The Tropical Forest of Deceit

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sometimes in life you stand at crossroads
Defeated
Deflated
Disturbed

Then comes the vine
Sometimes clinging
Sometimes plunging
Sometimes touching you in all tenderness

You think you have lasted the course
You think you are better off far from prying eyes
You think the jungle has embraced you
And enveloped you in its green folds

The quicksands catch you unawares
The rains rail you off course

You last
You hang in
You stand up
You survive

In the TROPICAL FORESTS of DECEIT
Where ALL that you SEE is not REAL

- Bri
Circa 2011 July 16th

Fables of the Green Forest

Edited by bDgT - 14 years ago

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mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oooh thats nice...the pic is so serene and comforting somehow...yet in a way it also reminds me of poison ivy...the fictional character 😆

You think the jungle has embraced you
And enveloped you in its green folds

The quicksands catch you unawares
The rains rail you off course

these lines actually make me feel suffocated...but it is so true. Lovely post. yaa...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Reality is harsh !!!! but we have to live with it...

With every down there is up !!!!

Beautiful words Bri

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Muniza Riaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Very nice Bri, after long time i have seen you here, good to see you. I am agree with Ansah, reality is very harsh, but this is life.

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Welocme back..hango i ahve not read it..

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Do not Tell

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanks guys for the feedback :D

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-Deepzz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wonderful Bri...👏

We have all been at crossroads in life wondering what to do next ... Some how U survive with what fate hands You 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#8

this is so Beautiful writer :D

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aanyakunat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#9

beautiful... 😳 so true... 😊

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Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

Bri, good to see a post from you after like ages! 😊 Are u watching the show? 😊

Loved what you wrote! You are back with positivity! 😉

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