MG OS - Contented - Page 6

Originally posted by: maanddy

O.M.G. !

You did not cry ? 😲 WOW ! This is my effect, stay with me for some more days and you will become like me ! 😆

Okay...Jokes apart ! But, I think I am glad that you did not ! Coz, my reason was not this OS actually, I had fight with mom at that moment ! So, blame went to poor OS !

And, Are you crazy, mad, nuts ? 😡 How can you think like that your feedback would discourage me anyhow ? 😲 I wrote for you guys only ! 😊

And, apart from that, I know how much you like my other works and my FF, so if one OS could not make you move, then it's fine ! I am not some junior kg student who would cry that Reva did not give me reply as I expected ! 😆

You are a darling ! 🤗🤗🤗

Have you listened that theme ? Amy's theme ! I just loved that, I wrote it with that music on, so I was senti a bit, plus mom fights, you know ! 😉

Anyways,

Thank you so much and Love you so much for loving my work and giving me HONEST compliments ! That just shows, how good reader and friend are you ! 🤗🤗

Love you babes ! 🤗

Maddy 😃

its awesome... 👏

Originally posted by: jasraj123

really nice one maady. can't say what i feel. sooo deeply hurt and pain was shown in this. really u will kill us by making us cry.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Which one has happy ending... I rushed to the last lines to figure it out... Mujhe to dono hi versions scary lag rahe thay... So the top one or the bottom one?

Maddy meri jaan ki dushman...
Emotional terrorist... Luv u loads :)

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great was saddest OS ever. But I loved it! It was beautifully written. Even though I hate sad endings, I love both versions. thanks for the PM! The songs made me 😭 too. I love Maan and Mahi's theme song :)

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

well written OS. u can make a killing out of this👍🏼 profession...emphasis is on the killing part.😆

i read the top version...cried my eyes out...

did u just mention that the first one was a happy version????

OH MY GOD...girl u'll b the death of me, i swear 😲

told u a fiction is nvr a fiction to me..i can live the story through either my pain or my luvd ones's pain..

whn maan was running with the dead body in his hands, i remembered my servants daughter who died in a crash...he came back n said..."i cudn't save her"...

i remembered a girl who had an 8 year affair with her luvr...families were extremely against eachother but they kept on doing everything to win the hearts of all and they did...after the mehndi, the guy took his friends out for an icecream treat...died underneath a truck that came out of no where.

the girl lost her sanity 😒

i remembered the girl who's boyfirend asked for a kiss and she was too shy..so they fought n she said "not today, not tomorrow,not evr"

n he said" that can only b true ,if i die today"

n she said" acha to phir jaao mar jaao...mujhe kia perwa"

he died in the crash the same night...

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almost two yrs ago in indiana...a very sweet family of 3 daughters and a lovely couple lived. the father was i think gone to NY for a business trip. the mother n daughters were always n always were scared of snow but then the mom learned that her bstfriend lost her brother back home. she felt extremely sad for her friend n inorder to console her left with her janu adorable daughters on a snowy evening to meet the friend. they made it to the destination fine but whn they were coming home , the car fell in the small little bitty lake that was right outside their subdivision. but the lake was frozen...by the time paramedics came...maddyy...they all were dead...except the youngest daughter who was 6. she died in the hospital.

while the car was sinking the girls called their father...n kept on saying...dad save us...dad save us...

can u just imagine the horror that the mom mustve felt...whn her daughters must b screaming...dad save us...mom save us...whn the car locks mustve jammed on them, whn their body weight mustve started to weigh them down, whn mom cudnt hear them breathing anymore

the reports said that between the 3 who died first, mom died last...she died of heart attack...

i need a break...i'll comment later yaar.