hey Poli 🤗as promised i'm here with my ideas😃
I really like your track...so i'm gonna add some of my ideas into yours.
I do want 3 things for sure:
1. Dev turning negative (becuz that's where all the drama is!)
2. Vicky's entry
3. Karma taking Dev down-hill
So step-mommy is here to take away everything for herself and poor Dev. Btw, I don't think Dev is as poor as Pammi thinks he is!...I mean is it really Maan's fault that Dev has nothing to do except for falling in love over and over again. Why doesn't he work or something? Oh well whatever it is, Pammi thinks he's no more than just a servant at Khurana Mansion.
Here's what I think should happen:
1. Dev talks to mommy and questions why she did this. He's not ready to side her, thinks it's not fair for Maaneet and dadi.
2. While he's busy trying to find out Pammi's plan, he stays intact with Maaneet and offers help but they being "Maaneet" refuse and say that they don't need any help.
3. Nandu and Lucky stay in KM but visit Maaneet often.
4. Geet goes out to look for a job while Maan plans for his own business.
5. Geet ends up working under Vicky (this is where Vicky enters as her boss) she ofcourse is completely unaware and so is he.
6. Vicky is a happy-go-lucky guy, not a threat to Maaneet (and please don't make him fall for Geet🤢).
I don't want Dev to turn negative because Nandu falls for Vicky:
because earlier Maaneet espacially Maan supported Dev since he is interested in her. And we know that MSK is the man of his words. Wouldn't it look odd that now he's suddenly supporting Vicky and Nandu and telling Dev that it's upto Nandu who she chooses.
Second, because Dev has not even confessed to Nandu about his feelings yet, infact he's a complete coward. He can't even stand infront of Nandu and talk properly. We've never seen Dev showing strong feelings or affection for her so if he's turning negative on the basis of Nandu/Vicky relationship then it won't make much sense. I personally think he's not the kind of a guy who can do anything for the person he loves. He's weak, always doing what others tell him to do. Also he recently admitted that he's happy if Nandu's happiness lies in getting married to someone she loves so why would he turn against MSK just because now she's in love with someone else for real and Maan supports her.
Instead I want Nandu to find out the truth about Dev. Remember, Nandu doesn't know about NT either not just what he did to Geet.
All this can happen when Dev has taken over the business (not under Pammi's influence) but just because he feels someone should be there to work since Maan is gone. He's not completely negative at that point, he still goes to Maaneet to see if everything is fine with them. On the other hand, Pammi continues to brainwash him about Maaneet and daadi and the kind of treatment she's been getting.
I don't know who should tell Nandu about Dev though, maybe she can come to know everything thru Adi. I don't want Geet to tell her because after she finds out I want her to ask Geet first why she never told this to her (since she has also started falling for Dev now). Geet tells her that they forgave Dev long time ago and he changed so there was no point of talking about the past. But Nandu is hurt/furious and goes to Dev to talk about it. Dev, confidently says that he has changed ever since he realised that he did something really wrong to Geet and her family. He went thru a long phase of guilt and apologised to Maaneet and they forgave him so he doesn't feel the need of doing anything else to prove that he is not the bad guy anymore. But Nandu says if you're not the bad guy then how can you take over everything that once belonged to Maaneet and have them live in a small house while you have the entire KM to yourself. This makes him mad as he feels that Maaneet might have influenced her in believing that he is still the same bad guy. He takes all this to Pammi and she, taking advantage of his anger, brainwashes him more like I told you Maaneet never want the best for you. they will turn everyone against you and so on.
This can create a rift between Nandu and Dev...so that way it's not Maaneet telling Nandu not to go for Dev but Nandu herself decides that Dev is not the right person for her. She can then fall for Vicky as she's spending more time with him than Dev and getting to know him more.
Vicky can be Maan's step brother and Dev's real brother...but he supports Maaneet ofcourse which causes Dev to gradually turn negative as he is now fully under the influence of his mom that Maaneet are going to take everyone away from him or she can even say that they still have not forgiven you. While he along with Pammi takes over KC, Maaneet build their own empire. Gradually, Nandu sees the true colors of Dev and decides to teach him a lesson. That's where Karma comes in😊 she doesn't have to literally teach him a lesson, but Dev turns negative and can have business rivalry with MSK. They can have 2 empires running against each other, one belongs to Dev and the other belongs to MSK. But remember Maaneet have forgiven Dev but they have not forgotten what kind of a person he is. Dev's biggest weakness is that he gets influenced by people quickly and can never make up his own mind. That can be a downfall for him.
To add more drama, we can also have Samira enter as Vicky's GF🤣🤣. Ok i was kidding!😃
As for Maaneet, they seriously need to start planning for junior MSK or junior Geet!😉😳don't forget that they are living alone in their own house so there is room for lots of mmmaaahiii momments😉.
At the end, Dev has learned his lesson. Pammi doesn't have to be completely negative as her motive is not to ruin Maaneet and dadi but to get the place she and Dev deserved in KM and KC. But somewhere along the line when she feels that Dev is not going to change or side her, she sharpens her knives more...and is ready to do anything to get him go against Maaneet.
All this can be done in 3-4 months, it doesn't need to drag and as long as Dev gets punished, MSK gets his position back, and Maaneet are happy, I have nothing to complain!
Edited by Nimz-KMH - 14 years ago
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