Maaneet FF(Young Love)Part 10

Hey Guys dis is my frst FF..
this is a college based love story..so the title of dis FF goes as YOUNG LOVE..

CHARACTER SKETCH:

GEET: 21yrs old..she lives in mumbai with her parents nd her younger sister..belongs to a traditional family..geet is vry friendly nd a obeying daughter..shez studying B.COM final year..nd has a vry close childhood friend..Geet has nvr fallen in love..no bf..no crush..
Geet's father(RAJEEV): Bank manager
Geet's mother(PADMA): Housewife
Geet's sister(NEEDHI): Studying in 12th
Geet's friend(NIHARIKA): classmate nd neighbour

MAAN: 22yrs old..doin his MBA..lives in mumbai..With oly his mother..nd maan lost his father wen he in was skul..maan's father was his oly friend wid whm he share nd express his feelings..bt d day he lst his father..he lost his happiness..maan is always busy wid his own work he never cares what's goin around..maan has only one college friend..and and maan is very famous guy in college because of his great looks..evry gal wants to go wid maan..bt maan nvr fell in love wid anyone yet..
MAAN's mother(SUNITA): MD of KS(khurana steel industries)
Khurana construction ws strtd by maan's father..aftr his death..sunita took over..
MAAN's friend(ADHI): studying wid maan

Hope u all like it...?:)

Part 1:

Geet has break from her classes..nd walking in d corridor wid niharika..nd tlkng ovr d phone wid needhi..
Geet: Mai ajaongi needhi..sath me shopping chlte hai
Needhi: Accha didi..
Nd while geet was tlkng ovr phne..walkng towrds her was maan..nd den niharika pulls geet nd tels hr..
Niharika: geet..geet..dekh maaannn
Geet doesnt care..nd den she hangs phone nd turns around nd wen she turns her legs get twisted nd shez gonna slip..so she catches maan's hand..wid his hand support she stands up..bt her cell phnes falls down..bt geet dint notice dt..as maan n geet wer luking in eachother eyes deeply..nd den niharika pulls geet hand..nd den maaneet break their eyelock..bt stil maan cant stop seeing geet..den geet walks away frm thr..nd den maan sees down nd blushes..den he sees her cell fallen down..he goes running behind her..
Maan: hello..hello..(he shouts as he dnt knw her name)
then geet turns back nd points her finger towards herself nd asks maan..
Geet: me???
Maan tels U..
Den she stops nd aks wt hpnd..he gives her cel to her..nd den she tells thnx nd walks frm thr..bt niharika stil standing thr nd watching maan..(coz shez nvr seen maan so closely yet)
Geet: chal niharika chalte..nd she pulls her n goes
Maan while goin to his class smiles..nd strts thinkin..whz she??(thinking abt geet)
Den maan turns back to see geet..as he turns even geet turns back to see maan..dey both luk at eachother wid a smile..nd enters their classrooms...
This ws the first tym maan n geet saw eachother..?:)

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Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10

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Part-3

Adhi's mom goes to Padma nd hav a talk wid her...
Adhi's mother:Hello!!! hum aapke naye padosi...:)
Padma:Accha...Main bahut dino se shifting dekh rahi thi..magar aapko kabhi nai dekha...welcomeji..:) waise agar kisi cheez ki zarurat ho toh let me know..
Adhi's mother:Abhi filhaal to kuch nai..aage koi zarurat ho toh aapko bataongi..waise aj grihya pravesh puja hai..aap apne pati aur bacchon ke sath zarur ayiega..
Padma:Haan..haan...zarur ayenge..
(den adhi's mother leaves saying..)
Adhi's mother: Accha shaam ko milte hai..puja ki taiyyari krni hai..
In puja...
as it starts padma comes wid geet nd needhi...nd adhi's mothter make them comfortable..
And adhi goes out..stands near gate giving directions to maan over phone...
maan reached..adhi n maan stand near the gate talking to eachother..
In puja..Geet cell phone rings...Niharika's calling her..
geet recieves her call nd talks to her while walking out of the house..
Niharika: kahan hai??
Geet: main puja me hun..wo hamare naye padosi ke yahan
Niharika: padosi?? oye...teri padosi to mai hun..
geet:arrey wo left wala ghar..wo mehta uncle chodke chalegaye na...to naye padosi ne grihya pravesh puja rakhi hai..
(now geet luking down n walks towards gate)
NIharika: Accha..kaun hai padosi???
Geet:padosi...she looks up..(shocked..coz she saw maan)
NIharika: kya hua??? naya padosi jisse tu takkrayi wo smarty maan hai kya??(she teases geet)
(listening to dis geet drops her cell phone down..because it actually maan standing in front of her..den maan looks at her n smiles..bends down nd picks her cell phone nd gives her..bt geet still shocked to see maan)
while giving her cell...
Maan: Tumhe apne cell se itni nafrat kyun hai??
Geet: aaan...kya?? haan...nai,,,aap yahan kaise?? (shez shocked nd blabbers something)
Maan: yahan??? hello...m talking abt ur cell...hosh me to ho tum...ye lo tumhara cell...
geet: haan haan..mai thik hun..(takes her cel)
Adhi: (confused luking at them) ye kya horaha hai?? Maan.. u know her??
Maan: yeah!! cell phone hater...( he smiles)
geet: haan...hum college me mile the..i mean takraye the..
Adhi:(smiles) ohh...toh aap yahan kaise??
geet:aaj puja hai na..
Adhi: haan pata hai..puja mere hi ghar pe hai..
Geet: accha...mai aapki padosi hui fir..:)
Adhi: great!! so you stuidy in our college??
geet: yeah!! BCOM final year..nd u??
(while dey wr talking..maan gets a J feeling...:D :D so he pops in between)
Maan: hi...:) we r doin MBA final yr...
(geet gets a cal..its niharika again..she leaves to rcv hr cal..)
Maan:(shouting. hello...aapne to apna naam hi nai bataya..
geet:GEET
Maan:oh...:) am MAAN
geet: i know..
Maan: (shocked) how???
geet:(thinks d way niharika described him..nd tells maan) bs pata hai..she smiles..nd leaves..
Maan:*blushe*
(geet,maan nd adhi goes in nd puja starts...
bt maan's eyes in search of geet...nd feeling restless..nd den he smiles..coz geet comes nd sits in puja right in front of him..maan n geet luking deep into eachother's eyes til puja gets over...:):)??

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Part 4

Aftr puja...every1 strts moving to their houses...in between padma gets reminded of niharika's mom nd she goes to adhi's mother to tel her..
Padma: arrey..maine aapko mere sabse purane padosi k baare me to bataya hi nai..(NIKITA-NIHARIKA's MOTHER)..hamare bagal wala ghar unhi ka hai..hamari geet ki bachpan ki frnd niharika ki maa..
Adhi's mother:Accha..pehle batana chahiye tha aapko..hum unhe b puja me bulate..
Padma: pata nai kaise dimag se nikal gaya..mai aapko unse kal milwati hun..ab ana jana toh rahega..accha chalte hai...
(Nd padma tells needhi to call geet so that dey can move to their house..nd needhi goes in search of geet)
but geet is busy wid sumthng else forgetting her mom n needhi...geet is busy wid adhi n maan...
aftr puja..
Adhi to Geet: dekha geet duniya kitni choti hai..hum ek hi college me padte hai..lekin ek dusre ko dekha b nahi..aur aj padosi bangaye...hai na??
(Geet smiles)
Maan: mai to college me hi mila geet se...(geet blushes)
Adhi: tu to mjse baat hi mat kr.. tu geet se mila lekin mj nai bataya..:(
Geet: Arrey..hum thik se mile hi nai..to kya batate bechare...(maan smiles)
Adhi: haan..haan...ye hi bechara hai..Accha geet yahan se tum college kaise jati ho roz??
Maan: apni friend k sath jati hogi...hai na geet??
Adhi: arrey bs karo yaar tum dono..mai geet se puchun to maan jawab deta hai..aur maan se puchun to geet..ek dusre se to baat nai kar rahe tum..mai jaa raha hun..(adhi leaves)
Maan nd Geet smile luking eachother...?:)
Maan: ye adhi bhi na...
Geet: ye adhi bhi kya???..
Maan: tum mj chida rahi ho..
Geet: nai nai...(she laughs)
Maan: accha to kal college me...(needhi comes...
Needhi: Di...aap yahan ho..chalo mom bahar tumhara wait kr rahi hai..
Geet: kyaaa???? mera...tum chalo mai arahi hun..
Geet to Maan: Accha maan...moms waiting fr me..i gotta go..bye..:)
Maan: arrey ruko to..
Geet: sry sry...bye
(Geet leaves..coz she cant let her mom wait for long)
Maan too leaves...goes to his house...as he enters his house he directly goes to his bedroom..freshens himself nd den luks in d mirror..n he starts thinking abt geet...geet is all over his mind..maan talking to himself..
Maan: mai geet k baare me itna kyun soch raha hun...ohh god!!!!!!chodo ye sab..mai apna assingnment krleta hun..wo ladki assignment me to pakka yaad nai ayegi...
he starts his work..while doin his assignment again he thinks of geet...
Maan: ufff...bht hogaya mai sojata hun...(he goes to sleep)
In geets home..
As geet goes bck home she talks to her father..tels her abt d puja...hw it hapnd...den goes to sleep..
(in room..geet nd needhi..)
Needi: di aap kisse baat kr rahi thi puja me?
Geet: mai?? adhi se...adhi hai na meri college me padta hai...MBA kr raha hai wo..
Needhi: Accha...chalo mj neend arahi hai..gud night di..:)
Geet: gud night..
(geet while combing her hair...thinking..maine needhi ko MAAN k baare me kyu nai bataya..she thinks thinks thinks..nd decides to her tel her abt maan...she calls...needhiii...)
Needhi: haan...kya hua??
Geet: hmmm...kuch nai...soja..
Needhi: pagal ho tum di...(she sleeps)
den even geet...sleepy...goes to sleep...
Morning...geet gets ready..no time for brkfst..(as she got up late..coz whole she couldnt sleep well..becoz of maan...she kept thinking n thinking abt him..) she rushes to niharika's house..
(standing near niharika's house gate..she shouts..)
Geet: niharikaaa...jldi aaa
niharika cums nd dey both go to college in geets scooty...dey bth r late to college..dey rush to thr classes nd tchr dint allow dem in..coz dey r late...
Geet nd niharika...shouting at eachother...
geet: teri wajah se late...
Niharika:teri wajah se...(they shout at each other fr a long time then)
Niharika: Accha geet chal canteen chlte hai..class to miss hogayi..
Geet:(luks at niharika..both laughs n goes to canteen)
and they see maan nd adhi in canteen...bt maan dint notice geet coming...so even geet jus went to other table..nd aftr sumtym..Adhi sees geet...nd he tells Maan..
Adhi: arrey wo geet hai na...chal maan usse baat krte hai...
Maan: (excited) chalo...
(Maan n adhi goes to geet)
Adhi: can v join u beautiful ladies..:)(Maan J again)
Geet: sure..(geet introduces adhi n maan to niharika...)
Maan: how r u both??
Niharika: gud...tum kaise ho??? bht suna hai tumhare baare me..aj dekh b liya..ur seriously vry handsome..? (now Geet J)
Geet: Maan tum yahan kaise??? class nai hai kya??
Maan: haan abhi strt honewali hai...pr tum yahan kaise??
Geet: wo hum...(Niharika in between)
Niharika: wo hum late aaye isliye...(suddenly adhi shouts)
Adhi: shit dude..we r getting late...(maan not giving his ears to adhi..coz his busy staring geet)
Adhi: maan(he pulls him) chal chalte hai..cls start honewali hai..
Maan: ohhh..haan chal,chal...ok geet bye...nd bye geet's friend...sry i frgt ur name...
Geet: its Niharika..(she smiles) k..bye
Niharika: bye..:)
Adhi nd maan leaves...

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