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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..we have two writers ready 😃..Naz and sheryu...

waiting for Naz to tell us what Meera is doing...can't wait

Reya <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

i will after Nazmaa..so start posting pps..hehe

Haha :) Mchopra Guess we will hve to wait for kathie to update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awesome..we have two writers ready 😃..Naz and sheryu...


waiting for Naz to tell us what Meera is doing...can't wait

Reya <3

Kathie is updating part 10 .. so waiting for her lol :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kathie_berns

will update strange desires tomorow... for sure..😉ANybody else interested in continueing the next part? i'm a little busy right now..

i think kathie is not here right now..why don't you take over Naz (is it okay if i call you that 😳) ??


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Posted: 13 years ago
both part 8& 9 were roller coaster ride
Awesome is a small word the update
loved the change of events
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
parts 8 n 9 ...

awesome ... superb ...

loved the twists ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Looks like kathie ran away..so we wait..and i will be off to sleep in an hr so then u ppl wait..haha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

i think kathie is not here right now..why don't you take over Naz (is it okay if i call you that 😳) ??



sure will do.. and yeah u can call me that x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay i may have ruined it.. lol :P

But i thought its about time Geet had someone on her side...

So Here goes...
Hope You Like it...
Please Comment...
Part 10

Maan turned to see Meera standing in front of him.. Anger shown in her eyes, her fist was scrunched up in a ball as if she was about to throw a punch... Meera was infact Geet's Elder Sister/ best friend And was also Dev's Wife And Maan's sister - in - law.. Maan resp xected meera and would never do anything to hurt her but today he had hurt her bad... he hurt her sister, insulted her upbringing, her dignity and her family...

Meera walked up to him and Smacked him across the face.. maan hand automatically replaced Meera's and he held his cheek and kept his head down in shame.. But he was right for what he did with Geet's although he shoudnt have insulted her family..

"maan Tumne meri behen ki saath jo bhi kiya bohat bura kiya.. Usko Aur mujko esa Zaleel Nahi karna chahiya tha." she said in anger... She held his colar and yelled at him...

"Aaj jo tumne kiya uske baad na meh Aur mera bacha is ghar mein raho gi aur na he tumse bat karogi.. Lekin us se pehle Yeh Sach Jaan Lo" she said...

"Kaise sach Meera?" he asked angryily... "Ab kaun sa sach reh gaya hai, Hmm.. tumhara behen ne jo kiya uska kya... usne jo mere saath kiya vo kya hmm?? "

"Gudiya Ne kuch nahi kiya.. Meri Geet ko yeh sab karna nhi aata.. Yeh Doka, yeh kisi aadmi ko us larki se cheena ... yeh sab nahi aata usko... yahan tak usko pyar se nafrat hogi hai.. usi din se jab se tumne sameera se yeh shaadi karni ka fasla kiya hai... us din se yeh yahan se chalne vale thi.. is sheher ko chorna vali thi.. lekin nahi kiya kyun ke us ka accident hua.. lekin uska accident karvya kaun.. tumhara khud ka bhai.. VICKY!!" She Yelled..

"Vicky?" he repeated..

"Haan Vicky.. Aur uska vo dost Arjun .. Vicky ne Geet ko club mein bula liya.. when Geet got there HE ordered her drink Aur usne kuch mila liya tha.. Jab Geet ne yeh drink pee le vo naashe mein thi... She hardly knew wha t was happening.. arjun uske saath..."She stopped As tears were coming down her face... she couldnt carry on.. her hand covered her mouth in order to stop the crying the thought o her baby sister... she left maan and just went to her room and started packing..
(listen to Sad song)
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ErSiT8gDmU[/YOUTUBE]

Betaabi ka, khaamoshi kaeeth
Ek anjaana sa nagma hai

Meera thought about G?eet, How she would be feeling.. This is the second time her sister had lost someone close to her... Meera Now
feared for her sister..

Mehsoos isse karke dekho
Har saans yahan ek sadma hai

Meera took a picture of Geet and hugged it tight.. she cried while hugging her picture.. her back to the door, she was unaware of Maan standing there.. She yelled to Her babaji... "phir meri Gudiya ke saath asa kiya aap ne... Phir usko ek esa dard diya hai jis ke karan pyar hai.. aab vo kisi ko pyar nahi karige.. kisi se shaadi nahi kariga.. khud ko maar degi mera behen.. Jeetth jeetha khud mar jayigi .. bilkul akela.. " She wiped her tears..


Isko jitna samjho kam hai
Jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hai
Kabhi patjhad hai, kabhi saawan hai

"Agar usse kuch hua na phir mein us sameera ke aur Arjun ko sazaa dela kar rahoungi... unne zinda maar dongi... is khurana kandan ko
saza dehla kar rahoungi.. Dekna Babaji.. Ab mein apne behen ke liya laroungi.. aur usse yaha se door leh kar joungi..." She vowed...

Yeh aata jaata mausam hai

Kabhi hasna hai, kabhi rona hai
Jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hai

"Ab Geet akeli nahi hai.. mein hoon uske saath... aur sameera ko sab ke samne leh kar aungi.. " She wiped her tears.. Maan overheard everything and left to his room.. meera left the house with her son.. leaving a note behind for dev...

Over To You Mchopra Lol ..

Or Whoever's next..!! 😆
Hope u like it guys
Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Looks like kathie ran away..so we wait..and i will be off to sleep in an hr so then u ppl wait..haha

updated .. Lol:P your next

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