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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love the start.šŸ‘šŸ¼... I like Mafia, guns and violent love story ...Looking forward for updates 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow tat was sooo shockingly amazing maaneet r tooo good plzzz do cont asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2


Part 2



Recap

geet kissed him on jaw and moved to his ear and whispered,''your death.''


she pulled the trigger of gun she had hidden. The only problem was that it didn't fire. Her face lost her colour, she looked up in the eyes which were laughing at her. ''babby sister helping big brother to catch big bad wolf? But now what should wolf do with the babby haunda?


As if to reply to his own question, he took her lips in a hungry kiss...



Geet bit him on lip drawing blood, he moved his face away from her, his body still crowding her against the door and murmured ''bitch.'' geet growled back ,''bas***d.'' a smile lit his face, '' no, my parents were married.''

geet pushed against him but he didn't budge. This continued for 5 minutes, geet trying to move him away from him. Finally, she stopped seeing his amused expression.

Maan opened his mouth to say something but his mobile rang. He moved away from her, his eyes fixed on her face. Then, as if coming out of daze, he looked away from her and called,'' bally, jaswant.''



His two bodyguards came in. maan gestured toward her, ''keep her here, I will be back .''

he turned and strode out of room, and picked up his ringing mobile.

Geet let her body slum and fear cloud her face. She slid down the door, tears streaming down her face and starteded sobbing loudly. The bodyguards exchanged glances. She kept crying loudly and finally after 5 minutes, she calmed down.

She looked around for her purse while sniffing. Her purse was nowhere in sight. Finally, one of the bodyguard picked her purse, which maan had thrown away under the sofa without geet noticing, and gave it to her.

Geet hiccuped and took out a tissue paper. She gave the guard a watery smile and slowly up. Then, she took the small pistol out of the purse and hit one guard in the chest, and as she liked the second one, so she hit him in the leg. Knowing she had only seconds, she closed the door and locked it. There was only one glass window in the room, she broke it with a bullet. She took her heels off and held them in one hand. She slid over the window and jumped outside.



Thank god, they were on the ground floor, disco being in the basement. She ran quickly toward her car while she heard the sound of door breaking, she took out her car keys, god know where were her guards or what had happened to them. She opened her car door when someone jumped over the window, she turned and threw one of her high heels straight at him and slid inside the car. Maan dogged the shoe and ran toward her car but she was already moving the car out of parking lot.



He stood there for sometime, watching her car blur out of his sight. Ahe turned and the heel caught his eyes, he picked it up, a smile hovering his face. She was creative if nothing else. He took the souvenir of their first meeting and went back inside. Not a bad evening, he had her bodyguards to get all information he needed about her brother.



'...2 days later...



geet practised shooting with half heart. She had failed and that did not set well with her. She was used to wining. She sighed and stopped. Her mood at all time low. Then, she felt a hand on her shoulder.



She turned and hugged her brother, brij haunda.''



brij,''what happened to my darling sister?''



geet,'' nothing.''



brij,''want more money?''



brij,''had a fight with someone.'?



Geet said,'' no, just not feeling good.''



'...2 hours later...

geet rolled her eyes as another doctor took blood sample from her. She made a face at the doctor when he was done. The doctor turned to brij, ''she he is in perfect health but I have taken blood samples and I will check to make sure that there is no other complication.''



Brij nodded still worried.

Geet,'' I am fine, I just meant that my mood is not good.''

Brij sat on the bed beside her, and held her hand,'' you are the only family I have got and you are more important to me than anyone or anything. So, I want you to be always happy and smiling.''

geet felt a tug in her heart, she squeezed brig's hand. '' you know I feel same bhai. So, if something is bothering you, it hurts me as well.''



brij,'' I am not worried, everything is fine.''

geet didn't say anything.

Brij,'' these things happen in underworld, there is nothing to be worried.''

Geet,''But Maan Singh Khaurana?''

brij frowned,'' one of my man acted foolishly, he implanted a bomb in a club where he was present. So, situation is bit tight but I have decided to back out. I am happy with controlling Delhi.''

geet gulped thinking about her own recent actions.

Brij,''where are your guards, no one can find them.''



geet, '' I don't know.''

'...

Edited by Ashleydevlin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
really liked the story so far plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooo lovely lovely update yaar loved it a lottt😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part...liked the way geet made an escape...plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb...loved it...cont. soon...I wanted to send u buddy request but its not working...so can plzzz add me in n pm me...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part...add me to ur pm list...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Damn ! slick and smart! loved it. fab update, do post the next part soon.
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it !!!
awsome !!
geet also like don ??

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