MG-OS-The 'Beautiful' Change In Her

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PART 1

It's a bright sunny day , he packed all his clothes in one bag , he's dressed neatly in a white cotton shirt and blue jeans , he carried his addidas bag whch contained all his neccesary items for his journey.
He settled in the flight and stared out of the window the window..!!!
After his flight journey was over, He caught a train to jahanpur
He is Maan a young and a successful engineer , He works for a topmost construction company "rising constructions" and this time went to that town to handle a project in that town, he is the incharge of the project.
one day while inspecting the site , he saw a poor boy with tattered clothes crying in pain , he was badly hurt , he was bleeding very badly. he was about to faint, Maan saw him took him into his arms and rushed to the hospital. He was tensed and worried about that boy , he saw a female doctor running inside the ward to treat the boy
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After some time rhe doctor came out .She was dressed in a plain cotton blue salwar kameez and her soft and silky black hair were tied into a ponytail , She smiled at him,he felt releived at that instant

"he is perfectly all right now and thank god u brought him to the hospital at the right tym ...otherwise he would hv lost a lot of blood"

he smiled at her weakly and thanked her..."

may be he recognised her , but how can she be geet???
"may be 'm wrong she is not geet,but she looks like her"

the doctor walked forward she stopped and turned back she raised her eye brows...saw him in pleasent manner
"omg ... u are maan, right???

now his doubt was cleared , she is geet , he was shocked to see her highschool high profiile girlfriend working in a small town among all these ppl . he knew that she hated small towns , congested places. she always preferred sophisticated places. He kept looking at her , she waved her hands ...hello maan!!!
he snapped out of all his thoughts , he smiled and shook hands with her, "it's been a long tym, i really didn't expect you ...!!!"

she smiled again ..."ya ...it's actually been a long tym...and i work here i'm a doctor here. and how come u are here????"
he told her about his job..!!!

She was sooo excited to meet him, he could see her excitement in her eyes, he was excited tooo, but more than excited he was shocked to see her...!!

" i really want to talk to you abt many things . so how about a coffee tomorrow , only if you are free, if you are busy , it's perfectly all right..."

"no ...we can surely meet over a cup of coffee tommorrow...at coffee day

she rasied her eyes ...oops ...but ther's no coffe day here ...so probably it'll be a bit difficult to go to another city to drink cofee...!!!

"oh i'm sorry...actually i'm new here and..

"it's ok...we can meet at coffee point, it 's pretty good..!!!

"ok ,den meet u tomorow ,bye.!!!
he nodded and went back ...there were a lot of emotions stirring in both of them , shock , excitement , curiosity , happiness!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2
He Kept thinking about her ...he still remembered those days geet was the hottest girl of the school , stylish , beautiful , arrogant and talented...she was the kind of girl who always cared about her looks, hairstyle , nails ...and all those other things he felt were a waste of time ,he maan was the heartthrob . He was intelligent handsome and stylish.
They both were in a relationship well it wasn't a relationship , but they actually enjoyed the attention they both caught whenever they wre together ..so they continued it ...however later maan felt her annoyin' , he always felt that she only cared about her outer personality and and nothing else ...!!!
and now wen y'tday he saw her , the way she was dressed in very simple clothes , the way she was looking after her patients , the way she talked , the way she smiled were totally different...!!! so simple and amazing !!!
the next day he went to the coffee point , it was pretty good , but not at all upto the standards of the old geet handa.
she was already present there , he thought about those old days , whre she loved to be late...!!!
he saw her went near her and made himself comfortable on the chair...!!!
geet: oh hi..
maan:hope you were not waitin' for a long time
geet : no not at all

geet: it's actually been a long tym , never thought that i would meet you in this way
maan : ya...me too never thought
geet : so let's order a coffee
and even now she was dressed in a simple salwar kameez...unlike the way she used to in her high school days, whre she used to plan her outfits before one week thinking all dese thngs he smiled
maan : "you have changed a lot"
hearing this her intensity o the smile lowered a bit
geet : i'm sorry maan...i behaved very rudely with u in the past...!!!

maan : no not at alll...it's ok, even i was arrogant at that time
he felt a bit awkward, so he changed the topic , soo how are your mom-dad

geet : ohh...they are fine

maan: so how come you are here"???

geet : actually..while i was studying medicine, i used a visit a lot of places, and then i realised the hardships of these ppl , initially i hated this place , but the ppl , the situations changed me , on one side we have everything with us and the other side ppl die for one meal...!!!!
the situations made me feel guilty , and that made me stay here , and frankly speaking , now i love this place and i love this job , pleasure of serving ppl is jst wonderful..!!

he kept listening to her, her maturity is now on another level , he still remebered the way she used to crib on small things and now any luxury any beauty does not even bother her , she is so happy serving people..!!!
he had no words for her"
that's actually grt...u r doing a vry commendable job"
so don't you have any duty today??
geet: actually today i hv to go to an orphanage for medical check up of the children"
ohhh...orphanage , if u don't mind can i join u????
yaa...sure!!
in orphanage he saw the way she played with all the other kids , the love all the kids gave her , kissed her and hugged her ...she is an angel for all those kids...but his ex-gf hated kids , she felt there were a disturbance, and now she is playin' with them, taking care of them and she is enjoying their company...!!!!!
he kept watching her the whole time , the rappo she shared with the kids was worth watching...she enjoyed every moment , he smiled along with her ...!!!!
and the next few das wenever dey both were free , she showed him various places in the town.
he enjoyed her company a lot unlike the way he used to get irritated with her...now he himself wanted to spend time with her, everyone in the school used to be jealous of her , and she created that and loved that , and now everyone loved her and she earned it ...her smile has a selflessness ,a kindness , a beautiful closeness...!!
The sunset view

And one evening they both were sitting and enjoyin the view of the sunset...
he kept watching it her , he was lost in her beauty , her charm, she is so simple yet very beautiful..!!!
simply beautiful...!!!
until one word distracted him completely "my fiance" he was hell shocked Silence conquered that moment
"ur fiance" r u engaged???
those words were pricking him ...he didn't wanted to hear that she was engaged...!!!!
his eyes pleaded for a no.he felt like sudden darkness ocupied the beautiful light in his life

geet : yeah he is my colleague he studied in USA but he too settled here serving the people , he is a very simple person. presently he is out of town
wat's his name ??? he asked very unwantingly
"Naveen"

He suddenly became silent...!!!
Hey geet...!!! called someone from her back
she was so delighted to hear his voice
Naveen??? OMG u r back
...she hugged him in excitement , she was so happy like a small baby
geet : i'm glad you are back i missed you so much and naveen this is maan my school mate , my friend , she smiled
maan saw a strange glow in her eyes whle talking to naveen

naveen : "it's gettin' dark , let's go to my house and talk"
maan : nno nooo it's ok.."
i'll go by myself
are u sure??
yaa he said
"u know what maan , u became quite calm"
naveen: ohhh...shayad tumne hi ise kuch bolne nahi diya hoga
geet :accha ji , par mai to aapse bhi baat krti hu par tum to kabhi chup nahi rehte , tum bhi bahut bolte ho...!!!
maan smiled to himself and thought "calm , how could i even talk when u were revolving in my thoughts the whole time , may be ur charm , the beautiful change in you made me spell bound..!!!!
he smiled again..with a lot of pain in his heart
Both naveen and geet walked away...,she messed his hair may be naveen hated it he ran behind her , she ran he ran and then he hugged her from the back and kissed on her cheeck...!!!
maan jst stood there just to see the actual change in her , some where in the corner of his heart that closeness was pricking him , but at the end of the day change is the only constant thing in life , she no more belonged to him , because she is a changed person ...but still he loved the "Beautiful Change in her"
no she no more cared about her beauty , her outer personality but now she is more beautiful than ever , very admirable from her deeds ...!!!
He now Loved her "Beauty" , her purity ...!!!
He smiled and walked away...

Edited by worldofdreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u always manage to write something beautiful that occupies a place in my mind to ponder..
i mean this was simply beautiful..
ofcourse no maneet together...that does pinch...but then this was so fabulous that i cudnt help but smile...although wistfully , wishing that naveen was maan😆..
but a fabulous attempt by u...
BTW when are we getting MAAN's POV on ur earlier OS...hope we get it
love u
reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

u always manage to write something beautiful that occupies a place in my mind to ponder..
i mean this was simply beautiful..
ofcourse no maneet together...that does pinch...but then this was so fabulous that i cudnt help but smile...although wistfully , wishing that naveen was maan😆..
but a fabulous attempt by u...
BTW when are we getting MAAN's POV on ur earlier OS...hope we get it
love u
reva

ohhh...thnx a lot for ur comment...!!!
yeah no maaneet in this one again 😆
today is a holiday and i was hell bored so i just penned down my random and weird thoughts.!!!
well i'll defo continue that one... whenever i'll get some beautiful scene i my mind , probably on another holiday...!!
and once again thnx a lot for ur comment😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome OS but it's piercing my heart to see maaneet not together even both being alive i hope i didnt read it then it would have been better for my heart but coming to the story it is awesome hoped naaveen would have been maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats really a beautiful update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome OS but it's piercing my heart to see maaneet not together even both being alive i hope i didnt read it then it would have been better for my heart but coming to the story it is awesome hoped naaveen would have been maan

thnxx a lot for your response dear😃😃
and i'm sry...dat in dis os, maaneet are not together , but i'll defo plan a maaneet angle in my next OS 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maaneet nahi mile
Aisa kyun
But loved Geet's change
She changed a lot or say life thought her a lot
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb...always wid sumthing 2 learn...😳😳😳thanks😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved it yaar ...but no maneet here,,

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