New ff hum aapke dil mein rehte hai part 1 pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1:-

In plane:-
Mk:" don't worry sameera I will talk to dadima about us okay"
S:" I know maan but when?" said with baby face
Mk:" today"
S:" seriously" she said happily
Mk:" hmm"
S:" thank you maan" she hugged him and smiled evilly and thought
S:" wow sameera you are great now I will marry him and take his property and then I will go back to Karan " she thought and smiled evilly

The plane landed on delhi airport and maan went to his home and sameera to hers.
Dadima was waiting for him she was very happy to see him back after 2 years
The one servant came and said
Servant:" dadima bhare Saab aagaye hai"
Da:" theek hai" she said happily
Maan went in
Mk:" dadima" he said happily
Da:" Maan bete"
Both hugged each other and dadima kissed his forehead, just then one beautiful young girl came and said
Person:" dadima Sab tayariyan hogayi hai" she said with smile and didn't noticed maan
She looked at maan, maan also looked at her, he thought how beautiful she is
She was wearing pink chudidar with hair open and beautiful smile on her face
Da:" are geet beta idhir aayiye" she said happily
Geet went to her
Da:" bete yeh hai maan, humare pote"
Both looked at each other and Geet smiled at him
Da:" aur Maan bete yeh hai geet, humari buhat pyari se beti aur uske saath saath humare office mein secretary bhi, aapko pata hai when you were not here, geet humesha Hume
company diya karti thi buhat hi pyari hai geet"
Maan smiled at her and said both were staring at
each other finally Maan said
Mk:" hello geet"
G:" hello sir"
Da:" batiye bete"
G:" dadima
mein aapki medicine lekar aati hu"
Dadima smiled and Maan was looking at her amazingly
Da:" okay beta"
She left from there
Mk:" so dadima how are you"
Dadima put her hand on his cheek and said
Da:" I am very very okay maan bete, geet ne mera buhat kayaal rakha hai, she is really good and sweet girl, isne ek secretary ke saath saath beti ka haq bhi aada kiya hai"
Maan didn't understand why she is giving her so much freedom
Mk:" dadima can I say something plz don't mind she is our secretary so why you are giving her so much freedom, and at this time she should be in office don't you think, she is our employee, just employee"
Da:" what are you saying maan, I know she is our secretary, just a employee you know one year ago I had a accident but this girl she saved me, ussne apni jaan ko khatre mein daal ke meri jaan bachaiye, tab geet humare office main Kaam nahin karti thi woh uske baad aayi thi, she is really good by heart and Maan never say that again that she is just a employee, yes she is employee but just for you not for me,, for me she is just my daughter okay"
Maan was shocked after listening this
And geet was standing there listening everything, she had tears in her eyes after listening maan
Geet quickly wipes her tears and went to them
G:" dadima your medicines" she said with smile
Maan looked at her, he was just staring at her, he looked at her deep eyes, her beautiful lips when she speaks
Sadi
Da:" bataiye bete"
G:" ahh dadima mujhe aab chalna chahiye"
Dadima thought what happened to her
Da:" why so early what happened"
G:" actually dadima aaj meri choti behan ko larke wale dekhne aane wale hai tau isliye bhari behen hone ke naate mujhe waha hona chahiye na" she smiled
Da:" oh you mean muskan"
G:" jee"
Da:" theek hai beta you can go aur haa apne ghar walon ko humari taraf se buhat buhat Mubarak baad dijiye ga"
G:" sure dadima"
She looked at maan and maan was just staring at her completely lost in her
She left from there and dadima looked at him, he was looking at the direction which geet was going
Dadima smiled and said
Da:" Maan"
Mk:" ji dadima"
Da:" where are you lost"
Mk:" no nothing"
Da:" poor geet, her sister has brain tumor, they are really poor and geet, everytime she try her best and do work her hard, she is the only girl in her house who is doing job, her brother is also looking for job, I don't know how she manages all this, she is very brave girl"
Mk:" brain tumor"
Da:" hmm"
Maan was thinking about geet and dadima
Da:" you are looking tired, go and take some rest, we will talk in evening okay"
Mk:" okay"
He left from there to his room



Precap:" office scenes"


So guys here is part one, I hope you all like I know this part is very boring but this story is really good all will like it and plz plz do comments and press like thank you so much
Love u xxx
Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
nice concept and nice part please continue soon and can you pm me if you dont mind???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awesome start and awesome update⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
plz add me in ur pm list😊
Edited by thendral_111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
nice concept ...
add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
superb update..
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
plz add me to ur pm list😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Love the concept pls cont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
if my guess is right
this story is based on
ANIL KAPOOR AND KAJOL FILM right
dear
i got it
so looking now
how u head this up
send me th pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i guess there was a movie with Kajol as heroine and Anil Kapoor as hero... i don't remember the name of the movie, i guess the same as ur fiction but still AMAZING CONCEPT...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome..read just now..and kept on reading..plz maintain dialogues...😛..its fun to read that way..anyways..nyc..😊..!!

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