OS: Where the Time flies - Completed, 27/09, Pg 4 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

very interesting and refreshing... Maan tried to get back to her for writing that letter by quering her time sheet!!! N secretly adoring her... loved it very much...thanx for pm.

Thank you... am glad you liked it... 😳😳

Originally posted by: jazz07_dh

I don't know how many times I have already read it... As this is so mind-blowing!!!!

I didn't asked for another part in my previous comment as I thought of giving you sometime for giving such an awesome part...

But do you think it's time for asking for another part... Sorry I know I'm being too greedy, but what should I do?? Your updates leave me with craving for more...

So plz plz plz update another part *guilty puppy eyes*

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Originally posted by: ansah

Office scenes gawd how i miss Geet in office..

awww maan such a tease...😆😆

loved this one

Awww... thank you... i too miss Geet in office...

And yes, this Maan has a wicked sense of humour, doesnt take himself as seriously as the serial one... but the Geet too has a bit more spunk than the serial one! 😆

Originally posted by: t_areeb

they are too good with words

rightly so they wanted to know whether they were thinking about one another

and maan ordered food for her, that was really sweet

Hehe... yup... there is this fencing going on... and this undercurrent of comfort with each other that neither is willing to admit to!

Originally posted by: sonia_koolkhan

awesum update.

thanks 4 da pm.

Thank yiu... 😊

Originally posted by: ritzy09

oh dear...just stumbled on this... obviously hilarious...ii am still chuckling...

please please continue...this really needs to be continued

have you written anything else. If yes, please do send me a link...i will love to read as you are an amazing writer

Thank you sooo much!! i have only written 3 more OS... the links are as follows

OS: The Letter that Never Was

A shrt OS-Yet another lesson! UPD Pt 2, Pg 10,6/12

The Shortest OS Ever about the 'DEED'!! Wrng 18+

Hope you enjoy them!

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

🤣🤣🤣...oh lordy...struggles to breathe here...where do you get ur sense of humour girl? this stuff had me in laughing fits...and their witty dialogues were just too gud...

i am officially a fan o you...too gud 👏

😆😆😆... Thank you sooo much!! 😊😊
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Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Hehe... 😆😆 so i know where you guys are coming from... and i agree that my Maan (haha like the way i say my maan!!!) is an exaggerated version of the serial Maan... however, as i was telling Viva too, is that this Maan has his origins in the serial Maan only, only difference being that this one has a more quirky sense of humour and doesnt take himself as seriously the serial Maan... why do i say this? sample this...
These are gems by Maan from the office time... the one who could ...

1. Say tum koi itni haseen nahi ke sab mard tumpe marte hon

2. Geet aaj nahi, kal ke liye bula raha hoon sarcastically

3. Unbutton his shirt in office to freak her out

4. Yes, (it never struck me), metallic toh silver ya grey bhi ho
sakta hai

5. Maine kisi vajah se darwaza khula rakha tha, par tum toh tum ho

6. and my fav... "Likho kin kin bevakoofon ko kal naukri se nikalna
hai... ( when they get locked inside)... isme sabse oopar toh tumhara
naam ayega!! 😆😆

7. Ek din tumhari himmat test karoonga😳😳
8. And many others

these are ALL the things the Maan of yore would have done and when you
see this sarcastic side of his during that office track, my Maan wont
seem all that implausible!! Exaggerated yes but not completely
disassociated with the serial Maan...

Thanks Deej for listing down these fabulous dialogues of the dude! Loved 'em! And yes, I totally agree with you now...lol! Thing is, I'd missed n number of episodes of Geet in the beginning and so I'd missed most of these! Btw, Maan of those days was my ever fav character! Ever in love with him!
Looking forward to more of their office interactions. Sarcasm and subtle romance included! ;)
Cheers!

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Haha!! Jazz07... i have to say one thing for you... you were the single most persevering person asking for an update... while initially i was blank... i started thinking later coz of your various pms 😛😛... the result is finally there for you to see... hope you like it! 😊

Hey I just saw ur reply just now... And OMG!!! I'm on cloud 9...thankyou so much for taking my request into consideration... Love you loads...🤗
and plz continue soon...

Waiting dear!!!
Plz update it soon