Geet: Patta hai sabh mujhe Dr Karan ne sabh bata diya aur meri soch per padda parda bhi gir gaya hai Maan

Maan: So Geet u really has forgiven me…(he begged)

Geet: No…

Maan: Ha tum maaf bhi kaise karogi itna badda dhokha he diya hai samjho tumko.(He was again sad)

Geet: No Maan u never cheated….agar aap cheater hotte to main apko…kabhi maaf nahi karti…aur jo kiya he nahi uski maafi kyo…

Maan: Thanx Geet…aab kaam se kaam is guilt k sath to jeena nahi padega k tum mujhe maaf nahi kar paayi…aab tumhri sukhi jindgi main main kabhi nahi aayuga…tum khush ho apne parivaar k sath ..mujhe koi dukh nahi…tumhari kushi sabse badkar hai...Aur ha Geet Adda..how she is...(he said with much grief)

Geet :Adda she is fine...waiting for her Papa (she said looking at his pale face)

Maan: Bahut pyari bachchi hai..usko kareeb se nahi dekha...per dur se dekh kar he lagta hai...koi bhi usse pyar karre binna nahi reh sakta...aur tum aur uske Papa to khas tor per...

Geet: Papa ka patta nahi per main usse utna he pyar karti hu..jitna...uske Papa se (she had lots of sadness in her eyes n face)

Maan: Geet if u don't mind Adda k Papa nahi aaye...wo bahut buzy hai kya...is waqt per uko saath hona chaahea tha...jab sabse jayada unki presence honi jaroori hai

Geet:Buzy pata nahi wo he batta sakte hai...aap he push lijiye...wanna meet him (she said with that coming hop in herself to get her lov )

Maan: Geet main nahi chahta mere wajah se tumhare rishte per asar ho...wo yeh bhi pushe-gay ..who I am...then what will u answer him (he rejected her proposal)

Geet: Okey unse nahi milaati per Adda se to mil lijiye...jiski jindgi apki wajah se hai Maan (her meaning was different n Maan took it in different way )

Maan: Maine kya kiya Geet ...

Geet: Bakkki baat baad main karegay pehle apko Adda se milba du ...(she requested Dr Karan to bring Adda here..it was difficult due to her condition but He brought her on wheel chair )


When Dr Karan brought Adda ..she was awake...Geet could bring Maan there to Adda's place.. but She wanted Adda to face Maan coming to him.Maan got up Geet gav him support.He was hesitating as he thought her as other woman now.Both were face to face.n Geet knew Adda had seen Maan might b in pic so she could identify him.Which she wanted.


Adda looked for some time

Adda: Mamma...Papa...(she looked at Geet n then Maan)

Maan: Geet mujhe lagta hai Adda needs her Papa more

Adda: Mamma..aap gussa to nahi hogi na...

Geet knew what she gonna say

Geet: Nahi beta...what u wanna say..

Adda: He is my Papa na...boliye na Mamma...


Dr Karan smiled looking at Geet even Geet. Adda was much shocked but Maan was more.

Dr Karan: Adda kya lagta hai apko...who is he ..(he teased)

Maan looked at calm faces of both.

Maan: Karan what u r saying...(he was angry )

Dr Karan : Yeh to tum Geet se pusho

Geet: Adda ...inse pusho beta...inko kya lagta hai..he is ur Papa or not .

Maan: Geet tum yeh kya keh rahi ho...plz explain me...ghumma k baat mat karo.Main Adda ka Papa..(😭 😲)

Karan; Maan ek choti se bachi ne tumko mehsoos kar k pehchaan liya..aur tum abhi tak nahi samjh paaye kyo tumhara khoon Adda se match karta hai...Adda ka date of birth is about 9 months after ur accident...She is ur daughter Maan (so he told reality )

Maan was shocked what was happening.It was not good to giv him much mental burden so Geet disclosed truth

Geet: Maan ..Adda k Papa apke siba aur kon ho sakte hai..jab apki jindgi main mere siba koi bahi to meri jindgi bhi aapp se hai...Me n Adda were living in half world.U can make our half world complete...(she held his hand)

Maan: Adda meri beti..per Geet wo Sheela tumhare ghar per dibba le kar aayi thi wo tumhare ..

Geet: Apne samjha mere patai k liye...wo to is pettu (foody) k liye tha..jo hulwe k liye kush bhi kar sakti hai mere liye bhi nahi chodti...Hamari duniya to Maan apse hai...aur Adda k sahare he aab tak jinda hu...(she was too emotional)

Maan: Meri Geet...meri beti ... mujhe aab tak yakeen nahi ho raha ...(was really shocked n hugged Geet)

Adda who was still silently.She intruppted them.

Adda: Mama apne mere Papa mjhe hide kar liye per maine dekh liye thay apke paas snap hai na..aur dekho maine pehchaan liya...aab aap Papa se pyar kar rahi ho to main nahi kar sakti...Papa aap bhi Adda se pyar karogay..chod kar to nahi jaa-o-gay (she was about to cry )

Maan: Nahi mera bachcha kabhi nahi...(he tried to get up n with much diffucilty reached near her n hugged Adda)

Karan: thax to me ...mujhe bhi koi pusho...Maan k blood groop ka Adda se matching...her DOB..n above all DNA test...sabh maine kiya so that before I could talk to both of u ...about Adda...maine tumko milla diya mujhe koi thanx karta he nah (he made face)

Maan: Tumne DNA test kiya ..

Karan: It was important becoz main tum dono se baat nahi kar sakta tha..tum donno k haalat hje aise ho gaye k mujhe yeh sabh karna padda...becoz I was sure about Adda's parentage..but this test confirmed

Geet was thinking about Pammi who said unbearable words about her child.But she wanted to hide it as Maan was not okey might b Maan couldn't accept this fact.n she didn't want to dig old bad phase.

Geet: Accha hua Maan...atleast kissi ko doubt to nahi hoga meri Adda k bith per.

Maan: But Geet why r u saying so..

Geet: Maan we were not with u..people can question about us...so Ido not want to giv hip...in our lives...so this is real thing

Maan: But I need no proof Geet...My half world is in front of me..this is more important...I wanna liv in our world.

Geet: Even me Maan I m tired...


They looked at each other...with filled eyes. Dr Karan left room


hop u ll lik I ll try to proceed soon.Plz comment hn hit lik


Lov


Jass

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Congrats on the new thread...

nice part...

finally he knows everything...all thnx to doc who helped them understand the other's condition...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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