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Posted: 13 years ago
part 44
@ Samanalyse - ye kabhi sudhrega nahi...nicely written dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 45:

He sat down at his desk, picked up his fountain pen and began to write on the crumpled sheet but stopped at sudden as his eyes moved towards the frame on his table in which he placed geet pic that he took during their stay at island. The spark and shine she has on her face melted maan anger and he rubbed his hand over her pic .and begin to think about his behavior towards her, she is just perfect for me as I imagined and wanteted a partner in my life the day she returned in my life the biggest fear of mine was suhana protection and grooming she is keeping her so carefully then me that I almost forgot my own responsibility .when ever she is around me the atmosphere just get better for me and relaxed apart im being selfish here as just thinking about my self comfort due to her presence I owe her a lot. Especially the storm going in side me and her I need to stop and clear it all.

He stayed in his room and kept on thinking about her and how he should justify her and answers she need so at last he decided to talk to her alone when suhana goes to sleep .

At nite the had their dinner clam and quite suhana saw the time it was 9pm she immediately finished her diner and said "bade mama I want to sleep now as I have to leave tomorrow for my school can u plz pack my things as I important thing to do before going"

Both maan and geet saw towards here strangely at important work but before the ask she left'.Maan just got the opportunity to talk to geet so he asked her "I wana talk" she saw him with a questioning yes to avoid her look he again said "WALK" she nodded ad headed towards the garden

They were silently walking for quiet long suddenly maan guided her towards the bench .as the got seated maan begin to look at sky full of stars and full moon geet was at the edge now and decided to move away as he wont speak and she cant sit like a statue with him. Before she could move he hold her hand and spoke while seeing towards the sky

" If you want to be a Khurana, you have to learn to be stronger. You are weak and do not know the ways of the world but remember this. You have money, money is power and power can create fear. Make people fear you. Then they will never see you as weak. Whatever shortcomings you have in your life you can fill with money and power."

Geet eyes poped opened by his statement is he out of his mind what does he want proof to me she was now getting angry at him now but he moved his face towards her and said in a politely and soft manner "GEET"

She didn't want to look at him but his voice made her look at him he had powerful feelings in them that made geet look at him with all emotions she had for him.

He said "u have power over me u know "

He remained silent for a while and again spoke "I m groomed as an arrogant man the statement I said before is what made me stand at his position I m now '.this is what my father taught me and that my life around on I never answered anyone I wont ever again in m life" by saying this he stand up from his place and went inside the mansion. Geet kept quiet but had a relief feeling that he opened himself to her.

Mean while in masion suhana called dadi mama who was in London with help of her nakul chacha and told dadi maa that her bade papa got babe mama home and she is living with. Dadi maa ddint know how to react and told suhana that she will be home soon J

Edited by tanei - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
im sorry guys i just could not write properly what i planned to
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a nice part dear. And thanks for bringing dadima.
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was nice part 😊 glad maan would open up
and gud suhana called dadi ma now :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...
"u have power over me u know "

with a single statement he accepted his feeling..
awesum one yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 44?
once again?
@Samanalyse - lovely...poor Maan caught between the lovely ladies of his life...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Samanalyse - Samana dear plz check with update number dear...so that for other writers it would be helpful and also to post the page numbers in the first page...ur first is 44 and the ending
"Apni pyari Suhana se kuch sikhiye. Mujhe sab sahi sahi jawab de dijiye. Bas"
is 45 and
Maan watched her in a trance as she headed towards Suhana's playroom, with the young girl held snugly in her arms, a hint smile playing on her lips, went inside and closed the door gently. What had happened to Geet?
is 46...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
glad to see maan is opening up with geet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 46
@Samana - wow that was some twist dear and didnt see it coming that too from Maan's side...interesting...

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