My sazza - yashpal and lachi s luv story

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divareena

@divareena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

me love varsha's nick name 🤣

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dewdropred

@dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: bharkha

u just said.. write 60 lines luv story on yashpal and lachi...aur kya...

i wrote luv story hi toh...so i ll not be punished...😆 😆 😆

par ending kahan gaya ... meri maa OS ki ending hi nahin ki tunae ,,, aise adhae adhure kaam kyun kiya ...😆

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: dewdropred

oye varsha ki bachi ... rona dhona band kar ... we are not making fun of ur sazaa ...😆 nautanki kahin ki ... CI thread ki drama queen ... dhamki dae rahin hain ... tu humein 🤣I said complete the love story in 60 lines ,... U instead of completing left it in a cliff hanger ... 🤣 court main jayegi tho tu hi phasegi 🤣 coz i asked u 2 complete their story & U did not 🤣ab bol ... jawab de ... meri hazir jawab behna ... 🤣

varshu... varshu meri jaan...

tu hi kethi hi na... hum haq hai tujhe tease karne ka... phir???? budhu...

aise hi bol rahi thi...

wasie bhi mujhe to teri har writing achi lagthi hai...

u know why crazies gives writings as sazaa... ta ki sab ki writing skill ko bahar le aa sake...

hai nai hima...

muaah🤗

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dewdropred

@dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: maneet1985

varshu... varshu meri jaan...

tu hi kethi hi na... hum haq hai tujhe tease karne ka... phir???? budhu...

aise hi bol rahi thi...

wasie bhi mujhe to teri har writing achi lagthi hai...

u know why crazies gives writings as sazaa... ta ki sab ki writing skill ko bahar le aa sake...

hai nai hima...

muaah🤗

yes deepu ... we have the right 2 tease varshu ...

dekhona 😆 ... adhi adhuri sazaa ke bajaye ... 60 lines main sirf yash & lachi ki story likhthi tho chal jatha naa ...

varsha ... we loved what u wrote ... & we would have been even more happy if u had ended it ... yaar ... & u also said tht we should not ask u 2 cont ,,,,😆yeh kahe kaa insaaf hain var ,,,

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divareena

@divareena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

varsha - agree with hima and deeps that we love teasing you yaar.

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Anita Patel

@Anita1118

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Varsha- I loved your sazaa...😊 It was good...tum kisi ki bhi baat math sun na...i liked it😊😊😊😊

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Spandana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: dewdropred

par ending kahan gaya ... meri maa 😭OS ki ending hi nahin ki tunae ,,, aise adhae adhure kaam kyun kiya ...😆

varsha today u might be surprised reading my comments but still i'm supporting u yaar!!!...hima aur deepz bechari hamari varsha ki shikayat karna band kijiye!!!...arre varsha ne toh sirf 60 lines mein lachi aur yash paul ki premkatha likhi jo sabko samaj toh aa rahi hai...agar muje word limit aur lines limit bolke os likne ko kehte toh mein toh paagal ho jaathi!!!...60 lines mein mein toh sirf setting describe karthi aur baaki sab kuch tum sabko hee imagine karna padtha!!!🤣🤣🤣...aur upar se Varsha had to write abt lachi-yashpual not MAANEET!!!...bechari varshu😭😆...now i feel so lucky that all my 3 sazas were related to MAANEET varna mein toh kuch bhi nahi likh paathi!!!😆😆😉...Varsha gr8 job dear!!!👏😆😉...varsha dekhna tu hamesha meri itni taang keechti hai muje hamesha saza dene ke liye utalwali hoti hai aur tu itni spamming karthi hai phir bhi mein aaj teri side le rahi hu!!!😭😆🤣🤣🤣...yeh chamatkar kaise ho gaya babaji?!!!🤣🤣.🤣...aur varsha shayad aajkal MAANEET ki maahi maahi kam mil rahi hai toh isliye shayad hima aur deepz lachi-yashpaul ki lovestory mein itne interested hai!!!...so they r saying no proper ending write more more and all!!!...aisa hee chaltha raha toh hima aur deepz ko jaldi lachi-yashpaul ki sapne aane shuru ho jaayenge!!!🤣🤣🤣...muje pata hai ab hima aur deepz muje peetne waale hai toh varsha tu muje zaroor bachana!!!🤣🤣🤣😆😉

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

varsha loved lachi-yashpaul ki prem kahanai tumhari zubaani!!!😆😉

and so proud of u that u completed ur saza in 60 lines lol and also in ur post u have mentioned that if anyone asks u to continue then they have to continue the story!!!🤣...isliye mein tumse kuch nahi kahungi!!!...muje lachi-yashpaul ki lovestory likne ki khwaish nahi hai muje unhe apni sapno mein nahi dekhne ka hai!!!...i wish for only MAANEET dreams!!!😊😍😉😆

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bharkha

@bharkha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: divareena
me love varsha's nick name 🤣

what is my nick name...

koi toh baatao mujhe bhi 😭 😭 😭

aur ae lo.. reena mere nick name ka bhi udaa rahi hai...

tu barbatti kahin kii...😆 😆

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bharkha

@bharkha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: dewdropred

yes deepu ... we have the right 2 tease varshu ...

dekhona 😆 ... adhi adhuri sazaa ke bajaye ... 60 lines main sirf yash & lachi ki story likhthi tho chal jatha naa ...

varsha ... we loved what u wrote ... & we would have been even more happy if u had ended it ... yaar ... & u also said tht we should not ask u 2 cont ,,,,😆yeh kahe kaa insaaf hain var ,,,