MG OS - Unfinished Journey - Page 10

Originally posted by: sukklover

frnd...😛

4 comment sooo late......

ur update was

, , , ..😉😃.. u done a ..👏.. ...👍🏼 i really ...,... ..😃😳. 4 PM me... ... lots of 4 u.🤗.. lov,❤️ Tama

wow...that was awesome...

Originally posted by: maansi85

wow...that was awesome...

i love your style...simple yet effective...loved ur os...tooo gooodd...

pls never ever stop writing...

god! what a touching love story! Maan never did no abt geet's disease and he died before her. but Geet's remaining days! how horrible it would be! i can understand you going thru a painful period to write such poignant love story. though sad it was very touching! thank u for such a beautiful tragic story! you have retained the essence of Maaneet who cannot live without each other! particularly Maan's chr! hats off to u!

Originally posted by: priyachand

god! what a touching love story! Maan never did no abt geet's disease and he died before her. but Geet's remaining days! how horrible it would be! i can understand you going thru a painful period to write such poignant love story. though sad it was very touching! thank u for such a beautiful tragic story! you have retained the essence of Maaneet who cannot live without each other! particularly Maan's chr! hats off to u!

👏😭... should I clap for ur writing or should I cry ... It spoil my happy mood😔 but still I love it❤️...

Awesome story...!!!!!

Everything was so unexpected...esp Maan's death!!!!!
Damn..!!! That was sooo sad... I just dont believe that it really happened...

Awww They wer supposed to meet n Geet was gonna tell him the truth!!!!!
But Alas!!! she dint have to...

Anyways the concept was mind blowing...

Loved the last line which says "she asked God that he granted his wish easily or listened to her prayer simply!!!" This line was so heart wrenching...

Thanx for such an awesome OS!!!!

omg dat was a sad os ;(
but i still liked it
& do pm me :)