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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rsroopali
wowww swati
u made me cry

it was just awesomeee

luved ittt

Thanks a lot dear!

Sorry for making you cry😭

glad you liked it

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: maanddy

Swati, My Princess,

Generally I do not read FF or OS, not so often, only when my friend writes or I am in mood, I never read others work on GF !

But, this one was indeed special, so I had to read it ! When I got your PM and it named " Learning to value " I got it, that it is from you to your grandmother ! A dedication !

I really loved it, the attachment between both of you ! I know I can't say much to you, as I am " dabba " in that department ! But, all I can say is that, wherever she is, She is Proud of you !

I can't say you made me cry ! You know the reasons, but I was moved ! Your purpose solved !

And, I think you wrote it last night or this morning only ! Each word at the end, reflects your agony ! All I can say is that, you are too good ! Someone is lucky to have you, unlike me ! 😆 And, songs were nice, I liked them, and you really did it ! Nice, best and great way !

Your Khurani Loves you a lot !

And, I will be waiting for my Princess swati to come back soon with her " daant " " love " and all that destructive things, she used to do with me !

I will wait ! 😊

Maddy😊

Khurani,

I love you!

I know you don't read ffs, so I am really honoured that you read this one!

Yes, this one is a dedication!

Though her memories are always safe in my heart, they are now well documented and will be here forever! I don't know if she is proud, I just want her to be satisfied and in peace.

Yeah, I wrote it after talking to you...there was no other way I could come out of this! last time I had people, this time my mom is broken and I need to be there for her and hence, I need to be normal at the earliest!

If you are talking about the Maan sort-of someone, then let me tell you that I have no one! It was just a figment of my imagination to bring in Maaneet! In fact, you might find this strange but in real life, I don't believe in relationships and love marriages!

And, shut up!😡 Whoever will get the pleasure of having you as a life partner will be very lucky!

You might try to act all hard, yet I know you are very-very considerate and loving, and Princess knows her Khurani pretty well!

The last song actually made me write this and feel good-feel happy that Beeji is now relieved of the pain she endured since so long! Inreality, the first attack happened three years back, and the second one 8 months back! Beeji had been suffering in hell since the past 8months and somewhere, we were praying for her to be relieved, yet its not easy to accept the loss when you really have to face it!

I had met her two days before she left us, and at that time, she couldn't even recognise me!

you got your princess back Khurani!

I am coming to your thread, hoping that my Beeji will be happy to see her children happy, coz I haven't met someone more selfless than her yet!

Love

Swati

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sindu555

Swati 🤗

it was beautiful .. am soo touched ... in such simple words to poured your heart out ...

loved it .. absolute master piece

lots of love princess 🤗

Sana

Thanks a lot Sana!

You got it right-I poured my heart out!

Love you too!🤗

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: jwalamukhi
beautifully written...👏

Thanks dear!

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: --Shika--
Reserved *will be edited on july 10th as i want to say a lot and i cant comment long through mobile*

Will be waiting for your views!

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi
It was a lovely os
The message that the os conveyed left me speechless
It bought tears 2 my eyes.
A lovely os!!

Thanks a lot!

Sorry for making you cry!

Glad you liked it!

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maneet1985
wow swati.. that is indeed beautiful...

it was written awesomely...

i understand one truth...

maaneet makes us oh so wonderful writers...

Thanks Deepu!

Yeah, Maaneet made me a writer, yet this one was not inspired by them, or for them;this one was just for my Beeji!

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anaum91
awww...it was such a touching OS...tears are rolling down ny cheeks...i've never seen my naani...but our nanu has been there for us...he is actually the support system of our family n we luv him to bits...luv d os truly an emotional one...keep up d gr8 work...thnx fo d pm

Thanks dear!

sorry for the tears that I made you shed!

I hope you live happily with your Nanu...grandparents hold a very important place in our hearts, even if we don't realise it at first!