M/G SS: Vanilla Twilight ( last ch.pg.42) jul 26

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

yeah...abhi aayi hogi office mein so round lagake gayi hai...😆😆

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Got it...😆...

and i accepted the invite 😃

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

And missy sana is here too...hello hello 😃

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

Awesome reya...!!
i thot she is no more but the monitor made me read again the line...wea her pulse rate responded weakly...yahu..yahu...she started functioning by herself...!!
love u for that reya...i smiled widely...wen she said.."missed me?"
so happy...that she is back..
awww..can understand maan's happiness...!!
thank u so much for giving us a happy ending sweety...!!
loved ur surprise alooott..!! 🤗

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

Hey there :)

Umm I haven't read the alternate ending! Personally, I liked the sad one so.. :D

Keep Writing!

xoxo

Aanya

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

oh my god yaaar, u gave me a heart attack last time..

i was literally crying reading the last part...now u gave me the shock ...

u better give us a epilogue ...

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

omg...this was probably the saddest story i hv ever read...even till the last line i was hoping for a miracle to happen...i don't know what to say...this has actually made me sad and i literally have tears in my eyes after reading this...

the story was sooo beautiful...the love they shared...the bond everything and then this sad end...

beautifully written dear...this short story has actually left an imprint on my mind and heart...great workk...