# Devil's Den#-Congratulations to DD and GC :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I decided that we should help the CVs out and lay out the assets and liabilities of this show in order for them to improve the show. What they choose to do with it is their call. Let us hear the awesomest news (does this word even exist ) first, then the good news first and then the bad news ok 😳

Awesomest news

Maaneet won the award for the best couple at the Gold awards
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Congratulation to them and to the team that made it possible.
Congratulations to all Maaneet fans 😃

Assets
1) Brand Maaneet/Gurti
As a couple they have become the embodiment of the word chemistry...they do not need any liplocks or make out scenes in order to convey passion. These two DD and GC are powerhouse performers by themselves but together they are dynamite.👍🏼 They light up the screen together. For the first time in history a Star One couple has won a Gold award for best couple. Does that not tell you something 😉 ...GURTI ARE THE BEST IN THE BUSINESS and everyone else seems to recognize that but you. 😕

2) Loyal fan base: You are lucky to have a loyal fan base that sticks to you through thick and thin. They write analysis for you, give constructive criticism (inspite of being belittled by some for doing that we persist) and most of all they give you ideas to make the show better. 😃 We all take time out of our busy lives to help you out, it would be nice if you showed us some respect and gave us some encouragement, once in a while 😳

3) The story of GHSP. Your main story was very powerful and there are a lot of loops that have been left open that can be used to generate new tracks to keep the story moving.

Liabilities
1) Your inability to use your best asset which is your lead couple properly. They have been reduced to side leads while people like Dev hog the limelight. It is downright stupid to have an asset and not use it. Capitalize on your best assets and their chemistry. Zee TV seems to be doing a good job of capitalizing on it and it is downright pathetic that someone else is getting mileage out of your leads while you are not using them to your advantage. This smacks of poor planning and even poorer long term and short term vision. Get your act together, please.

2) Your execution is terrible. The root cause of this is that your story writers and the screenplay writers are plain lazy. Come up with a good plot.

3) Your PR leaves a lot to be desired for and is by far one of the worst. Who shows a Dev precap before a maha episode 😕 😕 😕. Are you trying to recruit viewers or turn them off 🤢. The new dance show is beginning so you should have shown, and this was the chance to grab eyeballs. A Maaneet pre-cap would have ensured that, instead you shoot yourselves in the foot by showing a Devini pre-cap 🤔. The editor, the director and everyone else associated with this debacle needs to wake up and take note of this.

4) STOP GIVING SO MUCH IMPORTANCE TO DEV. How many times will you show a rapist romancing another girl. It is an insult to women who have been assaulted and you are doing your best to insult them in every episode. If you do not have tracks for Dev, let us know, we will give it to you. KEEP DEVINI TO A MINIMUM.

5) Stop riling the fans by making misleading statements. I am sure you find the fans' reaction entertaining but remember this is a double edged sword. You could be paying a price you did not anticipate.

How to turn liabilities into assets

At this point it does seem that the liabilities outweight the assests, but all is not lost because the liabilities can be easily fixed. Here is how

1) Geet a strong Maaneet-centric storyline. I guarantee people will watch. 👍🏼

2) Don't be wimps. You can show Maan kissing another girl on the cheek but not Geet. This is beyond pathetic in the name of family audience. Show some romance. Again a look, a hug, a gaze can alll convey romance. We want more Maaneet romance. Stop trying to be something you are not. You have your own indivuduality. Flaunt it 😎

3) Maaneet are a couple now and make them behave like one. They need to discuss problems, and display their love for each other. They need to do something nice to make each other feel special instead of fighting all the time. Their nok-jhoks are getting very annoying.

4) Improve your PR and give pre-caps that will make people want to watch the episode and not run for the hills after watching the pre-cap. 🤣

5) Give Maan and Geet some better clothes. Both of them need a makeover. Geet is more in need of it than Maan.

I hope these are taken in the right sense by the team and implemented.
😃

Analysis coming later 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
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To All the Devils of the Devil's Den hereby declare the Den to be
a Bird & Dot free zone !!!



If you dare to fly, be ready to fly all the way to heaven, because

we will shoot you. HAAN!


This is particularly in light of the moderator warning
(chk here.. https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1604969)
and henceforth every Devil (old & new) solemnly pledge to NOT indulge in crooning aka bird language
(except : ofc the pengu tribal linguistics)
and here is the dare..
one more croon frm a bird and u know what...!! HAAN!!




DISCLAIMER

The information here is Xclusive to de Den ONLY! Read n FORGET IT! Infringe our CopyRite and Anj will make u watch the "India Paints" Videos till u c the Light! Everyone Is Welcome, so Post Post! We are like Appy Fizz and Grappo Fizz...Cool to de Core!

- Devils of the Devil's Den-

EVIL RULES
1. If U don't like the Devil's Den residents then just fly away! We don't like to be mean hosts!

2. U can only jappoo Geet HSP ki Geet at Den - So, stay in your maryaada and don't jam about other shows!

3. The Den is not just about CONfakes, but reel takes so discuss dey story constructively in all its glory😃

4 Do dish about the Actors, but don't diss em or their frogs! Anj won't post ur IF bail!

5. This is not Dadimaa's Darbar, so don't spam about the best way to bake ham, etc.!

6. We r going to open new Den before airtime and shift there once the show finishes whether u ve reserved ya not! So, be PHAAST!

7. Don't QUOTE use "@" to reply varna you will get a Watt o Unwanted pics that will make ur eyes snap crackle n pop! Max of 1 quote is okkie if u really must - that's all.

8. Naya Den if we run outta the original 1 for the day can be opened by anyone, but only post these rules & the link to the old den in the 1st post. Don't forget to leave link of 2ndary dens in original one for the day.

9. There is Devilsden A/C. Its for emergencies & our awesome Kreations Corner
DEVIL'S PLEDGE
All the Devils raise hand and repeat after me
"I SOLEMNLY SWEAR THAT I AM UPTO NO GOOD"
"And hereby Pledge to diss All de Spoilers n Spoof de Pictures"

WATCH ON STAR PLAYER

Star Player is testing whether they could go live at the same time or within the half-an-hour of airtime, but are NOT

Previous DENS with THEMES

Introduction on the SHOW's THEME

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1566472/devils-den-mr-seeeeeoo-becomes-tailormaan

Dadi
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1567872/devils-den-this-info-belongs-to-devils-den-only

Potential Plot lines (MB)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1568732/devils-den-the-dance-of-pain

MSK
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1569633/devils-den-arjun-maryaada-purush-or-plain-purush

Dev
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1570540/devils-den-the-return-of-the-phamous-eggs

Aesthetics (make up etc)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1571442/devils-den-maan-bna-daai-maan

Dialogues
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1572317/devils-den-maan-ban-gayaa-santa

Brij and Yash
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1573564/devils-den-confession-tera-delhi-ki-sardi

Sameera
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1574594/devils-den-msk-never-had-a-sister

Arjun
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1575672/devils-den-pyar-ka-izhaar-aur-takraar

Marketing
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1576750/devils-den-hum-tum-bathroom-mein-bandh-ho

Geet
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1577842/devils-den-the-war-aint-over

Symbolism
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1578747/devils-den-boss-se-big-boss

Naintara
Anwesha

Vicky

Music

Dance
Wedding Symbolism
Foreplay
Parallel Tracks

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Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First things first

Very very hearty congratulations to our very own Maaneet/ Gurti aka Dhrasti Dhami and Gurmeet Chaudhary (remember ladies first 😛... it is the polite thing to do). They have done us and the team proud. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏

My sincere hope is that this proves to the channel and the PH what a talented lead couple they have and they will write tracks in the future to showcase and utilize this talented couple and their mind-blowing chemistry. 😳 These people are your best assets and they need to be used right in order for you to get maximum mileage. It is kind of sad to see that you created the brand yet you seem to have no respect for it, whereas others seem to realize its importance and use it to market their shows. Moral of the story "WAKE UP AND SMELL THE COFFEE. MAANEET ARE YOUR USP"

Now for the Maha-episode
Maha episodes are supposed to be high points of the show wherein a major twist is brought. It is made to capture the attention of the audience and hopefully retain it. The vampire show has done an excellent job on both the maha-epis beginning with the trailer. The people have something to look forward to and I have been told that they delivered both times. Unfortunately the same cannot be said of Geet. We have been let down by our writers both times, this time in particular. The individual threads (scenes) all worked well but when they were woven together into a tapestry, it left something to be desired. The only thing that saved the show today were the 3 Maaneet scenes (especially the last one) and your talented cast. Your writers once again proved unreliable.

The worst scene was the devini scene. Dev cannot do romance adn the girl is not great at it either. The end result was a pathetic scene that was very difficult to watch - both of them were trying hard - infact too hard and as a result the scene fell flat. It was terrible. 👎🏼 I am not saying this because I hate Devini but I am saying this because this is what I saw.

SS as Dev was much better in the scenes with Maan adn Adi adn he performed very well. If you want to keep him around as a positive character he should be Maan's helper - NO LOVE TRACK FOR DEV PLEASE 🤢.

GC, DD and the Daman dude all did well in the scene where Maan bhadkofies Daman. GC was excellent as someone who is setting a trap - "Welcome to my parlor- said the spider to the fly " 😉. DDs expressions as Geet watches hidden close by were wonderful. She was also wonderful in the scene where she checks out the ring and in the scene where she brings Beeji to where Daman is. Beeji's expressions were also very good in this scene.

Mamaji's drunk act is getting annoying now. 👎🏼
But Lukcy was great in all his scenes. Ahwaan is very likeable and I would love to see him in Delhi.
Adi rocked. I love Adi and he carries off his role to perfection whether it is his getting hit by Lucky, or distracting Mama 😆 or making sure things go smoothly for his boss. 😆 Maan relies on him heavily and Adi always delivers. My favorite Adi scene is the one where he gives Jugnu money and then cribs 🤣. I also love the one where he tells Mama that a laawaris bottle is waiting for him outside and was in splits when he said "it is raining. Go soon else the bottle may catch a cold".
Teji, Pammi and Lacchi all did well. Radhika also did well.

I did not like the jewellery Geet was wearing with her saree. It was loud and did not suit her at all. DD is so pretty that she does not need much adornment in the form of jewellery. Give her light simple jewellery not heavy ones that look like you bought them either off the pavement or on the local train in Bombay. 😆 😆 😆

But here is the most important question? Why were Maan, Dev and Adi not dressed for the engagement like the rest of the family? Were they not invited. It was very very strange and as they say the "devil is in the details". It would have been much more believable if Maan and Co. were actually dressed in engagement finery. 🤔 Plus why did they not wait until all the members are present to do the engagement? Who does this to the son-in-law of the house? Dev was there and Maaneet weren't? Someone would have come to call them. They seemed clueless that the engagement was happening. These are things you need to keep in mind. You keep dropping the ball every single time.

Now last but not the least, the only scene I enjoyed in the eppy today and watched over and over again. This was the last Maaneet scene. For me this was special because Maaneet were behaving like a married couple. They discussed the problem at hand. Geet was worried, Maan comforted her 😉. There was also a lot of touching and hugging involved like couples in love who are newly married. DD and GC were absolutely great in this scene. I especially like the last part where Geet hugs Maan from behind and roars (or rather screechs) like a lion 🤣 🤣

Bottomline your epi was a drag. I could not even watch the whole thing in one sitting. Your actors delivered but your writers did not. Your actors saved the show.

You can still save this thing if you show Nandini saying after this "I never wanted to get married. I wanted to study. You forced me to get married and see where this stands now. I had a dream of higher education but you showed me new dreams of a happy marriage. The dream you showed me shattered, could you please let me fulfill mine. I want to continue my studies." Hearing this Dev decides to keep his love for her a secret until she completes her education. Show Maan whole-heartedly supporting Nandini is this. Geet should also stand up and talk. It is high time Geet opened her mouth in front of Beeji.

A sincere request - please stop painting Dev as a honorable man - he is not one. He may be reformed but he aint no babe in the woods. He has a past and a history and we have not forgotten that. If you want to show him repenting do so - he has to breakdown and say "What I did with Geet, I do not want to see happen to another girl." Until then these as my feelings as eloquently put by my friend Anj "Dev bhi kabhie Daman tha"

So please do not attempt to paint Daman as the bad guy and Dev as the good duy. As far as we are concerned they are both peas from the same pod and both have/had the same intentions. Dev succeeded wherewas Daman will not. So Dev is the bigger culprit of the two.

I hope to see a Maaneet centric storyline from all of you soon. Please could we pretty please see a better storyline. I would also love it if Geet wore better clothes.

Have a nice weekend
Jhan
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Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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WHERE IS EVERYONE... OUR GURTI WON IT GIRLSSS PARTY CELEBRATE ...

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
ITS A MIRACLE...FIRST STAR ONE JODI TO EVER WIN IN ANY AWARD CEREMANY...ITS HISTORY
WE DID IT ...WE DID IT
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
WE PROVED THAT WE FANS WILL NEVER LET OUR GURTI/MAANEET DOWN
😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL
GURTI AKA MAANEET ROCKS...CONGRATS TO GC AND DD TOO FOR THIS HUGE ACHIEVEMENT
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏



Episode Take
Jhan wonderful write-up👏👏👏👏👏..Hope CVs read it...👍🏼

Since we already knew whats coming in the Mahaepisode and were not expecting anything out of it ,so I will say its not bad and even though majority scenes were a filler but Maaneet moments made the episode look cool

Things I liked..
  • Starting Maaneet nok-jhok about the costly ring after the Daman-Radhika fiasco😆 ;Even though I dont appreciate Geet's nonstop nature of hitting MSK But what I loved was even when situation is not romantic ,these two r still glued to each other like a real hubby-wife😳..For a change the whole pulls and pushes and hugs r looking very real and intimate these days😳...
  • Geet trying to brainwash Daman by showing him the price tag of that diamond ring was a hilarious scene😆😆..DD was awesome with her comic touch👍🏼
  • MSK telling Radhika's sob story to Daman and Geet's reaction to it😆 ;Also liked the instant twist which MSK gave in the story telling Daman that he is planning to get Dev married to Radhika🤣 ;Its like how a mother tells her son "So jaa beta warna daaku gabbar aa jaayega"😆 ,same way Devaa is used as a example in such cases where people will say "Beta marriage kar le warna characterless Devaa aa jayeega to marry and screw the girl's life"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...GC was good in that whole scene while narrating the filmy story to Daman and DD too was good with her expressions ..even though scene could hv been short but well its mahaepisode where everything needs to b dragged ,so even this was dragged😆...
  • Twist of Daman outsmarting Maaneet's plan and not falling in the trap👍🏼 ;Viewers r not sure whether Daman already knows that its all MSK and company's plan or it was just his own idea of not falling in the trap of this Radhika chick🤔 ;But chalo I hope MSK and Geet succeeds in their next plan and this track ends asap😆..
  • Maaneet scene in the end where MSK puts flower on Geet and gets in romantic mode was the best scene of today's episode😳😳;Loved the new style of back hug when Geet hugs him from back calling him "mera sher"😳😳 ;Also their hugs and pulls in the scene looked very natural😳 ;Even in serious situations,these two never forget to keep their romance intact😆😳 ..
  • Liked how Geet said mayb Daman is not really bad and loves Nandini😆 ;Well its natural ,if Geet can trust someone like Dev then her trusting Daman is quite natural which proves that she is really very naive and cannot hold grudge against anyone for long time😊...
Turn-offs
Geet should stop hitting MSK in the romantic moments and in the Maaneet scene why Geet tells MSK to go from there or else Biji will see them ??😕 ;The whole partition chapter is over na ??😕 ;So does that mean Maaneet r still staying in separate rooms ??😕...
  • Mamaji and Lucky scenes were funny but somehow they looked very repitative and dragged today🥱..
  • Dev trying to make Nandini laugh does not evoke anything in the viewers heart because we simply cannot accept this Devini rasleela track...at least not at the cost of portraying Dev as a saint where he does not even feel the need to tell Nandini about his own past sins👎🏼..
  • Devaaa once again acted like a looser today when Daman and Nandu ka engagement took place😆 ;All he did was giving the breaking news to Maaneet that their plan flopped😆 ; A guy who does not hv the courage to fight for his love and is 24/7 dependent on his big brother ,does not deserve any life-partner at all👎🏼...
  • Hoping this whole circus ends soon and we get a brand new track revolving around Maaneet 😊
    Episode Rating:7/10..Only Maaneet scenes were worth watching..Gurti and their chipkoo scenes r too good ..rest all were expected fillers😃
    Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago
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    We Got Maneet Ka Chinna Minna Sa scene at the very start. But i think we all was prepared that The Maha Episode will have MAHA crap of Dev, nandini, daman. But still we got ek scene ke saath doosra muft muft😆
    Hahahaha Jugnu even called for the invitation cards. Name on the card will be, Jugnu ustad jassos, amrica waale🤣 and the girls name Vilyati Maime🤣 Thank god Lucky came and told Jugnu mama to atleast talk to the girl whom you want to get married. Warna pata chale that mandap is ready but the girl is marrying to another person😆😆
    I think they were dragging all this too much. I mean that the Daman and MSK scene, where MSK is brainwashing Daman was streched alot. It could have been short.
    Next day morning Geet sitting on a chair and blushing with her hair hawa mein uding😆 I thought asking geet that oh ho what happened last night, did MSK do something. Y are you blushing so hard. And then our MSK enters with flowers ki baarish. Eyelock. I to then sachi me thought ki kuch to hua hau last night. But geet ne saare armano pe paani fair diya by saying that maan what are you doing here, agar maassi ne dekh liya to??😲😕 Bhyi agar massi ne dekh liya to kya. MaanGeet are Officialy a married couple, dekh liya to dekh liya, jab pyar kiya to darna kya.
    I dont understand that y MaanGeet are not sleeping in ONE room, kyun kyun why why, aisa anyaye Kyun, kyun babaji, kyun??😕😆
    Edited by -Dimple- - 14 years ago
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    Jhannn JHhappis de Pappiss🤗

    I warned People MAHA episodes are never MAHA🤣🤣
    Maaneet Lollipop scenes were Cute...
    Devini was just Peuk Peuk
    Waah re Waah Devaaa Nikla tha Nandini ke liye Mil Gayi Radhika PHREEE PHREE...Gawsh the Kismat Deva has na no one else will ever havee...
    Maame's excitement over his shaadi wid Villayati Maim🤣🤣
    Poor Adi has to keep giving money wid laalach of Daaru to keep Maame away from spoilin da plan...
    The Flower Petal scenes were adorable and the biggest turn off is Geet always mentioning beeji and tejji in the middle🥱
    and when Geet asked if Maan had some experience about all this and he says Yes for a sec I thot Sam aunty ka Bulava🤣
    It was a Total Maame-Daman-Ruchika-Devini Epi🥱
    And I know what is even coming🥱Daman is just gonna fleee away wid Radhika Chick and Beeji will be lyk Izzat ka kya hoga and Deva will not miss dagolden chance he will cum 4ward to marry Nando KEEL ME🤢
    Edited by Cute_Ash - 14 years ago
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    All I Can Say Is I Hate Maha Epis😭😭😭

    BUT Maaneet were Good,Liked Last Scene,Worth watching😊
    Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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    OMG.. Devini maha Episode... me so excited to bash them,,,🤣
    res. i mean 😃
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    Sorry havent watched the episode yet!

    Congrats to DD and GC for winning best jodi award!
    Its party time!
    👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    Edited by 49erFan - 14 years ago
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    Kambhakt dev hai jo
    saara soap ki vaat lagaata hai
    hamesha rahta hai
    kabhi nahi jaata hai

    I wish car accident for devini

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