Creative Thrd2:U can only be Mine,Just mine 145/6 - Page 25

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@shreya
yaar tu phir gayab ho gai?
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amita: Its already 3 pages and still more..i am postinh jahaan tak done..
baaki coming up...
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Heroine jaldi post kar na
mera kal exam hai nd here m w8ng 4 ur update:)
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She came down the stairs, told the nanny to keep and eye on Suhana and made for one of the many cars parked in the lot of Khurana Mansion. A driver immediately came and opened the door for her. She got into the car and answered the driver's questioning look with,

"Chopra Party, the Taj"

Part 48

She reached the Taj half an hour later. She looked about and the grandeur of the place scared her a bit but she knew she had to be strong for she has come thereto find her love.

She asked at the reception for the direction to the party and the receptionist led her in. she had brought a mangalsutra along..she wanted to know if he will accept her.

She walked in and the lights flashed on her. She stood there stunned for a second at the door and her eyes searched for him. She found him standing in a corner talking to a group of people. His face betrayed no emotion but she knew the turmoil he was in.

Every male in the party was staring at her but he didn't even look up at her. She knew why. He would not look at any other girl when his heart was with her. She blushed at the thought and started to walk in.

She had hardly taken a few steps in when someone stopped her.

Mam..may I know whom do u want to to meet.

Mr. Khurana..

And u are..

She fumbled for a second I am his secretary. She didn't know if she had the right to call his wife yet or not. She wanted him to announce it.

He looked at her with a raised eyebrow. She produced a card for invitation.

He nodded and let her walk. She reached him and put a hand on his shoulder.

He turned around.

His expression changed from shock, to fear to love in a moment.

Before they could speak the lights were dimmed and all were invited on the stage for a dance.

She smiled at him and he took her hand in his and led her to the dance floor.

The song played made her want to tell him that this is how she was feeling at the moment.

dil kho gaya ho gaya kisi ka, abb raasta mil gaya khushi ka

aankhon mein hai khaab sa kisi ka, abb raasta mil gaya khushi ka

rishta naya rabba, dil chhu raha hai

kheenche mujhe koyi dor teri ore

(teri ore, teri ore, teri ore haay rabba

teri ore, teri ore, teri ore) - (2)

He held her waist and drew her closer to him she wound her fingers in his and laid her head on his chest.

He rubbed her hair gently and they swayed to the music gently.

Geet,,,

Hmm..

Tum yahaan kaise..

Kyun mujhe kahin aur hona chahiye tha kya..

khulati fijaaye ghulati ghataaye, sar pe naya hai aasmaanchaaro dishaaye haske bulaaye, kyon sab huye hai meherbaanha humane to yahi rabba kasam se pata haidil pe nahi koyi jor koyi jor(teri ore, teri ore, teri ore haay rabbateri ore, teri ore, teri ore) - (2)

She looked up at him and he twirled her around his chest colliding with her back. His hand was resting on her tummy now and under the saree now.

Tumne mera..

Maine pada..

Phir..maine toh tumhe,,

ek heer thi aur tha ek raanjha, kehate hai mere gaanv meinsaccha ho dil to sau muskilon ho, jhukata naseeba pau mainho ho aanchal tera rabba falak ban gaya haiaab iska nahi koyi oor koyi chhor(teri ore, teri ore, teri ore haay rabbateri ore, teri ore, teri ore) - (2)dil kho gaya ho gaya kisi ka, abb raasta mil gaya khushi kaaankhon mein hai khaab sa kisi ka, abb raasta mil gaya khushi karishta naya rabba, dil chhu raha haikheenche mujhe koyi dor teri ore(teri ore, teri ore, teri ore haay rabbateri ore, teri ore, teri ore) - (2)

Azaad kar diya tha..jaanti hoon..ek baar phir aapne decision le liya aur mujse poocha bhi nahi..

Par geet..

She turned around and put his hand on her tummy.

Jaante yeh kaun hai..

He looked at her confused while swaying with the music, and removed his hand from her tummy and kept it on her waist.

Geet..Tum mujh jaise kamzor insaan ke saath kyun rehna chahti ho..

Ouch..

Geet..

Her breathing became ragged and she closed her eyes.

Geet..

Main theek hoon..

Teen maheena ka ho gaya ha baby aur mujhe bata raha hai..

Baby ne kick kiya..she kept his hand on her tummy again.

They swayed and after a few seconds they felt the baby movement again.

He smiled at her.

Geet..

Hmm yahaan se chale..

She nodded her head and he led her out and into the hotel rooms.

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i am wrting more..give me some time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arre wah such a cuteu sweetu moment
love u 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnks reva amita and abhi..
just wait aage wala aur bhi romantic hai..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Thnks reva amita and abhi..

just wait aage wala aur bhi romantic hai..😉



Oh ho aaj to bade flow mein ho gr8
will b w8ng
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...
moi waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am stuck at a point..give me some time..

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