The Sun and The Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Naz_Angel
Beautifully written Sylv...amazing.

hope we can see the eclipse soon😃

yes naz!...i'm partial to the beast just planting one on her with out much discussion...but he prefers another approach...so we will have to wait...but it's coming!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Segeant love the picture u painted with ur words(ur comparison for Mannet scenes r wonderful)...and i loved the eclipse thought...👏...sorry for the late catch up...i went to sleep...i see the number of fans is growing for ur daily newspaper

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: undisclosed

mishty..this poem was so what i was thinking...its like we are twins...😳...yes, and the sun just need to hold the moon steady and come closer...even if she wiggles...she will eventualy melt...

Really - wow, I had sent this to a friend for inspiration😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maya_P
Segeant love the picture u painted with ur words(ur comparison for Mannet scenes r wonderful)...and i loved the eclipse thought...👏...sorry for the late catch up...i went to sleep...i see the number of fans is growing for ur daily newspaper

thanks maya...no worries i wentto sleep after i wrote it...it was a pleasent surprise that so many people read it and commented...i'm touched...there are no members like GF members...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

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mishty..this poem was so what i was thinking...its like we are twins...😳...yes, and the sun just need to hold the moon steady and come closer...even if she wiggles...she will eventualy melt...

Really - wow, I had sent this to a friend for inspiration😳

what friend?????????????

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I was searching; you were on a mission,
Then our hearts combined like a star collision,
I had nothing left to lose, you took your time to choose
Then we told each other with no trace or fear that
Our love would be forever...

a Gift! Really? What are you wishing for? 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: undisclosed

when did you start your break?...i'm glad that you like my little blurbs 🤗

Been a week now

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: serenelove

Fantastic syl

thank you!!!!!!!!!🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Ohhh SYlvia dear...what shud I say to praise u ???I'm at loss of words...afterall thats ur art...superbly written...especially the line : The beast will not take NO for an answer...Haiii...fingers crossed...the silsila of missed kisses starts again...Hope this time v get a HIT...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: night13
I was searching; you were on a mission,
Then our hearts combined like a star collision,
I had nothing left to lose, you took your time to choose
Then we told each other with no trace or fear that
Our love would be forever...

a Gift! Really? What are you wishing for? 😉

hey stranger!...love your lines...i have to side with the beast on this one...i want what he's having and preferably from him aswell😆

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