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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for all the comments everyone it means alot 🤗


Part 2





She sat at the floor all disoriented she was coming up with terms as what had happened in two days.It was just few days ago she was the most happiest of human but now she sat there helpless.He was married and kicked out on the verge of being disowned by his family and that pricked her.



She knew what his family means to him and having met sameera yesterday she was sure the girl was nice and had all the qualities of being khurana khandan bahu.The problem here was no one will accept her as one,geet knew she had to do something even if it ment breaking her heart all over again.She stood up with a determined look she has to get all the happiness for both the families.


As much as she love her family his was also very important to her and very evidential part if her life seeing them in this state was not bearable and when she was indirect reason to their miseries.



She walked up to her father hesitantly and stood by his side, her father looked up as he saw her standing at exact same spot for quite a time.'Geet' Kuch chahiye beta he asked her indicating her to come and sit by his side."Papa" aap apni beti seh bohot pyar karte hona.Her father patted her head and said she was the most precious.


It was not the easiest of decisions but for his daughters sake he would do it and that too when she was in such a Vulnerable state emotionally broken.If this was something that could bring back the smile that reaches her eye he would put a side this ego.



Standing at the door of his house with her father by her side,they were welcomed with full heart but the problem was all hearts were not at content.



Mohinder Kuch kaam tha kya was the first question as they were seated,each and every gaze was on them Mohinder tried to say what he wanted to be words were not being formed.

"uncle aap please maan ko maaf karde jiye" geet blurted out with out lifting her eye.She was sure everyone was shocked even without looking at them.Geet beta we are sorry about all this his dad was apologetic,geet was fast enough so assure him and the entire family she was fine and have no complains.


She stood up and sat at dadima's feet taking her hand and asking her to forgive her grandson."please dadima aap toh is ghar mein sab se barai hona".Tears were threatening to escape but she hold it,dadima placed her hand on her cheeks trying to soothe away the pain the old eye can see.

She went to each and every member of his family and convinced them into having maan back in their lives and accept sameera as the daughter in law of the house.

Everyone but one person she knew it would not be the easiest of task,her best friend will not buy this of moving on and forgiving drama.Vicky has always been there for her,younger brother of Maan Singh Khurana the same attitude as his brother not easy to convince.

She loved maan with all her heart but it was Vicky who she confined in similar in age same school,college, same group of friends.she knew it was not the easiest of tasks making him believe it was better for everyone.

Vicky sun toh sahi na,she went and
placed her hand on his shoulder trying to get his attention but the shrugged it off.She tried talking again but not paying any heed he walked out of hall.


She follow him out of the house Vicky please baat ko samajh ne ki Koshish to karo she pleaded.She was in tears never did she realize this would be do difficult as masked it in front of the family but with Vicky she could not hold it back.

Seeing her breaking down his anger shot up more for himself then maan veerji,he had seen their love brewing and never in his wildest nightmares has he imagined his brother leaving her all alone on their wedding day and getting married with someone else.

He had decided never to see his brothers face leave alone forgiving and here geet was making it difficult for hi,he cannot say no to her but what she is asking is her death.What other might not see he does.Taking her in his arms trying to sooth away the pain that was permeant now."geet" tu roh maat haan please tu jo kahaygi wahi hoga.

One half of the battle was done but the second half was not easy task,yes her father was by her side and others on her family did not has much of a say when her father speak but brij veerji was not going to take this lightly.


Maan sat stood by the window looking at the dark pitch night,never had he wished things turn this way but he was helpless he never got hold of the situation.Her face kept surfacing those chocolate brown eye haunted him,he love her beyond words and knowing that he will not be able to feel the same for any other women.

Sameera was sound sleep he looked at her knowing that he wont be able to love her but he will make sure he performs all his duties as husband he has been unfair to geet but will make sure that does not happen to sameera.


He knew geet would understand his situation but never confine in her,she still came to meet them why do she has to be so practical.He wanted her to hate him,shout at
him,abuse him or better kill him but not being indifferent it hurts beyond.


Geet sat on floor with all her memories of them,from cards to letters,pictures and all the gifts he has given her.She had to let this go but her heart was not being obedient it was refusing to follow orders."Babaji meri madat karo" she said looking towards the top,scanning through the items brought back memories which made it more difficult.

Her hand reached a anklet she looked at with affection but she knew there was no right she has on this items so it moved it aside.

A hello kitty watch was next in order,his words echo and she gave a bitter smile.she remembered how he chided her when she told him she wanted that watch."geet" tum kya choti bachi ho that you want hello kitty watch.She was not pleased with his words and walked away saying something under breath cursing for sure.


Clearing up everything deciding what to do with the items that lay in front of her.Hugging his picture placing it close to her heart she cried her heart out as if it was better to let go of what was being a burden.clutching on to his pic as if it was the last time she felt a sleep in the floor.

Another day and new challenges should begin,hoping everything should be fine or at least praying with new hopes there was wait for new day...Naya din ka intezaar shayad bas intezaar hi rahgaya.

Edited by ansah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cant wait for the update please dont leave it too long . thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
lovely...

you are not going to make this happy...oh you are in so much trouble 😉😳😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome yaar..!!
loved it...!!
maan will perform all the duties as a husband with sameera...
aur geet bechari...oh god...
she is all broken...!!
she held his pic n fell asleep on the floor...!!
wonder wat else is in store for us...
really felt bad for geet...
but loved the update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Interesting concept dear.
How could Maan jst leave Geet afta so many years of love.
Geet is hell broken... Thou Maan had hurt her..
She still support him so that his family will accpet him..
My heart goes to the real girl in this story...😭

SInce u had already alert us saying u cant promise an happy ending..
I wont be keeping high hope...
Please update the next part dear...
Eager to read...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
loved it ansah
the pain geet is going through is very well written

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Hi ansah
kya re sad ending ka warning mere dil baitha ja raha hain
me loved only happy ending re
iye sameera ko mar de
kisi aur ko dekh nehi sakti maan ke sath
chal mere bak bak bahut hua
come to the ff
congratulation for new ff
awesome, brilliant start , updates r so beautiful
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one do continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!! 4 d new ss ...

interesting concept ...

part 1 n 2 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...


Edited by maaneetsangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Oh this is so heart breaking and the way you wrote it keeping the ladies feeling intact with geets character kudos to you di anyways seriously you made me cry as two lover have separated prior to circumstances and geet is will for her love to be happy even though he left her on her marriage day she doesn't want to separate him from his family anyways great update can't wait to read more 😊

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