once upon a lovestory part 2 pg 7

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part 1 below

Part 2

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Part 1

Mumbai


Disco R


Maan Singh Khaurana danced with music, his strong muscular body coated with sweat. He swayed with music. Two females danced with him matching him for every moves. He enjoyed the heated movements of their naked skin against his clothes.


His mobile phone vibrated in his pocket, he reluctantly moved to the edge of disco and picked up the phone, the voice was too low and the noise too much. He moved out the basement from back stairs and went up to next level but still it was too much noise. One of his bodyguard moved with him, shadowing his every move but maan barely noticed, he was used to it.


He went out of the disco moving toward his car which would provide him safety. It was dangerous for him to be in open area. He opened his car and slid inside. His bodyguard stood outside. He listened to his grand pa's instructions and gave his own suggestion. That done, he said bye and cut the call.


At that moment, a huge BOOM sounded, maan saw the huge building in front of him crumble. Some one fired bullets at his car, his guard was already dead. He moved his car swiftly out of parking lot and drove at full speed, 2 cars followed him, raining bullets. He opened his cell and dialled a number and said ''trouble'' and closed it.


5 minutes later, the cars still following him, he came to outskirts of mumbai city. The club he had been in, was his own and now was nothing but pile of rubbles. So many people dead, anger mounted inside him, he let the one of the car come closer and banged into it causing the car to smash against the tree, one down one to go.


He sped his car forward and the other followed,but they were out of bullets. Suddenly 5 cars came out of nowhere and circled against that single car, the driver in that car braked. Maan stopped his own car and came out. There was an eerie silence just the sound of maan's feet sounded in the area.


Then, doors of other cars opened and his men came out. On his indication, few of them went and got the trembling guys out of their cars. Maan Singh Khaurana moved toward them, he took out his own pistol from the waistband in his jeans and put it against one man's temple, he asked a single question,''who?''


the guy didn't reply. Maan put the gun on his head and pulled the trigger. Then, he moved to next guy,''who?''


the guy started crying and then, said ''bbbrig haunda''


maan pulled the trigger.


'...1 week later...


Geet haunda looked herself critically in mirror, she was wearing a white colour top and a electric blue colour mini-skirt. She folded her miles long bared creamy legs and put her feet on the dresser and tied the anklet.


She did smoky make up on her eyes and used a cherry colour lip gloss. She was ready to go. She happily moved outside, the string of guards standing outside her room followed. She barely gave them a glance and went outside into her cherry colour sports car. She put her purse on the dash board and drove out.


DISCO ZZZ


geet parked the car and went inside where her friends were waiting for her. Eyes followed her every movement. She didn't give a damn to them. People were already dancing on the dance floor, bodies swaying to the music, she felt her own six inches clad shoe move to the rhythm of music.


She went to dance floor following her friends and started swaying to the music. Her blood soared as music picked up volume. Then, she felt two hands encircle her waist and spin her toward him.


Her eyes clashed to his dark browns, his held challenge, hers accepted. Both of them danced as one.

There movements daring. He rubbed his chest against hers, geet bit him on neck, she was spun around in circles as punishment. She wasn't even dazed when he stopped. She smiled at stranger and hooked one leg against his and moved in daring swirl around his body. In reply, he pasted his body to her, and pushed against a wall. Geet smiled and let his lip lower to hers and when his lips touched hers, she bit him hard on lips, he let her go as reflex.


Geet flew away from him, away from the crowd knowing he will follow, she went upstairs into one of the empty rooms for special guest, not everyone was allowed to come upstairs. He came up within minutes and pinned her against a door. Geet lowered her eyes to hid her triumphant smile.


He asked,''do you know who I am?''


geet smiled a seductive smile which was returned as he lowered his gaze to her full lips. Geet licked them and said,''do you know who I am?''


he smirked at her,''who?''


geet kissed him on jaw and moved to his ear and whispered,''your death.''


she pulled the trigger of gun she had hidden. The only problem was that it didn't fire. Her face lost her colour, she looked up in the eyes which were laughing at her. ''babby sister helping big brother to catch big bad wolf? But now what should wolf do with the babby haunda?


As if to reply to his own question, he took her lips in a hungry kiss...


'...


author note😊


in this story maan is a don while brig is his competition. its different and I will wait for your comments to know that should I continue this


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow you are starting another FF !!!
awsome concept loved it !!!
do continue soon !!!
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awesome..fab..
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I think it's gonna be hot n sizzling...pls continue n add me
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you bet you have to continue!! BUt please also continue that other one you had started-- 'Holi ke rang'!!!
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interesting start
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superb , ...loved it..
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awesome concept
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Poor Maan Singh Khurana...humare pyaar se maare kya kya avatar lena padta hai usey...angry young man se leke Don tak sab roles mein fit hota hai munda. Lage raho Maan bhai...

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