M/G SS: Vanilla Twilight ( last ch.pg.42) jul 26

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-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: mchopra
Sry reya but i loved the otehr one...it touched me this one ddnt..hehe..sry teri saari mehnat par paani pher diya..

😡😡😡 Usko bhadkaana band kar...phir woh sirf sad sad wale ffs degi...😭😭😭

Reya..i still haven't read it yet...hehehehee...today pakka...😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Jia come on try reading u will know..

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

part 6
Reya dear I Love You so so so much...
now this is what called as happy ending...
u made me cry last time that i was so depressed but now am sooo happy...
kisses and hugs to u dear...
Geet is back and on her own...
finally Maan and Geet will be together...
thanks a lot honey...

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: mchopra
Sry reya but i loved the otehr one...it touched me this one ddnt..hehe..sry teri saari mehnat par paani pher diya..

oh no honey...i am not upset at all..i am actually happy that u feel like way because like i said...i am not convinced with this one at all...that's why i had originally posted the sad ending even though i had written a happy one before that...

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: -jia-

😡😡😡 Usko bhadkaana band kar...phir woh sirf sad sad wale ffs degi...😭😭😭

Reya..i still haven't read it yet...hehehehee...today pakka...😳

hehe 😆...it's okay...u will get a majority of sad ones anyway...😆..sowieee

and take ur time...no rush 😊

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: mchopra
Great minds think alike..hehe..

Yup 😃..we sadists think alike...lolz..

are u reading you and i ?

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Yay thanks for the happy ending :DD

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Na i am writing abhi...i will finsh some part and post it...on the grp..

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

lovely ...loved it!!!

will u cont. it???

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MysticalRealm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Res jee :)

I am back jee.. and that too jaldi!

How's my speedy edit??

I am falling in love with your writing more and more (although I think I have reached rock bottom already, but who said you can't pierce through the earth's surface)

and you are making me dig deeper into my heart to find a place for you and your writing.

I think it was exceptionally sweet of you to plcae the alternate ending as well... it was great.

I personally liked the other ending better, and I see where you came from.

I also felt that the sad ending was better than this one, but everyone has there ideas.

This ending was also phenomenal yet something felt amiss, which was there in the sad ending. There was this sense of peace and something else which was amazing!

I can't say more because I just prefer to keep it in myself and shut up... main zyada pakka ti hoon...

ily <3

Jilllyyy

Edited by Klutszy_KaShian - 14 years ago