#Devils Den# :Maanet Vs Vikram:The Dangerous game Begin - Page 35

@sk .. like the scenario... Darr meets Dhadkan..!! Oh i cant wait to see him beat Maan Khurana at his strengths... it will only make MSK double aggressive n it will b one adorable moment..!!

@Tanu:The clowns hv no place in this serious track ..they just need to go back to Amritsar and settle there 😆😆

@Jyo: The problem here is that MP seems to think in a linear way, when it comes to story rather than being able to branch the story or characters out in various directions and dimensions.

He did this with NT (SN) as well. She did the same thing over and over again, that is make Geet look bad in front of Maan until she took it too far, was outsmarted by Geet and put in jail. There was no dimension to the character.

Just think, how many times did we see her make Geet look bad, Maan shouts at Geet and tells her she is useless and then finds out the truth and feels guilty.

The only reason we still love that track is because SN was really good and it brought some much needed drama. But they never used her wisely to really take the story forward, especially the Dev-Nano part of it. There were hints at the beginning of the track when Dev almost confessed to Nano but it was never played out the way it should have been.

Similarly here, we are getting the same slightly tweaked scenario over and over of the stalker cornering Geet when Maan is away and scaring the living daylights out of her. I just hope they dont go the NT way and make him do this again and again just until he is caught by MSK. I want to see this track explored in many different directions!

At some point in a track, MP stops putting effort into a character and the story operating on multiple levels and invests all his "creativity" into one track at a time which is what slowed down the show so much, plus his choice of tracks at most times was just 🤢. For example in Amritsar, the Lucky-Preeto and Nandini-Daman tracks could have easily happened simultaneously, been much more exciting and not such a huge waste of time. BUT MP chose to extend each of these until we were crying bloody murder.

In contrast if you look at just that short period when Barry was writing the BR track, there were so many connections and everyone was linked to at least 2 ongoing stories. Take our most despised Nando for example, she was having her budding romance with Dev, looking for Geet and Maan, being hated by Pammi and getting hints of Dev's past. Maan had his track with Geet, Pammi stopping him from working and a possible MU with Dev as he was running KC.

This is what MP's writing lacks, dimension and complexity. The story should be a web, not a single, straight line.

@Jyo.. i hope.. Vikram kidnaps the circus party n ships them back to the Amazon from where they sneaked out... lolz

Hiii Guys 😊

Congrats to GHSP Team for their 450th ESP on 16th November 2011

This the link of my Post :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1961765/congratulation-for-450th-esp

@Tanu: Of course NT (KR) and Brij take the cake...and the bakery! They were complex villains, written to reflect real human issues and they weren't just out to get Maaneet. They had complex motives and back stories. Sonali as NT was wasted on a one-dimensional track when she could have simultaneously been used for so many reasons. She definitely didn't have to kidnap Nando. She already had so much material for blackmail available to her and we would have so loved to see her use it!

And there is another flaw of MP. The guy just refuses to do his homework!

@Lily: I see you. Come out, come out! 😉

@Samana:Yup thats the main problem ...MP does not give variations to his characters and story ..he takes a interesting concept from some film but thats it ...then he is clueless how to move forward with it ...he just cannot think beyond his silly comedy and mayb intense drama is not his cup of tea 😕...I m still hoping that with the help of fans giving so many ideas ,he will b able to write a sensible track further as he has lots of film to take inspiration from like dhadkan ,indecent proposal and so many of them ..he just needs to copy them without applying his brains much 😆😆

I am Getting some GOSSIPS from FB🤓..

Birdies hv crooned again 😆

Originally posted by: Meetu_Anu

I am Getting some GOSSIPS from FB🤓..

Fan who attended party is giving out the details😲🤓😳...

**ANU FLYS BACK TO FB ON HER PHONE**

I think this fan also updated her post on IF about her experience with GC in SBS part in one of the IF post ...and also posted her pics with GC 😳