OS...Love Beyond Pains..updated final part page 14 - Page 13

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

awesome upd

Originally posted by: vinaben

very nice!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome update

loved it

loved maaneet

sooo cute

glad maan gone his memory back

loved da ending

geet talking 2 her baby

sweet

thanks 4 ur hard work

thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: anupm04

Lovely ending
loved it

Originally posted by: sharmake11

simply mesmerizing

love it core

thnx for amazing OS
ty 4 pm

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow amazing ending... luved it...

Originally posted by: gurtilover

Lovely end

Originally posted by: piya-

Today u left me speechless...

What a piece of writing this was...fantabulous, magnificent and totally out of this world👏

U portrayed each n every emotion so beautifully n i really appreciate that u did not make sameera negative...n at the same time dadima ne bhi sameera ko maaf kar diya

the feelings that geet was going through was beautifully written...i mean i could actually visualize and feel her pain through your writing

she was actually going through a mixed set of emotions

happiness...coz she found maan n she was pregnant

sad... coz she coudn't stay with maan...her life...n at the same time could not reveal her true identity to him...

belief...that one day true love will win and maan will recollect his memory

I really appreciate this work Silky... this was totally out of this world

Regarding maan... i felt bad for him wo andar hi andar ghut raha tha...but finally loved their reunion

U have written that this is d end of ur story but i will say this is a new start...

N next time u r going to write an FF...n u will listen to me if u really consider me to b ur friend

love-Piya

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

wonderful ending

it was simply fantastic

i cant say anything more

u just left me speechless

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...dear

...4 Pm me dear..😳..

as...😃

...,

n

...😊

.👍🏼.n

...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

..really

n

...😃😃😃

tons of 4 u dear...🤗🤗🤗