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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Okay apologies for not un-reserving, I couldn't contemplate on what to write. I don't promise, but I hope I'll actually reply to this one 😆

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NT was a dancer in a pub? Really didn't see that one coming. I may of missed it, but is she still a dancer?

Maan taking a picture of Geet was both sweet and super freaky. I guess he's kind of weird like that. Maan's character does have many shades, that you're yet to uncover but he's already caught my attention. He is flawed, and that's what I really like about him.

Really glad that the date...uh, I mean dinner is taking place at home. It's so much more intimate then going out to eat, especially love the fact he's cooking for her, makes it even more personal.

Can't wait to read on, brilliant update 👏

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

omg you updated so soon..

wasn't expecting...

i loved the update...and i love men who can cook...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Thankyou for the pm & you updated so soon, what a treat :)

I really love how you've shaped Maan to be a complex character with many shades of grey. Although he's still hung up over NT, he feels a pull towards Geet which he can't explain to himself quite yet. Whether its mere friendship or something more, we shall see. Can't wait to read more of this :)

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RockBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz
NT was a dancer in a pub? Really didn't see that one coming. I may of missed it, but is she still a dancer?

Eh!!! She was dancing at a party!!!

Maan taking a picture of Geet was both sweet and super freaky. I guess he's kind of weird like that. Maan's character does have many shades, that you're yet to uncover but he's already caught my attention. He is flawed, and that's what I really like about him.

I know right!!! It IS freaky. He isn't totally normal and you will see that in coming chapters :-)

Really glad that the date...uh, I mean dinner is taking place at home. It's so much more intimate then going out to eat, especially love the fact he's cooking for her, makes it even more personal.

Me no say anymore...😆

Can't wait to read on, brilliant update 👏

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RockBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -nirvana-
Is there any difference in his foresightedness for Tara vs Geet...Does Geet remind him of Tara...

~she was the personification of a dream he once had...

Or is it that Tara also reminded him of something else entirely? Maybe I should do a chapter on Tara-Maan's interaction when they met...