OS: the drive: part 1 page 1

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Hello guys I'm back with another os

This time there will only be probably 1 or max 2 parts

It is to do with the current storyline

So before part 1

Maan has to go out of town by car for a project. He has to take Geet with him unfortunately. He is really pissed off. Dadima has asked Romeo to go with them as a driver. Romeo agrees and then we have Romeo and the car breaks down as he pulls into a garage and

So Maan stuck in a garage with Geet and Romeo

So how will this plan work?


Maan walked to his car in a huff. He was angry with the developments which had occurred since the party that night. He had fired Geet from KC only to have her return by his dadima. Not only that the client who this party and deal was arranged for wanted Geet to look after the project alongside Maan.
Maan stood outside waiting for Geet. Today was a bad beginning. Firstly, the client urgent meeting which was to be held out of town. Secondly, Geet has to travel with him. Thirdly his driver was ill. Luckily Dadima had arranged a new driver known by Romeo.

Meanwhile inside Romeo was with dadima and Geet. They were discussing a plan of what to do.
'ji dadima jaisa aap ne kaha aisa he hoga koi galati nahi' Romeo said. 'Geet ke liye kuch bhi. Dosti ki hai nibani paregi na' Romeo added hi fiving Geet who smiled. She assured dadima nothing will go wrong. Feet smiled at herself knowing today Maan will be with her all day. Little did Maan know what was in store for him.

Geet walked out with her bag which Romeo loaded into the boot. He winked at Geet and did a thumbs up.
'Finally Geet time milhigaya tumhe' Maan said in his arrogant voice. Geet smiled nervously. 'ab chalna nahi hai Jaldi se gari main beto' Maan ordered her.
Geet sat in the car rolling her eyes and mumbled Dusht Danav which Maan heard who gave her a silent stare.


Little did anyone know that a servant who was working for them was actually a spy. He walked into one room and called someone telling them about the movements about Maan and Geet. The servant smiled when the person on the other side told them the money will reach him.


Geet smiled as Romeo drove the car down the road. Maan was looking at his file whilst Geet looked at Maan and thought
Thoda mazaq to main Maan keh Saat to kar hi sakti ho na. Kabse muh polakar betey hue hai'
Geet reached for her hairpin and when Maan was not looking poked his arm with the pin. Maan jerked his arm in response and said 'ow' He then turned to look at Geet who was pretending to read a file. Maan narrowed his eyes at her. She felt his eyes on her and turned to look at him and there begun an eye lock. mahiii mahiii. A horn then took them out of the lock. Maan turned to face the window.
'kya hua Maan Sir' Geet asked innocently. 'kuch hua hai sir?'
'nahi much nahi' He plainly said. Romeo saw what Geet did. She looked into the rearview mirror and smirked and winked. Both tried to
conceal a snigger and were successful.
Geet then closed her eyes and prayed to babaji
'Babaji yeh safar Maine aur Maan ne bohot pehle shuru kiya hai. Aaj Maan ko woh safar yaad nahi hai liken please babaji aap jante hai na main Maan se kitna pyar karti ho please is safar main ek aisa chamatkar Kardo ke Maan ko mere pyar yaad ajaye' a tear fell out of Geet eyes. Maan looked at her as her eyes were closed. He heard her whisper babaji and realized she was praying. But why the tear and why was if affecting him?

The car then did a sudden brake which caused Geet to bash into Maan hard solid rock chest. She slowly looked up to his eyes and he look into her eyes. Someone was in her eyes he thought. Her eyes felt familiar like be bore into them million times before. Her eyes expressed so many emotions which he did not understand. Who was he kidding he didn't want to understand.

Romeo had managed to pull into a garage where Maan was going to have the worst experience of his life.
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<font size="3">'Hum itni jaldi poch gaye' thought Maan as he stepped out of the car. Geet stepped out of the other end and walked up to Maan and bashed into his back. Maan turned around and glared at her.</font>


<font size="3">'hume yaha milna ta?' asked Maan. Romeo started laughing as he walked round towards Maan. Geet covered her mouth trying to stifle a giggle.</font>


<font size="3">'yeh garage hai sir' Romeo said. </font>


<font size="3">'Garage hai yeh mujhe bi dik raha hai lekin hum yaha par kya kar rahe hai' asked Maan peeved off. Geet stood aside him. Romeo then turned to one of the guys and called him. Maan saw that Romeo ignored him</font>


<font size="3">'eh hello main tumse baat kar raha ho' He said agitated. Geet walked forward before Maan anger exceeded. She touched Maan arm who turned and glared at her. Geet gulped her fear and thought to herself she is not going to be afraid. </font>


<font size="3">'Sir yeh aap kya kar rahe hai. Tora shanti se baat kejiye na' Geet smiled innocently. Maan turned to say something to her when Romeo spoke.</font>


<font size="3">'Suna tik kehrahi hai meemsaab. Aur dekho sir main ap ka naukar nahi ho. Driver ho Driver' Romeo stated with confidence. Geet gave him a thumbs up from behind Maan. Maan glared at him but Romeo stood firm. He was feeling over confidence. Geet stifled another giggle and smiled that Romeo managed to give Maan a fitting reply. </font>


<font size="3">'Driver ho na phir gari chalao' Maan pointed a threatening finger at Romeo. Geet was worried if Maan would blow. Suprisngly nothing happened. </font>


<font size="3">'Nahi chala sakta' Romeo said putting his hand up in response.</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun' asked Maan getting visibly annoyed. </font>


<font size="3">'Dharam ki Dhanno mere matlab hai Romeo ki Dhanno ruk gayi hai' Romeo smiled.</font>


<font size="3">'Romeo ki Dhanno?' asked Maan confused. </font>


<font size="3">'Saab Romeo matlab main aur Dhanno matlab meri gari' Romeo declared in his style. 'Meri gari jo karrab hogayi hai. Aur sir yeh gari chai ke begair aage nahi jasakti' Romeo turned and leaned back on the car bonnet.</font>


<font size="3">'chai' Maan asked clearly annoyed putting his hand on his hips. 'Dhanno chai peti hai' </font>


<font size="3">'Chai main peeta ho Sir. Dhanno to petrol peyengi na' Romeo said smiling foolishy. </font>


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<font size="3">Geet started to laugh at Romeo. Maan turned to her and was about so scold her at laughing when he noticed her laugh. Her musical laughter was attracting him. The way her happiness shone in her eyes. He felt like this laughter was his entire life. Romeo noticed him staring at Geet. He thought 'shayad Sir ko kuch kuch yaad araha hai'</font>


<font size="3">'Sir' Romeo said peeking up to Maan.</font>


<font size="3">'Whats so funny? Bohot hasi aa rahi hai tumhe' Maan asked Geet putting his hands on his hips.</font>


<font size="3">'Normal insaan ko aisi cheezein peh haasi ati hai, waise aap normal to hai nahi to kya fiada' Geet stated back laughing again.</font>


<font size="3">'GEEET' Maan said in anger.</font>


<font size="3">'Sorry Sir' Geet said putting a finger on her lips. But she could not hold in her laughter and started laughing again. </font>


<font size="3">'GEET' This time Geet shut up. Maan smirked and turned around to face Romeo. </font>


<font size="3">'Pehle yeh chai choro aur pata karo ke yeh gari kyun karab hogai hai' Maan ordered Romeo.</font>


<font size="3">'Sir Gari aur biwi aisa hi hota hai kabhi bi karab ho sakti hai' Romeo said. Geet gave him daggers for the biwi line. </font>


<font size="3">'Mera matlab hai pati bi karab hosakta hai' Romeo stated as he knew Geet's anger. She smiled and gave him a thumbs up. </font>


<font size="3">'Aur mere dhanno poch kar karab nahi hue na. Agar pooch ti to main bata sakta ke Dhanno Rani tum abhi karab nah ho na. Sab ko chor do tab karab ho na' Romeo sarcastically stated. Geet covered her mouth again. Romeo's jokes and Maan getting annoyed was cracking her up.</font>


<font size="3">'Ek kaam karta hu main Dhanno se poch leta hu' Romeo said walking to his car. Maan gave the unbeliveble look 'Are you serious' He shook his head in disbelief as Romeo walked to the car</font>


<font size="3">'Dhanno tum' Maan annoyed walked to Romeo and said</font>


<font size="3">'Tum kitna ajeeb aadmi ho. Agar tumari Dhanno baat karti to main isi se poch leta. Kam se Kam yeh to seda jawab de ti' Maan said so irritated. </font>


<font size="3">'Nahi degi' Romeo said laughing.</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun?' asked Maan</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun ke yeh apni Dhanno hai na wo bolti nahi hai wo sirf chalti hai' Romeo stated. Geet was finding it so hard not to laugh. </font>


<font size="3">'Geet dekho kitna ajeeb insaan hai. Tik tara se jawab bi nahi deta' Maan walked to Geet complaining.</font>


<font size="3">'Arii sab ji.. main seeda bol ta hu aur seeda jawab deta ho. Ab sunne wala ulta sune aur samji is main meri kya galti hai' Romeo said resting his arms on the car bonnet. </font>


<font size="3">'Sir mazaq karni ki inti aadat hai. App bura mat mano' Geet said trying to calm him down.</font>


<font size="3">'Tumhe kaise pata' Maan asked.</font>


<font size="3">'woh main' Geet fumbled with words.</font>


<font size="3">'jo bi ho. Tum jaldi se gari tik karo' Maan said. He walked past her with his mobile trying to contact anyone. But he wasn't getting any response.</font>


<font size="3">'babaji aap ka bohot bohot shukar hai ke Maan ke saat main baat kar sakti ho. Aunke saat main shayad aunka yaadash lekar ajao' Geet thought in her head.</font>


<font size="3">'Main yahan in dono ke saat. Yeh driver to bilkul paagal hai. Aur Geet. Yeh ladki mujhe paagal kardegi. Kyun aisa lag raha main iski bina nahi reh sakta. Kyun iski baatein iski harqatein mujhe pareshan karti hai' Maan thought. He sat down on a bench and looked through his files. Half an hour had passed.</font>


<font size="3">Romeo was singing in his car relaxing when Maan came up to him and said</font>


<font size="3">'Oi yeh katara dhanno kab shuru hogi' Romeo got up and walked out of the car. Maan followed him and asked</font>


<font size="3">'tum kaha jarehi ho' </font>


<font size="3">'Police station report likwani' Romeo replied. Geet came running and said</font>


<font size="3">'Police station kyun?' </font>


<font size="3">'Kyun ke aap ke Maan sir ne mere dhanno ko katara kaha. Sir yeh dhanno sirf mere gari nahi hai. Mere jigar ka tokra hai. Mere aakhon ke roshni hai Mera pehla pyar hai madam' Romeo said towards Geet and looked at Maan who was so irritated.</font>


<font size="3">'Mere biwi jaise hai aur aapne isi katara kaha' Romeo said melodramatically with fake sadness. Geet smirked. 'Sir agar aapke samne agar kisi ne apke biwi ko katara kaha to aap ko kaise lage ga' Romeo said.</font>


<font size="3">'Ha sahi kehrahi Romeo ji. Agar koi mujhe katara kahega to Maan ko bura lagega hai na Maan.' Geet said. Romeo then popped his eyes out and nodded no to Geet. Maan looked at her and Geet looked at him. They both store into eachothers eyes. Maan felt something he could not explain. Would he really feel bad if someone said something against Geet. But why? MAHIII MAHIII moment. Romeo then pinched Geet who was looking into Maan's eyes. She came out of the trance and said</font>


<font size="3">Geet then realised what she said</font>


<font size="3">'mere matlab hai agar inki biwi ko' She clarified and breathed a sigh of relief. But Maan was still staring at her.</font>


<font size="3">'phool kile hai gulshan gulshan. Lage raho lage raho' Romeo said as walked away and Maan and Geet woke out of the trance. Geet smiled at him whlist Maan gave her a stare and walked away and grabbed his laptop out of his car. Geet walked up to him and then Maan looked up at her. She smiled and gave him coffee.</font>


<font size="3">'Aap kya kare ho' Geet asked innocently.</font>


<font size="3">'Kaam kara ho. dekhaye nahi deta. Disturb mat karo'</font>


<font size="3">'Sir aap coffeepeejiye na' She said. She walked towards him placing the cup down and almost tripped and was about to fall back when Maan held her in his arms. They store into eachothers eyes. Maan felt like Geet was meant to be there. He felt like she had been in this way in his arms before. He felt so many feelings of care. When Geet was about to fall he felt scared. He managed to grab her. He felt relief.</font>


<font size="3">'Tum jao yaha se' Maan said firmly as he brought her to her feet. Geet smiled at him as Maan picked up his laptop and walked away. Being close to her was too hard for him as she was envoking feelings in him. </font>


<font size="3">Maan was looking for Romeo when he put his laptop away.</font>


<font size="3">'Oi tumne gari tik nahi ki abhi tak'</font>


<font size="3">'Sir gari tik hai. Likin jaise Dhanno petrol ke bina nahi chalsakti waise Romeo petrol ke bina nahi chalsakta'</font>


<font size="3">'Tum petrol pete ho' Maan asked annoyed. Geet laughed. Maan turned to her and gave her a glare. Geet gave a innocent face.</font>


<font size="3">Romeo started laughing and said 'kya sir. Madam ji kya dekha aapne in meh. Kuch samaj teh nahi hai' Geet glared at him whlist Maan looked confused. 'Mere matlab hai in ki saat kam kar ke'</font>


<font size="3">'Aur sir mera matlab hai garam garam masala chai ah ahahah mu main pani agaya' Romeo said being dramatic. Geet smirked behind Maan. </font>


<font size="3">'Kya tum kabse time pass kare he ho. Gari tik karo'</font>


<font size="3">'Mujhe chai peni hai phir main kam karsakta ho' Romeo said.</font>


<font size="3">'Phir jao na. Chai pekar aao jaldi seh' Maan said impatiently. </font>


<font size="3">'Tik hai main chalta ho' Romeo said 'Chai ke dookan doondh na hai yaha se bohot door hai' </font>


<font size="3">'Tik hai main bi tumhara saat chalta ho' Maan said.</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun'</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun ke mujhe tum chaalo na main bhi ata ho'</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun Sir'</font>


<font size="3">'Samaj ne ke koshish karo mujhe bathroom jana hai' Maan said.</font>


<font size="3">'Oh to woh raha bathroom' Romeo said pointing to a door where a man just came out. 'tik hai'</font>


<font size="3">'waha par'</font>


<font size="3">'ha aap ek kaam karo aap andar jao kaam karo aur finish karo' Romeo said walking with Maan towards the toilet.</font>


<font size="3">Maan opened the door and said 'OMG yeh kitna ganda hai main yaha nahi jasakta' </font>


<font size="3">'Main ek kaam karta hu. Main mineral water lekar ata ho aur saaf karta ho' Romeo said sarcastically. </font>


<font size="3">Geet laughed. 'Sir yeh bathroom hai . Its for making it dirty'</font>


<font size="3">Maan gave her a glare. He was dying for the toilet. ' main nahi jasakta'</font>


<font size="3">'agar karna hai to karo warna goot goot ke maro'</font>


<font size="3">Maan opened the door and was shocked. There was no lock.</font>


<font size="3">'Madam yeh kis saro se shaadi ke aapne.' Romeo said to Geet. 'Sir superhit gane bathroom main ata hai. Aap gana gao</font>


<font size="3">' yeh mere patni nahi hai aur main aandar saas nahi lehsakta aur tum kehrahi ho gana gao'</font>


<font size="3">'Saabji yeh apka problem hai aur meh jaraha ho' Romeo walked off. Geet walked to Maan and said </font>


<font size="3">'aap kya karane waleh ho'</font>


<font size="3">'woh Geet kya tum yaha kari reh sakti ho'</font>


<font size="3">'Kyun Sir' asked Geet innocently.</font>


<font size="3">'wo mujhe jaana hai' </font>


<font size="3">'Sir main yaha rukti ho aap jaaye' She innocently said. Maan knew he could trust her. 'aap jaaye main aapke raksha karo gi'</font>


<font size="3">'Tum meri raksha karogi'</font>


<font size="3">'Geet tum yaha kari raho main gana nahi ga sakta' Maan said arrogatnly</font>


<font size="3">'Tik hai aap thoda aache se boliye' Geet said pretending to walk away </font>


<font size="3">'Geet tum yaha darwaze ke paas kari raho na'</font>


<font size="3">'Please boliye' Geet said turning away from Maan and smirking and giggling.</font>


<font size="3">Maan got a bit angry. He gritted his teeth and said 'Please' having no other options. Geet turned around and said </font>


<font size="3">'jaaye' She smiled as he walked in. She tried not to giggle as he walked in and she stood there. </font>


<font size="3">'Whats funny? Tum kyun hasrahi ho' Maan said as he walked out. 'kyun khush ho tum?'</font>


<font size="3">'Woh main isliye khush ho kyun ke hum dono saat hai' Maan stared at her wondering why she said that.</font>


<font size="3">'phir is main khush hone wali kausi baat hai' He said in his normal tone.</font>


<font size="3">'main aapko ek baat pocho'</font>


<font size="3">'jaise tum nahi poch ne nahi wali' Maan said</font>


<font size="3">'Agar aap ko itni zor se jana ta phir aap itni jaldi bahar kaise agayee' Geet asked smiling.</font>


<font size="3">'wo urm ha. Agar main jaldi nahi karta to tum kahi bag jati. Tum par barosa bilkul nahi hai' Maan said walking away.</font>


<font size="3">'Main to app ko chor kar kabhie nahi jasakti MAan' Geet said with emotion. Maan then looked at her and both store into eachothers eyes. Geet's words had a profound effect on Maan.</font>


<font size="3">PRECAP: Hotel Room</font>


<font size="3">'Honeymoon suite? Yeh room kisne book karaya?' asked Maan.</font>


<font size="3">'Sir apke Dadima ne'</font>


<font size="3">'Doosra kamra nahi hai?' </font>


<font size="3">'Nahi sir'</font>


<font size="3">Two set of eyes were spying on Maneet and the reception desk.</font>


<font size="3">'Aaj raat hame yeh karna hi hoga' The person said.</font>


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Part 2.

Maan did not understand why his heart fluttered at that comment. Geet flashbacked to the moment when Maan had told her never to leave him which Geet had promised that she never would. He raised his hand to touch her cheek. Geet closed her eyes. The feel of her skin felt familiar to him like his hand knew it. The nerves in his skin jingled with excitement. Maan then realised what he was doing and stepped back. Geet opened her eyes when she felt his warm arm move away. She opened her eyes to see him walk away.

Geet kuch soch warna Maan phir naraz hojaye ga!

Geet walked behind him and walking fast when she tripped over a metal rod and twisted her leg. Or so she had pretended to.

'Aaah mere pair' Geet cried out in pain. She winked at Romeo. He sniggered. Maan turned to look at her. All the other men turned to look at her as well. Maan rolled his eyes.

'App ki waja se main gir gaye. Kitni chot lagi hai'

Maan mat jana aus ke pas bohot bari musibat hai. Tum har bar auski waja se musibat mai parjate ho.

'madam ji main apka maadat kardo' A mechanic came up to her. Geet widened her eyes. Maan felt jealousy whlist Geet wished for Maan to come. Maan felt possessive and decided to help her.

'Nahi main ho na' He said running to her and picking her up. Maan and Geet stared at each other as Maan walked with her to the car. He put her down in the car. His heart was feeling at ease having her his arms and he did not want to let go.

'Your welcome' Maan said smirking at her resting his arms outside on the car window ledge which was opened.

'Lekin maine to app ko Sorry kaha hi nahi' Geet said.

'Obviosuly tum main manners to hai nahi' Maan said turning around. Maan then turned around. Geet decided to get out of the car.

BIG MISTAKE.. Because Maan did not leave but instead as Geet opened the car door, the door hit Maan nose.

'Ahh' Maan said in pain covering his noise. Geet eyes widended in shock.

'I'm so sorry, mujhe laga ke aap jarahe ho' Geet said jumping out. Maan kept walking around in pain. Geet kept walking after him. She grabbed her duppata blowed air on it and then rubbed Maan nose with the duppata.

'Tumhara pair kaise tik hua' Maan asked as he noticed her.

'ausi choriye, chot aap ko lagi hai na, mujhe karni dejiye na' As Maan moved away.

'Koi zarrorat nahi hai. Jitna main tumse door rahoga, utna hi tik rahoga Miss Musibbat'

'App ko mere zarrorat hai. Jaise hi aap mujse door hote hai app ko kuch na kuch hojata hai'

Geet put her duppata on Maan nose again when Maan said 'arg' Geet jumped back in fear. Maan then saw her and both then realised he tried to scare her and both started laughing.

Romeo then came and told them they are ready to go to the hotel.

They arrived at the hotel when the receptionist told them they only had one room. Geet silently thanked babaji and also texted Dadima thanks.

'Tik hai' Maan grunted as he told Geet.

'KYA, main aur app ek kamre main' Geet said melodramatically.

'Itna drama karne ki zarrorat nahi hai ab chalo' Maan said annoyed. His meeting had been postponed as he was late arriving.

'Aapki meeting mere waja se nahi tala na. To phir aap mujse kyun naraaz hai' Geet said trailing behind Maan.

Maan annoyed replied back 'jo kuch bi horaha hai tumhara waja se hua hai. Agar main akela jata to ab tak meeting katam karne main ghar jara ha hota. Lekin nahi Main jab bi tumhara saat hota ho kuch na kuch garbar honi hi hai tum Miss Musibat nahi. Miss Garbar hone chahiye.'

'Kyun lekar aayi aap mujhe? Nahi lana chahiye ta. Aap ko meri zarorat ti isliye main ayi ho.'

'Nahi.' Maan said stopping looking at her and crossing his arms. 'Mujhe tumhara zarorat nahi ti. Tumhe jana hai tum beshaq jao. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai allright'

'To aap ko meri zarrorat nahi hai. Main chali jaoongi' Geet said sulking.

'To jao please jao. Atleast tori to shanti to hogi. Jabse tumhara saat ho koi na koi problem horarhi hai. Pehle project ki problem phir party, phir gari phir meeting ab hotel ka room' Maan said walking away from Geet.

Geet then walked away to the other end of the corridor. She was thinking to herself let MAan know im not behind him. 'Khud dhoodh ne aaja yenge'

Maan walked forward confused as he did not hear Geet argue back with him. 'ab kabse bak bak kar rahi ti ab silent kyun ho tum' Maan turned around and realised Geet was not there. 'Geet Geet' He looked left right forth and back and ran looking for her. He walked into a restaurant and said Geet.

'Miljaye gi' Maan turned to see a tarot card lady. 'Woh ladki ne aaj tak tumhara picha nahi chora nahi tumne. Tum ausi har bar bachete ho musibat se. Aus ladki ne tumhari zindagi main ujala bardiya hai. Khushi di hai. Tum auski bina adori ho. Yeh taweez tumne pehna hua hai har pal tumhe aus Ladki jo tumhe Dusht Danav bolate hai se jor kar rakege'

'Excuse me aap' Maan said sitting down. The lady picked out a few tarot cards.

'hmm is card ka matlab hai ke tum akroo aur sanki ho'

'Sanki, galti to auski ti. Aur waise aap ko kaise pata main ek ladki ko doodh raha hu' Maan asked he never believed in these things.

The lady smiled. And picked out another card.

'Geet aur Maan ka naam ek saas main liya jata hai. Bohot logo ne in dono naam ko batna chaha lekin na kamyab hue.'

'App ka matlab kya hai'' Maan asked confused.

'wo waha dekho aus bag main' Maan looked as she pointed to Geet's bag.

'Aus bag main ek kitaab hai' Maan didn't want to look in Geet's bag but he opened the bag and took the book out. He opened the book and out popped a picture. It was a picture of Maan and Geet Sangeet night. Maan was shocked. He turned the picture around and saw a phrase.

'Maan mujhe bhool gaya hai. Lekin main to nahi. Main Maan ko apne pyar se sab kuch waapas yaad delakar rahogi aur agar nahi karpayi to iska matlab yeh hoga ke mera pyar main wo taaqat nahi hai'

Maan looked at the lady shocked and at the picture.

'Ha Mr Maan Singh Khurana. Ab tum mujhe batao ke kya tumhara dil Geet ko deek kar kuch ajeeb mehsoos hua ta?' Maan realised that the lady was right. All the time he felt that Geet was known to him. His heart knew. But his brain had stopped.

She picked up another card.

'Maan kuch galat hone wala hai. Tumhe Geet ko dhoodh na chahiye' The lady said. Maan was shocked as whatever the lady said was right. So was Geet in trouble.

'Sir Sir' Romeo ran in. 'Wo Geet, Naintara Dev'

'Kya bolo Romeo' Maan said getting up agitated.

'Geet ke zindagi khatre main hai. Woh Dev aur Naintara'

'Naintara, '

'Dev's wife, she tried to kill Geet 3 times before' Maan was shocked. Romeo and Maan realised this was not the time for Q and A and ran to the outside lawn.

FLASHBACK

3 hours ago.. at Khurana Mansion.

Adi and Pinky were on there way to see Dadima when they noticed one of the servants walking towards a lady. The lady by her posture looked familiar. Adi told Pinky to stay put. He walked towards the bushes hiding himself and heard the whole conversation and was shocked.

He tried to ring Maan and Geet but could not get through. He then ran to Khurana Mansion and found Dev.

' Dev Sir, Maan Sir aur Geet'

'Kya hua Adi bolo' Dev said getting worried.

'Geet ki jaan khatre main hai woh Naintara'

'ha mujhe pata hai. Naintara ab bilkul tik hai aur woh Hospital se bahar nikal gaye hai haina' Dev smirked. Naintara walked in from another room. Adi was shocked.

'Matlab Amritsar main jo bi hua'

'Adi, beto zara tum please' Dev gestured to two servants to push Adi down. Nandini and Lucky and Dadima were out of town. Pinky was still in the car.

'Ha sab kuch natak ta. Main apni galti ke liye bohot pashtaya ta. Maine Naintara ko divorce bi diya ta. Liken main aisa nahi karpaya. Isliye maine socha ke main sab ki nazro main ek aacha insaan sabhit hojao. Especially Geet aur Maan ke aakhon ke samne aur aisa hi hua. Aur maine Amritsar main sab ka vishwas yaha tak Nandini se pyar karni jhoota khel bi khela'

'Liken Sir yeh aap ne kyun kiya? Maan Sir Dadima aap par kitna vishwas karti hai. Aur agar aap Geet ko marna hi chahte ho phir aap ne Geet ko Pammi Ji se bachaya kyun?'

'Kyun ki mere maa Kamya ko zyada pyar karti ti. Yeh property sab kuch woh apne aur Kamya aur Kamya ke dad ke naam chahti ti. Geet ko bacha kar maine bohot acha kiye' Dev smirked.

'Aur Maan veerji ke yaadash kogaye. Geet ko bhool gaye. Ab Geet ka tata phush. Kyun ke agar Maan Geet ko yaad nahi karengi to Geet ka zindagi ka kya matlab' Naintara said.

'Aur Adi tum, kitna Maan ka khayal rakte ho. itna ache ho tum' Dev said.

'Agar Geet ko kuch hua to''

'To Maan ko kuch nahi hoga. Maan aur Geet ke waja se mujhe aur Naintara ko kitna kuch sehna para. Police, aur legal issues aur phir hum dono ko alag hona para. Geet ke waja se hum dono ko kitna media display hua ta. Aur Maan ke waja se Arjun Naintara ka bhai aus se door hogaya. Ha maine hi Arjun ko sach bataya kyun ke Annie aus se pyar karti ti aur main nahin dekh sakta mere pyare behen Maan ke waja se sad ho'

'Aur iske Baad hum Maan Veerji ko aisa dawai denge ke woh paagal hojaye ge.' Naintara smirked.

'Main aisa nahi hone doon ga' Adi said getting up. He punched Dev and pushed Naintara. He got up even though he was outnumbered because he had seen Lucky and Tej who had come with Pammi (HIS Wife) as she wanted to meet Geet and Pinky at the door with Nandini and dadima who was shocked. . Tej and Lucky beat up Dev and the other servants who were the baddies (not the real servants of the house) Pinky Nandini and Pammi consoled Dadima. however Naintara had escaped as she noticed the door was empty which was noticed by no one.

After the commotion was over, the police came and arrested Dev.

'Naintara kaha hai' asked Adi. Adi realised she had escaped.

'yeh sab kuch mere waja se hua hai. Maine ki Geet aur Maan ko majboor kiya ta Dev kp maaf karne ko' Dadima said upset. 'Kaise bhool gayi ke Paminder auski maa hai. Aur Naintara.. Adi, Maan ko phone karo jaldi'

Adi tried calling Maan but was out of reach. He called Romeo. Romeo was shocked. He knew Naintara will come here.

No one had realised that Naintara had got Dev released on bail as everyone was worried about Maan and Geet. Also Dev had gotten both Maan and Geet phone blocked so they would not know the truth. Also they never knew Romeo was there with them.

PRESENT @ Hotel.

'Jab gussa aur akal tikane pe ajaye ga phir woh mujhe doodhe ajayenge' Geet said walking outside in the hotel lawn. Before she knew it someone grabbed her from the back and shoved her into the van. Her mangal sutra dropped on the floor outside as she was taken out of the van.

SAME TIME

She screamed. Maan ran out and saw her being thrown into a van. He was shocked. He followed the van flashes came to him of Geet being nearly killed by her brother. Flashes came to him as he remembered a few scenes. He remembered there encounters at hoshiyar pur until the time the truth about Dev came out. He and Romeo drove the car when Maan passed a deserted building. Maan felt something like Geet was here.

'Romeo Geet yaha par hai'

'Aap ko kaise maloom'

'Mera dil kehraha hai'

Maan walked out the car and his foot stepped on something he picked it up and saw Geet's mangalsutra. He raised it above his head as the mangalsutra twisted around his head.

'GEET' He said as he remembered everything from Hoshiyapur to wedding to Amritsar to Bankrupcy to Pammi.

'Naintara tum phir se mere Geet ko' Maan said.

'Sir ek bohot bara game hai. Naintara hi nahi, Dev bi'

'Dev'

'Ha Sir, yeh sara khel Dev Sir ka acche bane ka, sab kuch.' As Romeo narrated the whole story to Maan. Maan was angered how could Dev fall so low how could he not recognise this.

'GEET ko bachana zarori hai Sir' Romeo said as he put his hand on his arm. 'Maine Tej Veerji aur Lucky Veerji aur Adi sir ko bolaya hai yaha par'

'Romeo tum yaha roko andar bohot log hoge tumhari jaan khatre main '

'Sir' Romeo said stopping him. 'mere zindagi aap ke aur Geet ke liye hamesha kurbaan. Geet mere dost hai aur behen hai. Aur is rishte se aap mere jija hua. To chaliye Jijaji hum apne Geet ke zindagi bachate hai' Maan and Romeo held hands as they walked in.

'Hum bhi' Said Adi Tej and Lucky as they had also driven up.

INSIDE

'Dev tum yaha, yeh chot, Dev please mere haat khol do, aur chalo yaha se, jo koi bi hai waapas asakte hai' Geet said. Naintara then came from behind Dev.

'waa Geet waa. Dev maana parega aap ko.. kitna ache acting karti ho. Geet aur Maan ke samne. Dono ne aap ko maaf kiya aur dono ne aap par vishwas kiya; Dev smirked. Geet was shocked as she saw Dev and NT kiss eachother.

'Ab tumhara bacha nahi hai. Maan tumhe bhool gaya. Phir tumhari jeene ke kya maaqsat? Maan tumhe yaad bi nahi karega' Dev said.

'Yeh sab DEv tum'

'ha maine sab kuch yeh planning ke ti. Tumse badla jo leena ta' Dev said. 'Kitna kuch saha maine tumhari waja se. woh engagement wali raat. Maine kya kaha ta. Maan ko kuch mat batana aur hum char khushi khushi rehsaktey hai aur tumne apna muh khoola' Dev said.

'Ab Maan tumhari liye royega nahi. Aur waise, Adi aur tumhari saari ghar wali.. Maan to pechanti hai nahi. Aur Adi aur Pinky,, aun dono ko to main dekh loga. Aur Maan ko filhaal tumhari marne ke baad.. main Maan ko rok kar rako ga jab tak.. Adi aur Pinky aur tumhari ghar wali ki end nahi hojata'

'Dadima ko hum bohot dhoor ek pagal khane main bhel denge aur Maan ko bhi torture karke marenge'

'Kamine kutte. Tum mere saat jo karna hai karlo lekin Maan ko kuch bi hua to main tum dono ko mardongi'

'acha.. Zingadi aur Maut ki beej main tum ho main nahi' Naintara said taking a gun out.

'Koi tumhara lash bi nahi doodh payega. Aur congratulations. Doctor ne kaha ta aus din your pregnant. Shame mera bacha nahi hai.. main tumhe bakdonga'

'Ab tumhara maut se hamara revenge complete hua. Aur waise tumhe wo file jo maine tumhe ghar pe di ti Maan ka naam lekar, KC ko mere hawale kardiya hai. Ab kal court jayenge aur phir Sab kuch mera and NT ka hojaye ga'

'Sorry Dev, Tumhara nahi sirf mera' Naintara said as she shot Dev in his shoulder. She smirked evily.

'Naintara tum yeh' Dev said in pain as Geet looked shocked.

'Dev, Arjun mera bhai mujse door hogaya tumhari waja se. Annie ko khushiya ki pari ti tumhe ha. Aur ha, maine tumse pyar kiya ta.. Liken wo gayab hogaya jab tum ne Meera ke saat teh and you slept with her and betrayed me again. Poor thing left you and went to Canada. You mean are such dirty lusty creatures'

'Aur Geet Goodbye' Naintara pulled the trigger.Geet closed her eyes and whispered Maan.

A bang was heard. But Geet was not hurt.

MEANWHILE..

Maan and gang were fighting with the goons looking for Geet. The rest of gang looked aftered the goons whlist Maan went looking for Geet and found her. He saw Naintara shoot Dev. He was shocked. Maan pushed Naintara. A shot was heard. Naintara fell to the floor. Dev had shot Naintara in the heart.

'MAAAN' Geet screamed as she saw blood splatter on Maan (Was NT)

'Nahi Geet main tik ho' As he untied her. He turned to see Dev.

'Bro I'm Sorry' Dev said standing up as he was shot on the shoulder.

'No your not. Main tumhara vishwas nahi karta' Maan said.

'Mujhe pata hai. Yeh lijiye' Dev returned the file that that he had which Geet signed.

'Ek minute bro' Maan was leaving with Geet who was shivering. As the police arrested Dev and bandaged his arm waiting to take him to ambulance. He wrote on a paper and signed it that he no longer has any connection with Khurana Khandan and all his balances and all should be reverted to Maan.

Maan was taking Geet to his car when Geet said.

'Main tik ho Maan Sir' Geet did not know his memory returned.

'Maan Sir.. Geet' Geet turned around when Maan showed her the mangal sutra. Geet looked at him confused.

He tied the mangal sutra around her neck.

'Yeh mera haq hai na Geet. Tumhara Maan ka haq'

'Maan' Geet smiled through tears.

'Ha Geet tumhara Maan wapas agaya'

They both hugged..

'Maan' Geet said coming out of the hug. 'App mujhe phir se nahi bulenge na'
'Kabhie Nahi Geet I Love you'
They both sat in the car as Adi drove away. (Others in the other car'
'I Love you to daddy' Geet smiled.
'Daddy? Geet yeh kaise mazaq?' Maan asked confused
'Maan jaate hue Dev ne ek acha kaam kiya..party wala din main behosh hue ti na.. ap ko yaad hai.. Doctor ne kaha ke stress ke waja se hai'
'ha aur tum mujhe yaad hai dawai nahi li ti.. aur khana bi tik tara se nahi kha rahi ti'
'ha lekin aus doctor ne jhoot bola ta.. mujhe aur appko'
'kya matlab'
'maltab woh dawai, mere liye ek nanhi se jaan ko marne ke liye ti.. Liken maine wo dawai kabhi li hi nahi kyun ke..mere pass beeji ki acche wali dawai ti.. aur baadh main Nandini ne kaha ke yeh stress aur bukaar ki dawai nahi hai isliye'
'nanhi se jaan.. matlab...tum pregant ho' Maan exclaimed'
'ha Maan.. aap ka bacha waapas araha hai. Apki beti..'
'Dev ne hamari bacha ko marna chaha..'
'ha Maan.. aur Nakul ne kaha ke jis din main stairs se giryayi ti. aus din neche pani para hua ta..'
'matlab.. hamara bache ka dono marne ki koshish Dev aur NT ne ki ti..'
'ha Maan liken is baar wo kamyab nahi hue.. Mujhe kal subha laga ke main pregnant hu isliye main office late ayi ti.. kyun ke hospital gayi ti.. aunno ne kaha jo dawai mujhe de gayi ti woh mere bache ko marne ke liye ti..'
aur Nandini aur Lucky Veerji ne aus doctor ko pata lagaya aur woh doctor filhall arrest hogaya.' said adi 'waise congrats sir'
'Geet kitna kuch hogaya hamare saat.. sab kuch hamre naak ke neche aur hum nahi dekh paye'
'Maan ache log hamesha logo main ache dekh te hai' said Adi butting in.
'ha Geet chaloo'
'Kaha?'
'Doctor ke pass jana hai aur phir hame shop pe jana hai na.. PINK paint lena hai.. hamari baby girl ke liye'
'Mr Khurana baby BOY aur blue'
'Sir main ek baat bolo...' Adi said.
'bolo'
'waise main chachu bane wala ho' Adi said 'toh phir main kyun na decide karo'
'ek minute Adi.. chachu ya masa'
'Masa?...' asked Adi confused.
'Jaise mujhe nahi pata.. app Pinky se pyar karte ho'
'Mmm main main P ppp Pinn Pinky se pyar woh Geet woh na ' Adi stumbled.
'Adi aur Pinky... ab mujhe pata chala ke tum dono hamesha office main kya karte teh and Lucky Pinky se baat karta aur tum aun dono ko dekhte rehte'
Geet and MAan and adi arrived home.
'Maan., Ladki wali ho main.. Hum ladki itni assani se nahi denge' Geet said crossing her arms around Pinky who was standing there.
'Geet hum bhi ladke wale hai. Dulhan hum lekar hi jayenge' Maan said putting his arm around Adi.
'Dekhte hai'
'Dekhte hai'
'KYA dekhte hai.. Maan Sir, Geet kya horaha hai' asked Pinky confused.
'TUmhari aur Adi sir ka Rishta'
Pinky Blushed.
'To khabar paki ti' Maan said as he grabbed Pinky's hand and Adi hand and joined them together.
'To ladki wale, Dulhan sambal ke rakhna.. Dulha aur dulha ke sali Dulhan lekar aayenge Band baja barat leker' Maan said.
THE END
NEXT OS will CONTINUE FROM THIS INTO ADI PINKY WEDDING BAND BAJA BAARAT!

THANKS OVER TO yOU COMMENTS PLEASE..

EPILOGUE COMING

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Im so sorry just got home

Will update in about 4 hours

Oh and just wanted to say it will be worth it

As I will have in this os
(3 parts btw since I've decided to add a few more things in)
1. Comedy
2. Drama
3. Suspense
4. Action
5. And danger
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sounds interesting dear...do continue...😊
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LooKing forward to read more
Do continue
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Sounds interesting! please update it soon!
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Very interesting!
Waiting for the next part😍
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sounds interesting...let's see how u play it out...
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Waiting for parts
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