OS:Love Forever and Always..epi pg 12/13

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

ok...so i know it took me like forever...but im finally here!! 😃...i knew i was saving this for one of those days at work where im utterly bored with nothing to do...he he...today is that day! lol...lets get to it shall we 😛

pehle toh...the title reminds me of Nathan and Haley from the show One Tree Hill...their little tag line is "always and forever"...same thing!! ha ha...oh oh and...that was a long one...im not complaining..im praising!! 😃...

the motto for GSK is awesome...i lolved the part when she was saying that she was proud for loving him when people made fun or her...idiot log!! 😡...ok...that whole part where she compares him to her heartbeats, her breaths and all...fabulous...but when it said "woh meri bandage hai"...what do you mean by bandage...like...how you bandage an arm when you hurt it or something 😆...that was funny...but i loved when she said that puri duniya ke liyeh woh mere pati hai lekin mere liyeh meri duniya hai!! 👏...the first flashback was funny...typical male...thinking that money just fixed everything!! 😡...XXX as Geet's address!! 😆...ek address bhi nahin deh sakti...fake hi sahi!! 😆...but tauba...this Geet is besharam...aaise kaise ek ladke ke saath chali gayi!! 😲 naa jaan naa penchan...main tera mehman!! 🤣 of course since its maan...chalta hai...i'd do it too...

any way...bohot hogaya bak bak...loved the story...a lot of women face the same problem about choosing between a family and career...many end up choosing family...cuz GOd forbid they choose their careers...all hell breaks loose!! hmph!! of course...they dont all have MSK to kiss and make up with!! ha ah😉

JAZ

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Jaz that was not bandage...its banadgi..like madness, craziness..thts wht i mean..Gosh i burst out laughing when i read that comment of urs..hango how can he be is BANDAGE..Dr hai saabit kar diya tune aaj..sacchi..

and tht title reya suggested so might be she stole it from the show..u know i dont watch english shows..so..

and abt gng..see at that time she was scared so rationality flew out of the window..thst why..

and abt the story..i know many girls face this and not all have happy endings but had i made this story sad u know aashu and sana they would have klled me..so i stayed safe..hehe

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

lol..so was my eyes playing tricks on me or did you have a typo and put bandage instead of bandagi? lol..im too lazy to go back and chk...to you go ahead and check and let me know!! ha ha...and not only sana and ashu...but had you made this one said...i'd have killed you as well!!

JAZ

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: jnawaz
lol..so was my eyes playing tricks on me or did you have a typo and put bandage instead of bandagi? lol..im too lazy to go back and chk...to you go ahead and check and let me know!! ha ha...and not only sana and ashu...but had you made this one said...i'd have killed you as well!!
JAZ

Ok lazy goose..no it was a typo..par hindi english mein likhti hoon toh spelling do get werd...hehe and Wht i was in fill mood to kill maan and geet here..but sana aashu and reya didn let me.. so and hello u have more killings to ur acc then me..so seriously u cant kill me..😆

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: vinaben
awsome

thnku😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz
I JUST LOVED IT...loved evry bit of it...!!!
it was just awesome shreya...!!! outstanding..!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
i m speechless ..!! have lots to say but cant put it in words...!!
keep rocking...!!!⭐️

doll thnks a ton..gosh this req an Epilogue too..i shall post it soon..hope so..😆

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz

already dreaming...!!!😍
u can take ur tym and post it after ur exams...ALL D BEST...KEEP ROCKING...!!!
epilogue is awaited...!!

Thnks nidzz..it will not be this long pakka...i will go mad if its this long...😆

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Hey dear for the first time I read something from U n I thoroughly enjoyed it, otherwise till now I have just read your comments on jaz ff or os as u accusing her of sad endings n then others coming behind U as U are the same😆 well coming to the os it was just perfect real different I loved the way u showed the flashback after gaps how the relationship changed n became more strong and that rift which forced their drift was somewhere very much justified I really loved it even showing geet so practical I believe more over practical but still this is something couldn't reduce their Love for each other which is to be true is pure serene I loved every conversation between them especially the one in which she lands in the office see his different demeanor and then how he exclaimed his thoughts to her and everyone bow their head infront of him and here he bows his head down infront of her only her,the story was really catchy but only if the writer depict it beautifully if U don't then the beautiful story too turns into a ugly 1.So all the credit goes to U...
Loved it😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19
Hey dear for the first time I read something from U n I thoroughly enjoyed it, otherwise till now I have just read your comments on jaz ff or os as u accusing her of sad endings n then others coming behind U as U are the same😆 well coming to the os it was just perfect real different I loved the way u showed the flashback after gaps how the relationship changed n became more strong and that rift which forced their drift was somewhere very much justified I really loved it even showing geet so practical I believe more over practical but still this is something couldn't reduce their Love for each other which is to be true is pure serene I loved every conversation between them especially the one in which she lands in the office see his different demeanor and then how he exclaimed his thoughts to her and everyone bow their head infront of him and here he bows his head down infront of her only her,the story was really catchy but only if the writer depict it beautifully if U don't then the beautiful story too turns into a ugly 1.So all the credit goes to U...
Loved it😳

woha thnks muskaan...And abt jaz oh thst me and her competition..who kills more people..bas in this one i couldnt u see last time my OS too damn sad agar is baar kiya hota people would have banned me on IF..😉 and thnks for such a cute reply..about the changing phase of relationships thts the truth..and GEET is 21st century girl and thst wht i wanted..thst all..

Thnks for the credi..hope to see ya arnd more on my works..

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Thnks for the credi..hope to see ya arnd more on my works..

hey ummm sorry i dnt kno ur name😕 so cobber will do fine for now, i thnk for the time being till u tell ur name well ma name is nt muskan unfortunately bt wardah...nd competition abt killing people I can now understand very well people calling u vampire😆but unfortunately as I said this for the first time I read something written by U so I dont know the os u talking about, if U don't mind n pass me the link if U feel convenient so I shall read and then comment as I am happy now a days so can read something sad otherwise if i am sad and read it then mere ghar mein baadh ane se koi bhi nahi rok sakega😳 would love to read after this anything from U👏
Loved it completely infact flattered😉

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