OS:Love Forever and Always..epi pg 12/13

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: shikahanda
lolz i just got to read this one. Do i need to tell i love it?
And ahem koi mujhe pakadne ki koshish kar raha hain kya?😆
PS; I've a presentation to give on 17th.
Will fulfil your wish after 17th😃

I WANT A LONGER COMMENT..chalo wiatig till 17th...

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Neha

@ISHQSalmanSe

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Ress😎

Shreyuuu!😳 Loved the first part I read...I am a little busy right now but I will be completing it and giving you some feedback😈😆

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Thnks neha..i will be waiting...😉 and take ur time i know the length gives u aheart attack..

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

i had read it long back but forgot to comment...sorry/...nice oS...very long and i love the geet in this very practical..and happy endings are always welcome

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

no compensations needed yaar!! tu bhi jaz ke saath happy endings ka race laga!!

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

...😛.

. 4 PM me...

😃

4 ur ..👏.

..ur updates..really dear...

......

tons of 4 u dear...

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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sonia khan

@sonia_koolkhan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

simply superb os. I luved it. v cute n romantic.

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Neha

@ISHQSalmanSe

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Updated!

That was beautiful shreya👏👏👏 The flashback and present switch was really good! The pain and passion were wonderfully described. I would have like more ahem ahem description🤔...yup me a perv soul now☺️🤣

The dialogues were awesome but I found the jealousy (Maan getting jealous of Geet dancing somewhat OTT) but then I can see how irrational Munda can be🤔

I loved their reunion😳 and if you write sad OS's mostly...I would encourage to write more happy OS's...😃

Edited by neha9999 - 14 years ago

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: neha9999
Updated!

That was beautiful shreya👏👏👏 The flashback and present switch was really good! The pain and passion were wonderfully described. I would have like more ahem ahem description🤔...yup me a perv soul now☺️🤣

The dialogues were awesome but I found the jealousy (Maan getting jealous of Geet dancing somewhat OTT) but then I can see how irrational Munda can be🤔

I loved their reunion😳 and if you write sad OS's mostly...I would encourage to write more happy OS's...😃

Oye perv soul control..i am a good baccha mujse is se zayada nahi likha jaata..sharm aati hai yaar..

and why cant Maan be jealous he was always that sadoo types..so i kept that..and my sad Os i am vampire of the GF so..😆