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111priyan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Nyc part shreya
good dat u moved d story fwd

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Cutee999

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

koi update to karo yaar...

mai wait kar rahi hoon...

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: cutee987
koi update to karo yaar...

mai wait kar rahi hoon...

simi will update in a while..so we will have to wait..😳

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Humein maaf kar dijiye..hum jaante hain who nanhi jaan waapis nahi aa sakti par ek baar humein maaf kar dijiye..

Geet stood there motionless not knowing how to react. She looked at maan and maan could see tears in her eyes.

Part 66

Both didn't know what to say...both could never forget the sorrow and pain of loosing their baby especially Geet..all there dreams were gone. Dadima stood there with her head down..she goes to Geet and holds her hands. Geet looks at her with tears..

Dadima: I know as a women I have made a grave sin of killing a baby. God will never forgive me and I don't expect you to forgive me for that either. But please you two don't go away from me like this. I need you guys. I have realized my mistake and wants to amend what I did. I was wrong. I was just scared of loosing Maan...(Maan looks at her shocked) he is the only one I have left now and the only support in my life..without him I am nothing. I just wanted to protect him..wanted him in front of me so that he doesn't get the same faith like his brother. In my own selfishness, I took such a drastic step..I will never forgive myself for this..ever...(she goes to Maan..) Maan please forgive me..I have really changed...

After you guys left, seeing the whole house empty made me realize the true meaning of having a family. You were right..I never gave you the love that you wanted but I had to act strong and tough..I went though so much in life, saw many deaths right in front of me that made me like this. You both made me realize my mistake.

Please Maan forgive me...please...

Maan (looks at her with tears) I am not the one that should be forgiving you. (he looks at Geet...se was just standing there with tears..unable to react...) you did wrong to Geet and not me...you are still and always will be my Dadima no matter what..but I will forgive you only when Geet is ready to forgive you...

Dadima: okay I will wait for the day when Geet forgives me. (she goes to Geet..) I truly am sorry...

Maan (goes near Geet...) Let go home Geet...(Geet just stood there..Maan shakes her a little) Geet lets go...

Geet (looks at him) No we are home..(both look at her shocked. Geet stands in front of Dadima) I know what you did was to protect Maan. My kid wasn't even born...I can't even imagine the pain of seeing your dead kid lying in front of you...(Dadima cries with her head down..) You were scared of seeing Maan like that too...

I forgive you (she holds her hands) I forgive you because you only did what you thought would protect Maan. You tried to save him and protect him as best as you could. (Dadima hugs her...)

Maan: Geet lets go to the room...(Geet smiles at him and leaves to go to their room...)

I know its short..but sorry can't stay for long...sheryra if you want you can finish it...😳