New OS: Obsessive Lover!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey friends, so this is me, Jazz again!!! Actually I'm loving this obsessive lover track so much in the show!!! And I'm also loving Vikram in the show!!! I know he is negative, but there is different kind of spark in him!! I'm sure you guys have noticed it too!!!

So anyways, thought of writing something on this new track!! I know it's not that good...but the reason is that it was supposed to be an SS, but due to shortage of time, I had to squeeze it and make it into an OS!!! I know it was not right...as there was so much scope to write in this concept...but my hands are tied!! Can't do anything!!! Have no time!!! I wrote this now because if I had left it for later, I probably would've forgotten about it!!!

So enough of my blabbering... So this is the OS on Obsessive lover but with a twist!!!! And sorry its a long one

Geet: Super model (originally from India but went to Paris when she was 14)

Vikram: Geet's childhood friend in India

Maan: ?????

Time: 4:00 am Place: Indiragandhi International Airport

He looks at his watch impatiently... Just another half an hour!! His eyes are red with the lack of sleep... He hasn't slept from last whole week... He hasn't even closed his eyes for a second tonight!!!

He knew her flight is at 4:30 in the morning, but he's been waiting at the airport since yesterday!!! He just couldn't keep his excitement to himself!!! He wants to dance in joy!!! After all his Geet is coming home after 4 years!!!

Just her name sent butterflies to his stomach!! Only he knew how he has spent these 4 years without her!!! Their separation has made him realise that he has loved her...loved her more than anything!!!

These 4 years he has spent counting each and every second!!!

But now his wait is over!! His Geet is coming back to him!!! Now he will never let her go away from him ever!!!

He again looks at the time...

It's time!!!!

His heartbeats started beating very fast realising that Geet is here!!!

He searches for her from the crowd...but he didn't have to do much work... There she was!!!

Geet was looking around to see if someone has come to pick her up!! She was wearing a pink top and white shorts!! She was so pretty that she stood out from the crowd!!!

But for him, she always stood out from the world!! She was different!! She was special!!!

Geet looked around casually to see any familiar face in the airport...and there he was!!!

She walked towards him with a sweet smile on her lips!!!

He felt so proud of himself knowing that her beautiful smile was for him!!!

She came close to him and hugged him!! He felt like he has got the whole world in his arms right now!!! He stroked her back gently trying to feel her skin...imagining how it would feel to touch her bare skin under his hands...

Geet broked the hug and said smiling at him "I missed you so much Vikram!!"

Vikram smiled happily and said "I missed you too Geet!!"

Vikram was Geet's childhood friend. They were neighbors and became best friends since the age of 5!!! They had never been separated from each other until 4 years ago when Geet's parents moved to Paris!!

He still remembers when she was going, how much they both have cried!!!

For some months, they had regularly talked on phone but then Geet had started getting busy in her studies and their phone conversations have decreased in number!! Then Geet started getting modelling assignments and she got more busy, so their phone conversations were far and few!! But they e-mailed each other on regular basis!!!

But Geet hasn't left Vikram's mind even for a second in all these 4 years!! Vikram had never came in between her career or studies...his love was not selfish!! He has set her free!! And he knew she will come back to him one day!!! And today all his wishes has come true!!!

Geet had got a modelling assignment in India a week ago, and she has informed Vikram that she was coming to India!! Only he knows how he has spent this one week!!!!

Geet sits in his car and they were about to drive off, when a little kid comes to them and gives a beautiful bouquet of red roses in Geet's hands.

Before Geet could ask who is it from, the kid ran away!!

Vikram looks at the bouquet frowning and asked "Who is it from?"

Geet shrugs and looks around and saw a note in there... She opens the note and reads it 'These roses wants to welcome the most beautiful princess home!!! Welcome to India Geet!!! From: Your biggest fan!'

Geet stares at the card for few seconds while deep in thought!!

Vikram asks her "Who is it from?" there's an edge of jealousy in his voice which was missed by Geet.

Geet smiles casually and said "I don't know!! Maybe some fan!!"

Vikram let's it go seeing that Geet is not caring about it much!! It is true, this might be from one of her fans...after all, she is a super model!! She would be having millions of fans all over the world!! But no fan is lucky like Vikram who has luck to sit beside her!!!

They reaches hotel... Geet has decided to stay at the hotel as her parents had sold their home when they had moved to Paris!! Vikram has insisted to her to stay at their home, but she has declined the offer!! And Vikram didn't wanted to force her in any way!!!

When Geet gets out of the car, she was surprised to see the red roses scattered on the floor making a way into the hotel!!! She looks around and thought that it might be for someone else!!!

But as she moved towards the entrance, she was shocked to see a heart made at the door of the entrance with white roses and in it was written with red roses 'Welcome to the hotel Geet!!'

Now Geet was very intrigued that who was doing it while Vikram was hating this unknown person already!!

Geet goes inside the hotel and inquires about who did all this?? But the hotel staff tells her that they don't know who is it, they just got a call to do it and they got the payment for it through cheque!!

But the receptionist tells her that they had just received a bouquet for her...it might say who is it from!!!

Geet quickly opens the note, but somewhere she knew that there's gonna be no name in it!! And she realised she wasn't wrong as she opened the note 'I know you must be thinking that who scattered these roses in your path!! But don't worry princess, these roses were just for your safety!! I won't allow anything harm you ever...not even the ground!!! You are my life Geet!! I love you!!!
From: Your biggest fan!'

Geet frowns at the note!! This was getting a little too much!!

Vikram peeked at the note from her shoulder and his blood boiled at the words 'I love you!'. He clenched his fist in anger and said "Who is this??"

Suddenly Geet felt someone's presence!! It felt like someone is watching her!! Her body instantly becomes stiff and she looks around to see if there was someone there!!

But the hotel lobby was empty! It was 5:00 in the morning and everybody was probably sleeping!!

Geet looks back at Vikram and said frowning "I don't know!! Maybe some crazy fan!!!" she shakes off the feeling and then said to him "Viks, I think you should go home! I'm also feeling very tired!! I want to sleep for some time!!"

Vikram looks at Geet, and saw that she really looks tired!! He controls his anger and said "Ok!! You take care!! Call me if you need something!!"

Geet nods and he leaves after hugging her briefly.

Geet takes the keys to her room from the reception and goes towards her room!! She didn't really need the directions to her room as the bed of roses was showing her the way to her room!!!

She enters her room!!! Shock washed through her as the whole room was decorated with the flowers like a bride!!

She takes a sigh and goes inside. She goes to the washroom and comes out after taking a shower. She was gonna crash on the bed when her hands touched a box.

She picks it up and opens it!! There was a beautiful diamond necklace in it with a note again.

She sighs and opens the note 'Please make this necklace more beautiful by letting it touch your beautiful neck!! Please wear this for someone who loves you the most in this world!! From: Your biggest fan who loves you crazily!!!
PS: and yes, stay away from that Vikram if you want to see him alive! I can tolerate anything but I can't tolerate anybody else touching you!!'

The last threat in the note gave goosebumps to her! She had a feeling that the threat is real!!! Her heartbeats rose at an abnormal speed!!

How does he know that Vikram hugged her?? Was he here when she was with Vikram?? Was that eerie feeling true when she had felt someone watching her then??

She was feeling very restless!! Who is he and what does he want???

She takes out her phone and dials a number... She waited impatiently as it ringed and hoped that someone will pick it up... But nobody picked it up!!!

She dials Vikram's number and tells him everything as he picked up the phone. He gets worried to see Geet scared!!

And he immidiately comes to Geet's hotel...

Geet hugs him tightly scared!! Vikram consols her while stroking her back!!

Suddenly Geet gets a text from a private number 'Didn't I asked you not to touch that Vikram??!! Why don't you listen to me??!! I love you so much then why isn't it enough for you Geet??!! Now you will be responsible for whatever happens!!'

Geet's eyes widened in fear at the message!! She was shivering in fear!!! What is he gonna do now??!! What if he does something to Vikram??? Something in her was telling her that he is dangerous!! He could do anything!! Suddenly she felt fear for Vikram!!

But Vikram consoles her that nothing will happen to her. He was worried for her, but at the same time he was happy that she is caring for him!! That means she loves him too!!!

After a long time, Geet dozes off, and Vikram also leaves for his home after some time...

Geet opens her eyes slowly and adjusts to the new surroundings...

She looks around and remembers that she is in India!!

But suddenly her eyes fell on something and widened in shock!!!

She screamed in fear at the sight!!!

There was something written on the dressing table mirror with 'blood'!!!

She slowly gets up and reads what's written on it 'A gift is waiting for you at the city hospital Geet!! Hurry up! If you want to see your friend alive!!'

She quickly went to the City Hospital fearing that what might have happened to Vikram!!!

She enquires about him at the reception and comes to know that Vikram has met with an accident!! But he's fine, and he didn't got any serious injuries!!!

She closes her eyes in relief that Vikram is ok!!

She was about to go to meet him when a little kid gives her a piece of paper!!

She was fearing to open it now not knowing what's in it!! She didn't know what he's gonna do next??!!!

She opened the note with trembling hands and it said 'Ab tak to tumhe samajh mein aa hi gaya hoga, ke meri baat na sun-ne ka kya anjaam ho sakta hai!! I haven't done anything to Vikram yet!! But if you'll touch him again, then I'm afraid I have to take some serious steps!!! I love you Geet and I would not tolerate anybody else touching you!! You are mine princess!!! Just mine!!!!'

Geet was scared like hell now!!! Her hands trembling with fear!!!

She goes slowly inside Vikram's room. He has just some scratches on his body, otherwise he was fine!!!

Vikram looks at Geet's condition and she was in real mess!! Her hair was messy...her eyes red with tears...fear flooded on her face... But it gave him strange kind of satisfaction!! He thought that because Geet also loves him, so she can't see him in this state!!!

He tried to console her, but Geet was keeping strange distance between them! She wasn't touching Vikram!!! She was scared that what he might do if she doesn't listen to him!!! She had a feeling that he's watching her every second!! He knows what she's doing in every moment of her life!!! And god knows what he'll do to Vikram if she touches him again!!!

She was lost in her thoughts and she didn't realized that Vikram asked her to accompany him to a party as his date!!

But when Geet didn't reply, Vikram shakes her and said "Geet??!!"

"Huh??" Geet comes out of the trance...

"So will you go to the party with me??" he asked again hopefully.

Geet pulls herself together and asks "When is it??"

She hasn't heard the 'date part' before and she thought he's just asking her to some party.

"Tonight...at XYZ place!!" he told her.

Geet shrugs nonchalantly and said "Sure! I'll be there!!"

Vikram gets on ninth cloud with her answer.

Geet, who is oblivious to the fact that she has just landed herself into a date, leaves from there...

As soon as she goes out of the hospital, she takes out her phone and dials a number...hoping desperately that someone picks it up!!! How much she needs him at this point of time!!!

But nobody picked up the phone and it went on the voice mail!!!

Geet was about to hang up but then she thought of leaving a message...

She said "Where are you?? I've been calling you since so long!!! Please call me back as soon as you get this message!! It's important!!!!"

And she hangs up... But as soon as she was about to put her phone back in her purse, her phone rang...

She looks at the screen and it said private number. Suddenly her hands started trembling as she had a feeling that it's 'him'!!! Her heart started beating erratically in her chest and she picks up the phone while panicking to death...

Geet: Hello!

Other person: ...

Geet frowns and said again: Hello

Other person: Hello Geet!!

The voice was a deep baritone and it sents chills to her spine. She knew it's him!!! Her breathing gets heavy in fear but she still asked

Geet: Koun??!!

Other person: Your biggest fan!!

Geet felt her heart sinking... She almost yelled into the phone in panic

Geet: Who are you?? What do you want from me?? Why are you scaring me??

Other person: I love you Geet!! And you don't have to fear me!! I would never harm you!!!

Geet said frustratingly "Then why don't you come in front of me??? Why are you hiding???"

Other person: Main tumhare saamne aana chahta hoon Geet! Magar main ghabraata hoon, ke kahin tumne mujhse pyaar karne se inkaar kar diya to..?! Main to mar hi jaaoonga!!

Geet gets a grip on herself and said determinedly "I want to meet you!!"

He pauses for few seconds and said "Alright Geet! I'll meet you!! Tonight at 7 o clock at ABC place!!"

Geet: Fine! I'll be there!!!

x-x-x-x-x

Geet has almost forgotten that she has a 'date' with Vikram tonight!!!

She is waiting for 'him' at the told place!!!

When suddenly her phone rang...

She picks up the phone and says "Hello!"

Vikram: Geet, where are you?? I'm waiting for you at the party!!

Geet closes her eyes as she realises that she has completely forgotten about the party.

She says "Umm... Vikram...uh... I'll be there in few minutes!! I'm just on my way!!!"

And she hangs up...

She is still waiting for 'him'!!!

Suddenly she felt someone's presence behind her and her heartbeats fastened in fear!!!

She turns back and her eyes widens in shock!!!!!

x-x-x-x-x

Vikram is waiting impatiently for Geet!

He has decided that he will propose her today!!! He takes out the ring from his pocket and looks at it...A smile came on his lips...

Suddenly someone taps on his shoulder and he looks back!!

As he turns back, he saw Geet standing there holding the arm of a man fondly...

Vikram's heart pierced as he saw the sight and he could tell that this was no ordinary touch! The way Geet was holding the stranger's arm was enough to tell him that it was way more than a friendly touch!!!

The way she was looking at him, the way she was smiling at him, the way she was touching him was exactly the same that Vikram wished it was for him!!!

She was looking at the stranger with the same love and care as he looked at her!! Just her simple body language was enough to tell him that she loves this stranger!!!

Geet smiled and said to Vikram "Viks, meet Maan!" and said mischievously "My biggest fan!!"

Vikram looks at them in confusion... He thought that why Geet is holding some psycho lover's hand?? If he is her biggest fan, that means he was the one who was sending her flowers and all!! She was so scared of him until yesterday, then what changed all of a sudden??!!!

His thoughts broke with Geet's next words "He is the love of my life!!" Vikram saw Geet looking at him with immense love in her eyes and hethought he is gonna explode with pain in his heart!!

He asked with pain in his voice "What?? But how is that possible??!!"

Geet missed the pain in his voice as she was too engrossed in looking into Maan's eyes.

Maan said with a smirk instead of Geet "I'll explain it to you Vikram!! Geet and I know each other from Paris and we love each other!! Actually couple of weeks back, Geet got this modelling assignment!! I didn't want her to go alone to an unknown place--"

Vikram cuts him short sarcastically "This place is not unknown to her!!"

Maan looks threateningly at his tone and said "It wasn't!! But now it is!!"

Vikram could feel the hidden meaning behind his tone. He looks at him frowning.

Maan looks at Geet and changes his expressions and said smiling "Now Geet's world is somewhere else!! She belonged somewhere else!!!" he looked towards Vikram in the end and Vikram could feel an implied threat in his words.

Maan continued "So I didn't want her to go alone... You see Geet is too innocent to see the true colours of some people, so I 'had to' come with her!!"

Vikram narrowed his eyes as he could clearly tell that Maan's words were pointed towards him.

Vikram said daringly "So if you loved her--"

"Uh-uh!!" Maan cuts him in between and said lightly "Not loved her, loves her!! I still love her!!! Present tense!!" he said smirking.

Vikram rolls his eyes and said casually because of Geet's presence "Ok! 'Loves' her, then why were you scaring her by pretending an obsessive lover!!"

Geet smiles and says "Please dont mind Viks! It was just one of his stupid pranks!!" she slapped on his arm playfully

Maan looks at Geet intensely and said "I did not pretend anything!! I am her obsessive lover!! I love her crazily!!!"

Maan bends towards her and takes her lips into a gentle kiss...while Vikram looked away hurted!!!

He can't tolerate this!!! His Geet...being with someone else!!! He felt his heart crying blood tears!!!

Maan broke the kiss and looks at Vikram smirking tauntingly and said "And I would not tolerate anybody touching her!!!"

Geet slaps Maan's arm playfully again and said "Maan!!! Vikram is just my friend!!!" she rolled his eyes on him!!

Maan smirked and said "Ofcourse sweetheart!! Then I'm sure your friend would love to join us on our wedding ceremony!!"

Geet looks at Maan surprised while Vikram looks at him shocked!!

"Maan, what are you saying??!!!" Geet said unbelievably.

Maan smiled at her and said "Yes Geet! I want to marry you princess!! So will you marry your this obsessive lover??"

Geet looks at him while happiness radiating from each pore of her body!!!

She hugged him tightly and said "Yes!!" she broke the hug and kissed him on his mouth!!

Vikram couldn't tolerate it anymore!! He silently walks out...

He was about to sit in his car, when he heard someone calling his name "Vikram!!"

He looks back and saw Maan walking towards him...

Maan said tauntingly "Vikram!! So you are Geet's friend huh??"

Vikram didn't reply and just looks at Maan.

Maan said threateningly "I know you liked Geet!! You can lie to Geet, but you can't lie to Maan Singh Khurana!! I can see right through you Vikram Oberoi!! Geet ke baare mein waisa kabhi khayaal bhi apne mann mein mat laana!! Geet is just mine, and I would not tolerate anybody keeping a bad eye on Geet!! So next time, before crossing her way, just remember this!! I love her and I'm obsessed about her!! Yes I'm her obsessive lover!!! And I will break your limbs if you ever touch my Geet again!!"

Vikram wanted to answer him back but he knew that there is no point!! It was true that Geet loved him and he was just her friend!! No matter how much he loves her, he would not come in between her happiness!!

He sits in the car without a word and drove off...

One month later, Geet went back to Paris with Maan and they got married in the presence of both families!!!

Vikram heard the news after a year that Geet had twin boys...

After few years later, Vikram also got married, but he was never able to forget his first love...but who was now someone else's love!!!

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Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago