MG OS - Condemned - Page 7

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Gosh ! Maddy u r impossible ... while I was reading the last para I felt a lump in my throat ... my mouth was bitter with pain...and my heart was heavy ... how could u make me feel such strong pain just by writing a os ?? ... U definitely need a jadu ki jhappi :D

Originally posted by: princess163

Hello Ms. khurani!
Yeah, i am busy, but i do come to IF daily, even if its for half an hour! And when i come and check my pm dabba, I make it a point to open those from my Khurani😳
so, when I came yesterday, I saw three pms from you...opened them all in different tabs...was replying to the first excited about your OS, offering my help for the title that I saw the other one which had the link for Condemned and rushed here!
read it, and then, just as I started typing the comment, I ended up with those red lines...m like this only-spontaneously kuchh bhi bakwaas likh deti hoon!😆
Am glad that you liked it!
Now, two things, First, am sure, if you sit down to write a poem, you will do a much better job than me😳
Second, you write BRILLIANT stories, so it sort of balances for not writing crap like me😆
Now, about your idea-I would love to write for your stories dude!😃
and about blaming your name for this OS-Nah! I can't blame you in any form😳 I loved it anyways!
Senti coz this OS just made me fear for my loved ones...fear for ever hurting them, intentionally or unintentionally...for losing them to anything...so I just wanna say...I AM FORTUNATE TO HAVE YOU AS A FRIEND AND WOULD LIKE TO CHERISH THIS FRIENDSHIP FOR LIFE(if thats not too long for you😆)
about songs and singers, i am a complete freak...I mean I love Backstreet, I love Enrique, i love Ricky Martin, I love Euphoria, and I can go on and on...😆
sometimes I feel that is there some singer that I don't love?😆
nahin, bhot saare nahin pasand, but bhot zaada pasand bhi hain😉
my Maanified friend, I would still be happy being single...nOT committed even to Maan...though I desire him😳
Love you
Princess

Originally posted by: rabia04ful

hi mandy..

yeh i somehow survived this one...

wht hv u done girl..

u made me cry...it was something i would never like to even imagine...tht was painful to read...infact heart breaking one..

well coming back to ur writing...

wht a classic start as always...with the RAIN SEQ...wow...👏

just loved it...u hv made rains more special to me...yeh i agree rain has a dual nature...

it does brings happiness n joy but on the other half..it does brings sadness n tears n a flow of past memeories...

tht was just perfect n flawless..

now coming to MAAN"S INTRO...ahhh😍

it was PERFECT just like MAAN..loved tht piece so so much..from eyes lashess n brows-----chest n till the fingers...wow loved it...

u r a real story teller...mixing bits of past n present so so well...

i was shocked to see this shade of geet...so so different...

i hv to mention u really take things to PEAKS...whethere its love n emotions or the negativity of a character...hatsof to ur abilities...

loved tht bit where maan said:loved the way u lie.."well its my one of the v my fav songs though"...i loved tht part of him knowing the fact or beig able to read her eyes tht she loved him...

she lied with her words but for him her eyes said it all...

they being shifted to TRANS OF PAST MEMORIES...when they spent such beautiful moments of LOVE...wow loved it yaar...

wht a dramatic ending...maan knew the truth n he didnt tell her..just coz she will be hurt...ahh tht was painful...u always manage to prove him right..,😆which i actually love...

geet at the end was left empty handed...v v traggic n sad one...

i was hoping tht may be it was turn up to be like ur MIRACLE story..n he will wake up but tht didnt happened.but anyways..

in total it waas a fab story...

hugz ..n keep writing...in the mantime..im reading ur previous stuff...hv read many of them just few left...😊

👏u rock girl...

after reading the traggic end..a song struck my mind "pyar tune kya kia"...

sending link of one of my vms of maaneet ur way...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JPSTr5Ne2Fw [/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: maanddy

Ohhh ! I forgot most important thing man...How can I make Doctors that bad ? huh ? 😆

BTW, Shan...not all but my one, is that fine ? Anyways, how was the surprise ? 😆 I never heard of the name you mentioned even...and button button ! You always share something new with me, now I have to google it ! 😆

This time I am counting, how much " I hate you " I got ! 😉 I will create record babes ! You will help me na ? In future too, keep hating - loving me ! I would love that ! 😛

Thank you so much Shan...You know how much it matters to me ! 🤗

Love,

Maddy

Originally posted by: maanddy

God !

First of all, I am sorry for late reply ! And, coming to your comment now, Whoaa...You survived ! 😉 That's great news ! 😉

hi...thx for replying..i was waiting...

yeh i did survived...lol...

BTW, I told you once, Rain is important for me ! 😳 And, the song, yeah...I like this song but its sad version only, which comes in end with the actress and her lil tiger teddy ! 😆

yup u told me tht rain is imp to u...n thx to u now rain has become more imp n special to me...as whenever it rains now..i get losted in ur writings abt rain...n just love it so so much...i pray to GOD plz i want rain...lol...feels like me gone crazy with this current season...never enjoyed it tht much...

i also love tht song n ofcourse tht sad version is more more impactful...the song i used in vm was also from the sad version..i just took one of my fav stanza of tht song...

Thank you so much for loving my works and it really matters to me ! 🤗🤗

no need to say thx girl...i love ur writing abilities alot...n want to appreciate u with all ur work...

Good that you are reading my previous stuff, I just hope you will not end up saying, " I hate you, Maddy " like others...😆

Thanks, once again ! 😃

yeh i m reading previous stuff of yours...i will comment on them altogether..v soon...

now i can see why ppl end up saying : I HATE U...bcoz u mad them cry n u made them sad...u really take things to traggic limits...n peaks...lol..

i really dont wanna say those words to u...coz tht the true abilitty of z writer...ppl love to hate them but still read them...😊

i want to ask u: u r also a big fan of MAAN...then how could to kill him in most of ur stuff...

this is difficult for me to imagine n to read to...i guess u r tough at heart..lol...

anyways...best regards

looking forward to ur next creation...

Originally posted by: maanddy

Arzz...I am so glad that you finally managed to enjoy my work, I read all the comments and I am just expecting " I hate you, Maddy " but you are darling babes...😉 You did not say that !

BTW, I am getting bored nowadays, coz I am trying to READ as in STUDY wala READ ! 😆 And, top of that, I am not even coming to IF much, so I missed you, too ! 😊

Thank you so much ! 🤗🤗🤗