Maaneet FF(Young Love)Part 10

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

loved the update.. do pm mee too dear... read all the parts on one go... plz add me too your pm list

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_Shabru_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Part-9
Maan:aisa kuch nai hai yar...
(dey reach canteen)
Adhi:sach bol yar..
Maan:sachme adhi..nthng
Adhi:wat nthng??..yar tu abhi tak apni feeling samjha nai..
Maan:hmmm..
(geet nd niharika cum to canteen)
Geet:hi..maan..hi adhi..
Adhi:hey geet..
(maan pulls a chair n makes geet sit comfortabaly..geet smiles..den maan goes nd gets coffee for niharika nd geet...nd al four r sitting quite dnt knw wat to tlk)
Niharika:arrey kuch bolo...
(maan nd geet luking eachother..)
Adhi:niharika!!! Ye maan aur geet ko dekho..
(maan n geet dint listen to dem)
Niharika:haan...(she pulled geet)
Geet:aan..bol niharika...
Adhi:tum dono ka kya hai yar...jb milte ho ek dusre me khoye hue rehte ho..
Geet nd maan:(together) nai toh...(bth smile)
Geet:accha tum logon ne brkfst kiya??
Adhi:(teasingly)maan ne nai kiya..
(maan still luking at geet)
Geet:maan tumne brkfst kyun nai kiya??
(no rply frm maan's side)
Geet:ruko mai tumhare liye sandwich lati hun..(she got up..nd ws abt to go..)
Maan:arrey geet tum kahan chali..(he doesnt know geet is gettng him sandwich)
Geet:sandwich lane..(she goes)
Maan:adhi..sandwich kis ke liye??
(adhi n niharika laughs)
Niharika:arrey..tum kahan khoye hue ho maan...tumhare liye sandwich..
Maan:par maine to manga hi nai..
Adhi:tune brkfst nai kiya na...u knw niharika...ye maan aj kl aise hi khoya hua rehta hai...
Niharika:accha..meri geet bhi..
Maan:mai abhi aya...(he goes to geet)
Adhi:yaar tumhe nai lagta ye dono ek dusre ki kuch zyada hi care krte hai..
Niharika:kuch zyada??bht zyada..kya tum b wai sochte ho inke baare me jo mai sochti hun..
Adhi:u mn????love..
Niharika:(smiles)yup!! I think..may b..
Adhi:bt prblm ye hai ki ye dono nai samaj rahe...
Niharika:sahi kaha...hume hi kuch krna hoga..u knw geet ne aj tk kisi b ladke se itni batein nai ki...
Adhi:arrey..same goes wid maan...v hv to plan sumthng to make dem get closer..
Geet waiting fr sandwich maan goes to her..
Maan:hello..
Geet:(smiles)tum baitho maan..il get it
Maan:nah!!tum jao mai lata hun..
Geet:arrey brkfst tumne nai kiya hai..toh u go nd sit..
Maan:maine dinnr toh kiya hai na..toh u go sit..(dey argue fr a while...nd geet starts laughing..nd maan too..)
Dey get d sandwich...
Maan:tumhe kuch chahiye geet??
Geet:nai..
(maan doesnt pay fr sandwich..he has his accnt thr..wteva he buys vil b writtn in a buk...nd later maan pays it...)
Geet:(gives money fr sandwich..)
Maan:arrey koi baat nai geet..chalo...
Geet:pr aise kaise??
Maan:(tels abt his accnt in canteen)
Geet:(smiles) ye accha hai...
(maan n geet walks together to thr table nd grabs d chair beside eachothr)
Maan:(while having his sandwich)tumlogon ko kuch chahiye kya??..
Niharika:nai...geet ko sandwich bht pasand hai...
Maan:accha..geet shal i gt u one..
Geet:nai nai...
Niharika:arrey kya maan tum pura sandwich akele khaoge kya??geet k sath share krlo..
(geet stares at niharika)
Maan:geet..ye lo..
Geet:(she takes a small piece of it..nd starts eating)
Niharika:adhi...tumhe pata hai..khana share krne se pyaar badta hai..
Adhi:haan haan..(he shouts)
Geet n maan look eachother..
Geet:bs niharika...
(maan finishes his sandwich)
Adhi:chalo bahar chalte hai...
(everyone leaves...al four standing near the college gate...geet shouts in excitmnt)
Geet:awww..soo cute..
Maan:kya??...
(Geet pulls maan's hand..nd points her finger towrds a cute baby...nd smiles..maan goes near her..)
Maan:(he cld see d baby bt still)kahan geet??
Geet:(cldnt speak properly as maan is so close to her)waaa..wahan..
Maan:(luked her n smiling he said) bht cute..(indirectly he said dt to geet)
Geet:(blushes)
Niharika:haan geet bht cute hai baby...
Geet goes near to the baby...maan following her.

Edited by shabru098 - 13 years ago

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

yu ve updated part 8 already dr

anyways awesome update but post t next part soon😊

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_Shabru_

@_Shabru_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mayapari
yu ve updated part 8 already dr
anyways awesome update but post t next part soon😊

sry by mistake.. updated part 9.. chck out..

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: shabru098
sry by mistake.. updated part 9.. chck out..

yup awesome😊 but wen ll yu update t next part yaar?????????????

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

THAKS FOR THE PM... LOVED THE UPDATE

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Haaye its sho shweet FF

Loved Maaneet

Update soon

Plz add me to ur pm list

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_Shabru_

@_Shabru_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Part-10

Its tym to go to thr classes...bt maan is in no mood to go away frm geet...nd geet too...
Adhi:chalo yar class chalte hai jus 5mins..our classes wil start..
geet:class???
Niharika:q geet???class nai chalna..(geet smiles)
Maan:ek din class nai jayenge to kuch nai hoga...
Adhi:ye bhi sahi hai..
Niharika:arrey class chlte hai...kya karenge humlog...
Adhi:niharikaaa...bhul

gayiii!!!(he reminds her of d mission "maan geet ko milao")
Niharika:haan haan..lets bunk...:D
Geet:tjko kya hogaya achanak se...
Maan:kya bhulgayi niharika...abhi batao na
Adhi:kuch nai yar chalo hum kahin chlte hai...
Geet:par kahan???hum chup chaap cls chlte hai...
Maan:nooo...
Geet:oyee!!class chlte hai...
Maan:nai...humlog nai jarahe..u go..(pulling her leg)
Geet:thik hai mai ja rahi hun...huh!!!!
Maan:jao na..jao jao..khadi q ho ur getting late...
Geet:(in anger)ja rahi hun..(she jus turns n is goin...maan holds hr hand...nd tells...)
Maan:mai mazakh kr raha tha..tum chali jaogi toh hum kya karenge??..(makes a baby face)
Geet:(smiles)...accha!!!!????
Adhi:ohh aisi baat hai..tj sirf geet k sath jana hai...chalo niharika hum kahin aur chlte hai...
Geet:arrey maan ka ye matlab nai tha...
Niharika:hume sab samaj ata hai..adhi..chalo chlte hai(niharika winks)
Adhi:chalo chalo...in dono ko hamari zarurat hi nai hai...
Maan:stp ur drama guys...i dint mean it...
Niharika:wateva...v r goin..geet 3bje mai yahan gate k pass tj milti...ghr to sath hi chalenge na..ya fir???...
Geet:ghr bhi sath chalenge aur tu apni nautanki band kr...chl mere sath..
Niharika:mj nai chlna...c u at 3..bye...(adhi n niharika leaves)
Geet n Maan...standing near the gate..dont knw wt to tlk...nd wr to go...bth luking eachothr..wit a bigg question mark on thr faces...den atfr sum 2mins...
Maan:geet!!
Geet:haan...
Maan:kuch bologi ya nahi??
Geet:ye mai bhi keh sakti hun...tum kuch bolege ya nahi??
Maan:mmm-hmm...argue krne k liye hamesha taiyyar...(smiles)
Geet:mai kahan behes kr rahi hun...
Maan:arrey kuch nai meri maa...
Geet:maa???? mai??
Maan:nahi nahi...wo aisa bolte hai na..meri maa
Geet:accha kaise bolte hai??
Maan:ufff...mj pagal krdogi tum...accha abhi tumhe yahi khade rehna hai kya??
Geet:mai khadi hun??tum khade ho..
Maan:arreyyy..tum bhi to khadi ho na...
Geet:haan to mai b wai keh rahi hun na...
Maan:bs...kitna behes karogi tum...sidhe sidhe bolo hum dono khade hue hai...
Geet:ufff....
Maan:chalo cafe chlte hai...
Geet:kahan??
Maan:yahi pass me hai...
Geet:(starts walking)chalo...
Maan:oye madam!! kahan chali??
Geet:cafe???
Maan:haan..geet!!! bike me chalte hai na...
Geet:bike me kyun???
Maan:fir??chalke jaogi kya??
Geet:haan...i prefer walking dan goin in bike...lets walk na??
Maan:jaisa aap kahe...chalo!!!!
(Maan geet walking to the cafe...nd dey shld cross a road nw..geet tries to cross the road on her own..maan holds hr hand...??)
Maan:pehli thik se dekh to lo...aise koi cross krta hai road??
Geet:(*SHY* coz maan is holding hr hand) q??
Maan:(holding geet's haand crosses the road...nd even aftr crossing..his still holding geet's hand nd walking..)tumhe to road cross krna bhi nai ata...pata nai scooty kaise chalati hogi tum...(laughs)
Geet:mai bht acche se drive krti hun...chaho to niharika se puchlo...
Maan:(laughs again) thik hai puchlunga kisi din...
Geet:hmmm...accha hum cafe q ja rahe hai??
Maan:q ki hum do ghante khade nai reh skte na..isliye..
Geet:pr hum cafe me karenge kya??
Maan:vil hav coffee geet...
Geet:pr mj coffee nai peeni...
Maan:tum ice cream khalena...
Geet:ice cream???thik hai..ye accha hai...
Maan:har cheez me complain krti hun...
Geet:maine kab kis cheez k liye complain kiya???
Maan:nai nai..tum kahan complain krti ho??...
(dey reach cafe...maan pushes cafe door frm his left hand...nd bth enter...find a table n go to thr table...maa pulls a chair fr geet...??)
Geet:thank u...:)
Maan:(smiles) toh kya lengi aap??
Geet:aap hi ne to kaha tha….mai ice cream khaongi...
Maan:haan na...konsa flvr???
Geet:butterscotch...
Maan:thik hai..abhi aya mai...
sitting nd waiting fr maan...maan while goin to order turns back n smiles...