MG-OS-The 'Beautiful' Change In Her

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: 9staroneserials
superb...always wid sumthing 2 learn...😳😳😳thanks😳😳😳

thnx dear..!!!😃

and i hope u are not bored with my more morals , philosphical and less maaneet stories😆😆

Edited by worldofdreams - 13 years ago

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Monali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awesome OS but it's piercing my heart to see maaneet not together
but it was awesome n thnks4 pm

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Beautifully written. U described well about the situations the changes people the changes u showed in geet & maan were good

Simple OS with lot of expressions. Excitement, happy, sad, beautiful, proud all the emotions showed well in the story.

Though Maan & Geet are not together…. I loved it too;;;;;

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soumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

very nice part...

thnx for the pm...

update the nxt part soon...

~~soumi~~

Edited by soumimaaneetsou - 13 years ago

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Thnx dear but that's the last part

Originally posted by: soumimaaneetsou
very nice part...

thnx for the pm...

update the nxt part soon...

~~soumi~~

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awsome os,change in geet is beautiful.

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

lovely...

loved the changed geet...

maaneet not together...ouch...that hurts...but it seems u dont like them together...😆...always separate...😆

change is inevitable...n it is true...

thnx for PM...

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todayzstar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesomeee...

luvd it..❤️

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely...

loved the changed geet...

maaneet not together...ouch...that hurts...but it seems u dont like them together...😆...always separate...😆

change is inevitable...n it is true...

thnx for PM...

OMG...!!!

itna bada ilzaam...plzzz spare dis poor bacchi..!!!😆😆

it's jst that i'm vry bad at romance and i don't want to destroy maaneet's essence with my bad bad writing..!!!😛😛

and another thng is that they are many many one shots with maaneet together ,so i jst tried something that's a bit diffrnt...!!!😳

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

superb ... awesome ... beautiful ... lovely ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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