dil ka ek azeeb dasthan (OS)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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"omg..see there he is maan singh khurana...my fav.hero...iam fainting...oh how much hot he is " said samatha to her husband james...

james could not take it anymore...he left her in the shop and walked outside not knowing how to react to his obsessed wife...samantha was busy in drooling over maan ...

days passed...with each passing day the obsession of samantha started to increase...she was doing all her duties normally but subconsciously she used to fantasize about maan in her dreams...she herself was unaware of her state of mind...

james got an oppurtunity to meet maan singh khurana on a some work issue...first he was so much hesitant to meet him..but later he thought about professionalism and decided to meet him...

When james reached home from his office...his heart shattered when he looked at the scene where his wife was looking at maan singh khurana photo in a magazine with out an eyeblink...james tried to control his anger...he calmed himself...he then called his wife...

"samantha...samantha..."...

but samantha was so lost in her thoughts of maan that she didnot even responded to her husband...james felt hurt...the women whom he loved more than anything in this world..now started to behave indifferently towards him because of some celebrity...he couldnot digest the fact that his loving wife is behaving in such a way...

james moved closely to her and touched her...she got startled and said "maan" ...that word ripped james heart...he couldnot say anything after that...he slowly strated moving to his room...

samatha got confused and said "james..when did u came..i haven't noticed you..."

james stopped and without turning back he replied..."these days u r failing to notice so many things samantha"

but samantha did not gave any attention to his words...

samantha looked at watch..."omg james...i heard that today maan singh khurana is going to come to open a shopping mall near by..i need to go...i don't want to miss this opportunity to meet him...iam sorry i didn't prepare any lunch...for today u do it outside ..plz...

said these words samantha rushed outside without even bothering to say a "bye" to james who was looking at her in tears when she was leaving...

After she left james took out their wedding album and strated looking at their wedding photos...his heart wrenched ...when he thought about samantha...

"darling...why u became like this..why u r ignoring me...my presence doesnot seems to affect u anymore...u r behaving as if iam not existing..." said james looking at their wedding photo where she was lying in his arms...he slept on the floor hugging the photo tightly...

At evening samantha returned home...feeling very happy that she got an autograph from maan singh khurana...on entering the house she started dancing...and singing...she totally forgot about james...she called her friends who were much younger than her in age and who were similar to her in obsession with maan...they had a conference call on phone...samantha started screaming..."omg..omg..omg...i got his autograph..."..then her friends started saying.."oh my god di u r so lucky"

samantha felt proud with their comments...she added..."why are u feeling so much excited with this autograph...next week i will try to meet him in personnel...if that happens then i don't know what will happen to all of you"

one of her friends replied..."omg...is it true..then plz di..i will also come..."

samantha promised them that she will inform them when she is going to meet maan singh khurana...after 2 hrs of phone conversation..samantha finally cut the call and walked towards the kitchen to prepare dinner...

Suddenly her door bell rang...she sighed and opened the door...she stood speechless...Maan singh khurana was standing before her...her mouth wide opened in shock...

maan : is this Mr.james house?

but samantha was lost...her mind was completely blank...she was not knowing how to respond...she gave a smile...maan looked at her confused...

samantha took along breath and then started screaming ..."omg..omg..omg...maan singh khurana"

maan stood speechless looking at samantha with a horrified expression on his face...james who was sleeping in his room woke up with sudden scream of samantha...

"what was that? why is she screaming...kahi unko kuch hua tho nahi"...james got scared and came running downstairs to know what happened actually...

when james came down and understood the reason for her screaming...james fear for her safety began to fade and pain started to fill his heart...


to be continued...

next part coming shortly...
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sush1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting start. do continue,

pm me the updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very interesting
do cont. soon
do pm me plz
sanu3108 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start

cant wait to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb👏

plz pm meee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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⭐️omg i luv it yaar😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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k... to b frank i didn't get wht u want to convey...

but once i finish i will let u know whether i liked it or not...
is it ok 4 u????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

k... to b frank i didn't get wht u want to convey...

but once i finish i will let u know whether i liked it or not...
is it ok 4 u????


ok..no problem😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Actually I found it quite funny... 😃
I think this is the state of all the husbands out there... when Maan Singh Khurana comes into the pic!😆
Please do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poor James 😒
Samantha is crazy or what 😆 ; she's completely a goner drooling over Maan whan her owh bubby is feeling so low .

Interesting Glitter Star Blue
Do continue ...

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