Maaneet FF(Young Love)Part 10

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Part-7

It ws 8pm wen maan cald geet..nw Maan n geet on cal..
Maan:hello..
Geet:hello..kaun??
Maan: mai..maan..Maan Singh Khurana..
Hi geet..
Geet:(blushes) maan...tum??? kaise ho??
Maan: mai thik hun...tum kaisi ho??
Geet:mai b thik hun..
Maan:kya kar rahi thi??..
Geet:soch rahi thi..
Maan:kiske baare me soch rahi thi??
Geet:mai..wo niharika k baare me..(she lies)
Maan:aur??
Geet:wo...wo...mere class test start hnewale hai na uske baare me(she lies again)
Maan:aur mere baare me nai soch rahi thi??
Geet:nai...i mn haan..(she dnt knw wt to tel)
Maan:mtlb mere baare me hi soch rahi thi..
Geet:(she keeps quite fr a sec)...waise tum kya kr rahe ho??
Maan: mai..frankly...tumhare baare me hi soch raha tha..
Geet:accha..??(blushes nd luks down)
Maan:geet jab tum sharmake neeche dekhti ho na...tab
Geet:tab kya?..(speaks in a low tone)
Maan:u luk damn beautiful...
Geet:ummm..jhute..
Maan:sachme geet...Kasam se
Geet:jhut nai bol rahe..toh batao tumne kab mj sharmate hue dekha??
Maan:ohh u dnt blv me..toh suno aj subeh jb maine swthrt kaha tb tum sharmayi thi na..
Geet:(she smiles)dinnr krliya??😳
Maan:nah!!..tumne krliya swthrt??
Geet:nai...waise ek baat puchun??
Maan:do puchlo...
Geet:tum mj swthrt q bulate ho??
Maan:swthrt ko swthrt nai to kya bulate hai..
Geet:mai swthrt??..q?
Maan:pata nai q...bs mann kiya tumhe swthrt bulaon to boldiya...
Geet:accha..to jo tumhara mann kahega tum wo karoge..???
Maan:tbse mere cal ka wait kr rahi thi??
Geet:(shocked)q...??
Maan:kyun ki..tbse notice kr raha hun...u hv been askng me questions n questions n questions...SWEETHEART(he stretches on d wrd swthrt)
Geet:mai??kahan??puch rahi hun...
Maan:haan tum puch rahi ho..
Geet:nai mai nai puch rahi..
Maan:haan...
Geet: nai...nai..kaha na..
Maan:accha baba nai puch rahi..khush??
Geet:haan bht..accha maan mj tmse kuch kehna tha...
Maan:haan bolo geet...
Geet:thnx...
Maan:thnx??? Kis liye??
(needhi enters room...geet cuts d cal...geet is bit tensed...)
Needhi:di aap kisse baat kr rahi thi..
Geet:mai wo...niharika se
Needhi:accha...chalo di hum dinner krlete hai..
Geet:tu chal mai aa rahi hun..
Needhi:jaldi aao...
(maan in anger..thinking..
Maan:ye ladki...bina kuch kahe cl cut krdiya...hw mean...
He gets a msg frm geet...sry maan moms calling me fr dinner..il cl u later..tum bhi apna dinner krlena..bye tkcr...seeing dis msg..maan smiles...nd goes to hv his dinner...)
Maan:mom dinner lagane ko bolo jldi...
Sunita:haan beta wait..abhi kehti hun..tum itni jldi q kr rahe ho..
Maan:accha..toh aap nai doge mai ja rahi hun..
Sunita:ruko ruko..(mates serve maan dinnr😊
He haves it in hurry coz he doesnt knw wen geet wil cl him...
Sunita:maan..ye kaise kha rahe ho..araam se beta...
Maan:(finishes his dinner)accha mai sone ja raha hun..
Sunita:arrey itni jldi..maan ruko..
Maan:(he dint listn to her..he runs to his room nd shouts frm thr...)gud nite
Sunita:(smiles)😊gud nite...
Here even geet haves her dinner in hurry..nd even padma nd rajeev shouts at her..
Geet runs to her room...she jus dials maan's numbr nd needhi cums...so she disconnects d cl n texts maan...
Geet:(in text) my sisters is here il cl u ltr...
Maan lying on bed..eagerly waiting fr geets cals..nd he gets her msg...Maan replies her..
Maan:..😔
Geet:sry maan...:)
Maan:its k...wt tym wil u cl me...???...
Geet:wen needhi goes to sleep...
Maan:needhi??? Ur sister...
Geet:yup...so had ur dinnr?
Maan:lng bck...u?
Geet:maine b krliya...waise tum apna room kiske sath share krte ho??..brother?
Maan:nah...no brother no sister...
Geet:ohh..aur batao kuch...
Maan:kuch nai batana...cl karo na
Geet:arrey maan..needhi yahi hai baba...shez awake..:( thodi der wait karo...
(padma cums in to geet's room..nd tels..
Padma:kitne din beet gaye tum dono k sath room me soye hue...aj mai apni betiyun k sone wali hun..(she hugs geet) nd lies beside needhi...
Geet:(texts maan) maan...cant cal u...my moms here...
Maan:(in anger) wt????geet dis s nt done...
Geet:i ws jus abt to u cl ke maa agayi..😔
Maan:accha..thik hai koi baat nai..
(padma sees geet busy wid her cel..she tells her..
Padma:geet sojao...raat ko aise jage hue nai rehte..apna cel side me rakho aur sojao..
Geet:ji..maa
(geet txts maan..
Geet: maaannn..maa dant rahi hai..sone ko keh rahi hai..sry...😔gud nite...c u tmrw...
Maan:huh...mj tumse baat hi nai krni...(he switches off his cel n goes to sleep)
Geet sees his msg n shez vry upset...thinks abt maan fr a while..n ltr goes to sleep...

Edited by shabru098 - 13 years ago

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pingu.tingu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awww poor geet nyc update :)

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awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Bechari geet.
It will b fun to read how geet will manaofy maan.

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preiti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

ab kaise manayegi geet maan ko

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Part-8

Nxt day mrng...maan gets ready..n goes to college widout his brkfst..near college gate he sees Adhi waiting fr him..he goes to adhi..wid a angry face...adhi n maan while goin to thr class..
Adhi: kya hua maan??u luk disturbed..
Maan:kuch nai yar...
Adhi:batana..kya hua??mom ne kuch kaha..
Maan:mom ne??nai yar..(he cldnt control his emotions so he tld him..d whole stry abt d phne cl)
Adhi:koi baat nai yar..uski mummy agayi to wo kya krti..
Maan:mai uski mummy ko blame nai kr raha yar...ab usne commit kiya tha k cl karegi..den she had too..usne nai kiya toh maine gusse me cel off krdiya apna aur sogaya..
Adhi:haan dikh raha hai..tu kitna soya..tere chehre se pata chlta hai k raat bhar jaga raha tu..
Maan:chod na yar..kuch aur baat krte hai..
(dey reached thr class..)
Adhi:u knw maan..tune aj tk kisi ladki ka numbr nai manga..aur kabhi kisi ke cal ka itna wait nai kiya..dude!!!! u hardly met her once r twice dts it..nd she affects u so much..y??
Maan:(keeps quite nd starts thinking...)pata nai yar...(tchr enters)
Adhi:vil tlk abt dis latr..k?
Maan:hmmm...
Geet hurried to niharika's house...den dey bth move to clg..on d way niharika asks..
Niharika:Geet..tune kl adhi se maan ka numbr liya?
Geet:nai..
Niharika:q??tune kaha tu lelegi adhi se..
Geet:wo adhi ne khud merea numbr mangliya to mai kahan se deti..
Niharika:ohh aise bolna..to kya baat hui tum dono ki?
Geet:baat..mj drive krne de niharika...(shes quite upset so she doesnt want to speak abt it...)
Niharika:thik hai baba..konsa mai kahin bhagi ja rahi hun..tel me ltr..
(dey reach to college...geet parks her scooty..)
Niharika:ab to bata de..kya baat hui..
Geet:chalna chup chap...koi khaas bat nai hui jo mai bataon..
Niharika:(makes a baby face)thik hai mat bata...tu na mjse baat hi mat kr..
Geet:ohh..ab tu b mjse bat nai krna chahti..
Niharika:mai bhi?mtlb aur kon tjse bat nai krna chahta..
Geet:kl na..wo actualy hua yun(she tels hr wt she spoke to maan..nd at d end thr cal ended up in anger)
Niharika:ohh aisa hua kya??..tu b na geet..bth naraz tha kya wo?
Geet:haan..:(
Niharika:(teasingly)ab tu usse manane k liye kya karegi??
Geet:pata nai..tu hi kuch bol
Niharika:wah wah..geet tu thik to hai na...tu maan ko manayegi??kyun??wo naraz hai to tj bura lg raha hai...(she sings)haal kaisa hai janab ka???
Geet:kya bak rahi hai??ab wo meri wajah se naraz hai to manana padega na?
Niharika:haan haan..wo to tera ab khaas dost hai..manana to padega hi..(she tickles her)
thn tchr cums to class..nd lecture starts..nd here niharika teasing geet..lecturer notices geet n niharika nd scolds dem..tels dem to keep quite..fr sum tym dey keep quite nd den niharika suggests geet to text maan..
Geet:nai yar..class me nai..
Niharika:arrey krna...sirf HI keh kr msg bhjde..
(geet hides her cel phne inside her bag..nd texts maan..saying HI)
Maan too is in class..wen he gets geet's msg..he shows dt to adhi..nd tels..
Maan:dekh yar..ye mjko HI keh rahi hai..sry to isko bolna hi nai hai..
Adhi:kya sry??ab jane de na..tu rply kr usko..i knw u want to..:D
Maan:nai mai nai karunga...
(geet waiting fr his msg..bt dint gt one..so she sents him a msg again..tht said..:( :(...)
Maan seeing dis msg made a baby face..nd tlks to himself...''geet to udaas hogayi''..
Adhi:aan..kya kaha..??
Maan:kuch nai..
Adhi:khud se batein kr raha hai..uff tu pagal krdega mj..khud to hogaya hai..
(maan giving no response to adhi..nd he replies to geet's msg as.. Wr r u??
In text..
Geet:im in class..u??
Maan:class...
Geet:tum ab bhi naraz ho mjse?
Maan:hmm..thoda thoda..
Geet:mtlb naraz nai ho..
Maan:maine aisa to nai kaha..
Geet:pr mj aise hi laga..:)
Maan:accha..tumhe aisa laga..toh mai naraz nai hun..
Geet:uff..thnkgod..mai kal se kitni pareshan thi..
Maan:kyun??
Geet:bs aise hi..
(niharika tells geet:geet cel rak de ab warna tu to gayi..ye hitler sir tujhe kaccha chaba jayega..)
Maan:tumhara break kitne baje hota hai?
Geet:break 1:30 ko..mai tumhe tab cal karungi..lets meet..n cant txt u nw wrna ye hitler sir mj kaccha chaba jayega...
Maan:(smiles seeing dt msg nd sents her)darpok..waise even i hv break at 1:30..break me milte hai..bye..
Frm d tym maan msged geet..der ws cute smile on his face...he kept luking at his watch...eagerly waiting fr 1:30...fr every 10secs he luked his watch..his lecturer observed it n he shouted..
Lecturer:Mr.Maan...
Maan ws smiling nd sitting..he dint listen to his sir..adhi pulled nd said..
Adhi:maan sir bula rahe hai..
Maan:aaan...kya??(luked up..saw his tchr staring at him..he stood up at once nd said)..yes sir..
Lecturer:U seem to b in sum other world..may i know wt r u waiting for..
Maan:(shocked..he doesnt know wt to tel)Nothing sir...
Lecture:hmmm..dats gud..please concentrate..
(Maan sat..nd smiled again)
Adhi:tu pagal to nai hogaya hai..hosh me to hai tu..
Maan:haan haan..tu apna kaam krna..
(den its ws tym fr wich he ws waiting so badly...its 1:30...maan waiting fr geet's cal)
Adhi:maan bolna..tu itna has kyun raha hai??
Maan:aise hi...
(geet cums out of her class nd cals maan..)
on phone..
Geet:hello maan!!! wr r u???
Maan:mai college me aur tum?
Geet:mai b clg me hi hun..suno dus min me canteen me milte hai..assigmnt submit krke aati hun..
Maan:thik hai...(cal ends)
Adhi:ohhh..geet ka cl ane wala tha isliye..hmmm...maan tjse kuch puchun?
Maan:haan puchna..chalte chalte baat krte hai...canteen chl..
Adhi:canteen kyun?
maan:geet anewali hai...tu bolna kya bol raha tha..
Adhi:Maan...u love her??
Maan:(shocked)kya??who?
Adhi:geet..m damn sure u love geet rite?? Maine aj tk tjko itna excited nai dekha wo b kisi se milne ke liye to kabhi nai..