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Posted: 13 years ago
@ bangalores wonderful part
what a twist 👏
i have not a single ff in which dadi was such a low person but in this you brought it up
excellent work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum chechi..
u rocked it..
In ds daadi s so different...
full of luv,passion,hate,revenge etc..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

okies here goes...dont know whether its good...i just dindt want dadima to be neagtive.😆😆😆

PART 9:

Savitri Devi was a woman of strong convictions and thought her to be a good judge of character. For the first time ever, she had been proved wrong! She couldn't believe that she had read Geet so wrong. She had thought her to be a simple sweet girl, and after watching her fearlessly standing up to Maan had decided she would be the perfect badi bahu!

But boy had she been wrong. The innocent face hid a cruel and wicked soul. She was thankful that Vicky had shown her, her true colors. And then Sameera had dropped her bombshell. She had pleaded with dadima to do something to stop Geet from stealing away Maan. Even though Savitri Devi didn't like Sameera, it was too late. No Khurrana child was going to be born out of wedlock! And this was the perfect solution to save Maan from that Geet's clutches.

But seeing her grandson back to his old harsh and cold demeanor, she had some doubts. The smile which had just begun blooming sometimes was not seen since the day Maan learnt of geet's betrayal.

She looked at him, working out forcefully, trying to forget her.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DcYsgvktDF0[/YOUTUBE]

awarapan banjarapan, ek hala hai sine me

har dam har pal bechainee hai, kaun bhala hai sine me

No matter how hard he tried, he couldt seem to remove the remnants of her ehsaas from his soul. Telling himself that she was a liar and a cheat, a back stabber wasn't enough. The emptiness in his soul made a mockery of his convictions.

iss dharti par jis pal suraj roj savere ugata hai - (2)

apne liye toh thik usee pal, roj dhala hai sine me

awarapan banjarapan, ek hala hai sine me

How could she do this to him, was it all a lie? Her eyes that spoke the truth or so he believed were just hiding her motives. She had come to destroy the Khurrana khandaaan, and she had succeeded in destroying him. But he was Maan Singh Khurrana! He wudnt give her the satisfaction of knowing she had won.

jane yeh kaisee aag lagee hai, isame dhuwa na chingaree - (2)

ho na ho uss par kahee koyee, khwab jala hai sine me

awarapan banjarapan, ek hala hai sine me

He had tried to hurt her during his engagement, but the pain in her eyes had killed him a thousand times over. Even in the hospital, his heart had refused to let go of her, till she had regained consciousness. He thanked heavens that he managed to leave before she woke up and caught him.

He wanted to destroy her as she had destroyed him, but managed to hurt himself more every time he did that! He cursed his foolish heart!

jis raste par tapta suraj saree rat nahee dhalta - (2)

ishk kee aise rah gujar ko hamne chuna hai sine me

awarapan banjarapan, ek hala hai sine me

Like today. He had fired her from KC and insulted her in front of his entire staff, dragging her and throwing her out of the building himself, when she had come to hand him her resignation.

Pain had become his constant companion. There was no other substitute.

kaha kise ke liye hai mumkin sab ke liye ek sa hona - (2)

thoda sa dil meraa bura hai, thoda bhala hai sine me

awarapan banjarapan, ek hala hai sine me

As he was about to break a burning plank, a voice called him "Ruko Maan!"

He turned around to find Meera standing at the entrance of the gym.

SO HOW WAS IT😉

YAHA TO MEERA KI TAREEF KAR DENA..🤣

wowww MINDBLOWING UPDATE👏awesome awesome awesome😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aashluvsmaan

wonderful part 9

meera is here so she will tell the truth to maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
@part9
awesum..
so maan too believed others..
nw meera's entry s just a big surprise...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow just read the whole story in a go
it is really awesome
pls upodate the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey all...jus read part 2-9 nw! Was superb, emotionla n intense! Love the songs! To all the writers...fab job! Well written.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kathie_berns

Ok.. Part 9 has been posted by Aashu... Thank you aashu... Awesome part... What say... We all writers update one part after another and complete the story today? How many are online please like this post.. I will continue part 10...and whoever online can do the next...😊

i'll continue after you Kathie>>>
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 8 and 9
nice turn of events
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will after Nazmaa..so start posting pps..hehe

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