New MG SS |Intezaar| part 2 - page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone...yes it is me again 😳😳...




I know me is just so lazy with updating but I am here with another SS...with some 5 parts
I just could not stop myself from writing this...I was reading a digest and one of the stories it had me in tears...This women her story is so touching that you cannot help but feel for her
This concept is not mine
I am not promising any happy ending...😳😳
Ho gayi shaam kisi ke intezaar me,



dhal gayi raat kisi ke intezaar me,


phir houa savera kisi ke intezaar me,
intzaar ki aadat pad gayi kisi ke intezaar me.
Mein yeh shaddi nahin kar sakta,I am sorry
It was her wedding the happiest day of her life she was waiting for this day since she was 18 and now it was happening after 6 long years.She was left numbed with his words, never in her worst of her nightmares she tought she would have
He stood there infront of her with his face downcast,he was guity and that was visible from his eye,eventhough they did not met hers.She knew him this much infact she only knew him all these years her world revolves around
She heard people gasp in shock but that did not matter all that matter was him and seeing him this dejected was not what she want.He was being kicked out by her brother,but she could not do anything she was helpless.
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namita25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww a new ss...can't wait for it...😳
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wow nice start yaar...do update soon
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Agree
Nice start
where did you get your inspiration from ?
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Originally posted by: miss_giggles

Agree

Nice start
where did you get your inspiration from ?

It is from a reader's digest..and it is a real life story
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Clad in a heavy maroon and silver wedding dress, with khandani jewellery all together weighing 25 Kgs, she herself was not sure was it the the weight or anxiety giving her trouble.How her heart was pumping at erratic beats and palms sweaty out of anxiety.Geet was really anxious as she was geeting married to the man she loved.she was waiting for this day since she was 18 and now it was happening after 6 long years.
There was hungama going on around she could see everyone was running around doing there bit.It was geet's wedding the youngest and most beloved of the family,the house was buzzing with activities all were waiting for the barat and geet thinking this was her last day at her parents house was sad,but at the same time she was excited to be his wife the man she loved.
She remembered how they became friends and that friendship turned into love,she was so scared when he suggested they talk to their parents about their relationship.The Khurana's and Handa's were family friends and she was scared if they told them about their love it would affect the families.She laughed off at her insecurities,she was more shocked then surprised when the families were deligthed with this particular news and in no time the wedding was being planned.
As she was lost in her own world remembering those moments of life with him she heard some noise outside,as she peeped out she was him standing there with with his hands folded and his eye downcast.He brother was standing infront of him and he did not seem pleased,everyone was present there his family her family and him but the atmosphere was heavy and tense.
She walked down as slowly as possible her heart was not at peace she was fearing the worst and she did not knew why seeing his head downcast hurt her deep down."Kya geet" you are just being unreasonable and thinking negative she said to herself as she walked down the stairs.
"Mein yeh shaddi nahin kar sakta,"I am sorry
She stood there as she heard those words coming from him, he was saying this on their wedding day she was left numbed.She wanted to ask tell him he should quit joking around as this was no joke.At first she thought he was playing pranks on her but when she saw him eye she knew it was no joke and her heart sank with that leaving her empty soul.He stood there infront of her with his face downcast,he was guity and that was visible from his eye,eventhough they did not met hers.She knew him this much infact she only knew him all these years her world revolves around him.
He repeated his words which were barely audible,She heard people gasp in shock but that did not matter all that matter was him and seeing him this dejected was not what she want.People were talking no they were gosipping and feeling bad for the girl who was rejected on her wedding day."Bechari" she saw some women commented it stings but more then that seeing his dejected was piercing her heart.
He was being dragged out by her brother and their families were just standing there without any emotions,she wanted to stop her veerji but she was was not sure if she had any right over him now.Slowly eveyone left the place feeling bad for her and cursing the man who left her on her wedding day but she was not worried about that she was worried about him.
His mom walked up to her as she surrender to her emotions and falls down crying her heart out,not in her worst of nighhtmares she has thought of this him walking out on her and their relationship."Geet" she hugged her and said she was sorry,she did not remember who took her to her bedroom and she lay there thinking about the way things too U-turn.
She saw her parents sad and dejected and so were his, she thought she was the reason behind this."Humay maaf kardo" his parents were folding their hands infront of her's and she did not find that a pretty site.His parents were were like her own she has grown up with them and respected them like her parents."He is no more our son" i am disowning him his father said and she saw them in tears.
She had to talk to him and now,as much as she need her answers she cannot see this happening to hin and his parents,she knows how much his parents and his family means to him especially him mom.She picked up her phone and dailed his number she has to set this right and no time to morn.
He picked his phone after some rings and she did not knew how to talk to him,as she has lost that right over him."Maan" mein I...I actually want to talk to you it is important,he was shocked that she called but he did not want to give her any hopes so he said what was the safest."Look Geet' what ever I said was true and I don't want to discuss that anymore there is no way we can go back.
"Maan" it is not about us but we have to talk please, she said sincerely and that was when he could not refuse and they decided to meet at cafe.It was not easy task to walk out of her home but she had too.She reached here and saw him sitting with someone at his side,walking up to them she stood there."I am sorry late hogaye".
Their eye met and it was the first time when he refused her and walked out of her life saying he cannot marry her.There was guilt and pain and she could very much see it,she saw a women sitting next to him.As her questioning eye went to the women he got the hint,"Sameera" my wife and her whole world came crashing down.
She was dead her heart was just breathing but her soul went missing at that instant,she wanted to cry shout at him for ditching her like this but then she saw his eye and she promised she saw tears.She put up brave face she has always been practical more then him it was him who was driven by emotions."Hi sameera" mein geet she forwarded her hand as the women greeted one another maan he walked out as if not being able to take.
P.S - Next update tomorrow and PM's with that 😳
Edited by ansah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AHH that was a small update...!!
if they love each other then why is maan refusing to marry her..??
something's amiss here...!!
plz update soon...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome strt..❤️

Add me in ur pm list..

cntnue soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bansipatel I am still doing the update...😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow so maaneet mariage gor stopped ... do update soon ..

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