My sazza - yashpal and lachi s luv story

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello all crazies.. here is my sazza..yashpal aur lachi ki luv story.. hope i did justice to it and please conti soon karke toh bilkul bhi math likhna.. jo likhega that person has to continue the story..😆 😆 😆
no warning yahan pe,, they have to continue it
Dedicated to my luvly crazies...😃
Yash pal n lacchi s luv story

The scenario:

Beeji still hates Maan. She wants to get back her house.

Lachi is working in the kitchen at night time and yashpal enters'.

Yashpal tells lacchi that he misses her so much and thats the reason he is there with her tonight. lachi is happy to hear this. she is smiling and then she asks him why he dint come today morning.

Yashpal says that he went for work.. as he is working in someone else home as driver. Suddenly lachi hears her name. she then realizes its none other beeji calling her. She tells aayee beeji and rushes towards the hall leaving yashpal alone in the kitchen.

At hall.

Beeji waiting for lachi. Where the hell did lachi disappear. Whenever there is some work this girl is not there. Meanwhile lucky enters the hall.

(Beeji s family wanted a driver as they found out that balwant is none other than maan singh khuraana.)

Lucky comes home n tells beeji that he met yashpal and he has taken off today from his job. Beeji yells at lucky and tells him that it doesn't matters what yashpal is doing. Our home is under mortgage and you are worried about yashpal. Lachi overhears the conversation. She is surprised to know that yashpal had taken an off today from his work.

Lachi enters the hall and beeji asks her where you were. I have been calling you for past five minutes. What were you doing? Lachi replies beeji that she was preparing lunch for everyone. Beeji says that guest will arrive today at home around 5 in the evening. So you don't disappear. Now go bring butter milk for me. Do it fast. Lachi leaves. Beeji tells lucky what are you doing here? She asks lucky to go and help tejji.

Lachi at kitchen.

Despite knowing yashpal is lying to her she asks him how the day was at the workplace. Yashpal says it was excellent and those people are far better than this family where you are working.

Lachi is irritated with yashpal s reply as she is feeling sad that yashpal lied to her and now he is speaking against beeji s family. She then says after all its my family and you stop praising about your so called new family. And I know my family will always be there for me when I need them the most.

Yashpal is shocked to hear such words from lachi. He says " I just said it for fun. Don't take it so seriously". Yashpal then asks lachi why did beeji call you? Lachi replies guests are going to arrive today evening at our home. Anyways its time you leave before we get caught and I have so much of work today.

Yashpal says I ll leave soon but ll come soon to see you.

Lachi is not bothered about yashpal now as he lied to her that he was working whole day today. She is more interested to know who the guests are. She is working at her kitchen.

Beeji and tejji are waiting at the entrance for the guests to arrive.

Paami 's parents arrive. (Paami s mom is chatter box like pammi and her dad is very calm and quiet person.)

Beeji and tejji welcome them. Beeji tells them good you people came here by the way I hope you guys dint had any problem. Pammi s mom says haan ji haan bahooth problem shroblem ho gaayee thee..Tejji and beeji are surprised. Then pammi s dad tells them that their car had a breakdown while they were travelling. But now things are fine.

Beeji calls lachi and asks her to bring tea and snacks. Meanwhile pammi arrives. Pammi is happy to see her parents and they chit chat for a long time along with tejji and beeji. Paami s mom tells her that if that guy would not have helped us, we would have been stuck in the jungle now. Pammi asks them who was guy was. Pammi s dad thinks and then replies his name is yashpal. He works as a driver at Amritsar. Today he had taken his day off so that he could buy gifts for his girlfriend. But in vain as he met us on the way. His entire day went off in helping us and then he bid good bye to us and left to meet his girlfriend. Lachi overhears this conversation.

Its night time. Yashpal arrives and brings lots of gift for lachi. As lachi knows the truth now, she confronts yashpal and tells him what she overheard today and apologises to him. But this time fate has some other plans for them as lucky sees them. Lucky then tells them not to worry and consoles them that beeji will one day accept their relationship as well as his and preeto s relationship.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yuppie!! me first...
my dear sazaa rani... that was a fast ending... kuch nahi hua indon ke beech mein!!!
bye the way..
(Beeji s family wanted a driver as they found out that balwant is none other than maan singh khuraana.)
i loved this line...😆 poor beeji family!!!!!
excellent!!!
Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res ... will post my comments after reading varsha ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneet1985

Yuppie!! me first...

my dear sazaa rani... that was a fast ending... kuch nahi hua indon ke beech mein!!!
bye the way..
(Beeji s family wanted a driver as they found out that balwant is none other than maan singh khuraana.)
i loved this line...😆 poor beeji family!!!!!
excellent!!!

Fast ending tha na...
kya yar.. maan n geet ke baare mein bolthey toh ending hi nahi hotha
jaa jaake lachi n yashpal ka de diye.. toh obviously... end toh hona hi tha...
actually as the lines for my sazza was 60.. i restricted to 60.. kaun likhey phir aage isko...😆 😆
hai na hima dii
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Varsha...good writing i must say dear...but i agree with deepz that it was too small...anyway its ok...atleast u completed ur sazaa i am happy...how are you btw...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: leverne

Varsha...good writing i must say dear...but i agree with deepz that it was too small...anyway its ok...atleast u completed ur sazaa i am happy...how are you btw...

hey reni.. my sazza was just for 60 lines
and i have actually crossed 60 lines 😆 😆 so thought of stopping it...
btw i posted in ci thread today u n deeps disappeared after tellin hi...me fine yar..
me ll buy mobile sooon n ll come ol at nite time also...
thanks reni.. me leaving now..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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varsha lovely...you guys are so talented...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Varsha kya baat hai awesome dear...

Kya Saaza hai loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bharkha

hey reni.. my sazza was just for 60 lines
and i have actually crossed 60 lines 😆 😆 so thought of stopping it...
btw i posted in ci thread today u n deeps disappeared after tellin hi...me fine yar..
me ll buy mobile sooon n ll come ol at nite time also...
thanks reni.. me leaving now..

love u for that!!!
buy a mob soon... me missing talking to my superfast express😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Varsha...sorry i had to leave...i was in at work so just for sometime i came..then got caught up in work else i wouldn't leave like that...there is too much work pressure...i am happy that ur net problem will be solved..i changed ma net co so next week i might get connection till then using fone...but don't get proper signal at home...but i just hope bro doesn't put password on pc...

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