MG OS - Unfinished Journey - Page 9

Originally posted by: rabia04ful

it was heart touching...

n painful to read n imagine things tht way too..

in the middle some where i felt like not to read it anymore but somehow read it completely...

few things were just mind blowing...

tight hugz...

as u mentioned abt ur personal experience of ur dad...

i just can say may God protect u nur family...

stay blessed n happy

count me in for next story of love too...

Originally posted by: princess163

add me in!

will leave a longer one later!

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oh my god!

I so wanna kill you😡😡

why did you have to make it a sad one? why?

Wait, there is no doubt that it was a great piece, but still, it could have been a happy one😭

You broke my heart🤢

Well, beautifully written!

the depth of their love, portrayed in a flawless way...i mean, its just impossible to even imagine what must have gone through her when she heard that news...to see your world shatter in front of

your eyes...

i can't find words suitable enough to appreciate tis great piece, but please a happy one next!

The title track of the show TERE LIYE is perfect for this one-

Iss duniya mein jaan gawa, tujhe uss duniya mein haasil kar loon...

khushiyaan hazaar tere liye, jannat nisaar tere liye...

tere liye, tere liye...

Love

swati

Originally posted by: preethia

omg amazing os...

all thro i was wondering how she is gonna tell but the climax i was shell shocked...

not sure if his wish was granted or hers where she didnt hv to tell him...

but that was a cruel joke played by god on her...

i feel sorry for them both...

loved it...

Originally posted by: eiya22

😭...phir se rula diya...😭...mein tumsae kati... kati... kati...

plzzz add me to ur pm list... 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: maanddy

Okay ! So, here i'm again back ! 😃

Haila ! You just did something which i was looking for, but little late ! When i was writing this piece, i was looking for some nice and suitable title and just coz i did not find it, i put it on hold for two days ! If i would have slightest idea that you would just simply give it a nice title, i would ask you ! 😳

But, anyways, again so sorry for writing such sad OS ! 😊

But, the thing is that, everyone has their own comfort zone in writing, someone can write funny thing best, someone can romance, happy thing, and mine is, totally sad and dark love storys ! I never find it difficult to write dark and blue endings ! Please do not blame me for my insanity ! 😆

But, the next one, i know i have kept it happy happy, but what i love is dark storys only ! ( You may consider me downright mad and fool ! 😉 )

Coming to this one, as usual, you caught the crux ! What i felt and what i wanted to convey, you said it ! 😊

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and sparing your important time for me and my works ! 🤗

Thanks a ton ! 🤗

Love,

Maddy😊

Ahhh...don't you say sorry for your beautiful work ever...or you earn a smack from me right then

The OS was awesome yaar!

And about you so-called fascination and love for dark...sad stories, ummm...any special reasons?😲😕

hahaha...i would love to write more...

Love

Swati

Originally posted by: princess163

Ahhh...don't you say sorry for your beautiful work ever...or you earn a smack from me right then😡

The OS was awesome yaar!

And about you so-called fascination and love for dark...sad stories, ummm...any special reasons?😲😕

hahaha...i would love to write more...

Love

Swati

frnd...😛

4 comment sooo late......

ur update was

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lots of 4 u.🤗..